deimos and phobos" the uzumaki ruins and the birth of a demon

Makoto Yuki

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*time skip: three years
ikaru: 13 kekenu: 29
scene: the ruined konoha*



kekenu:.....well..............i guess were heading back to the whirlpool country.......eh...ikaru?

ikaru:.........well........i guess the good guys dont always win....sure


kekenu:....do you want a ride?

ikaru:....im not a baby................

kekenu:............well im sorry..i just wante*inturupted*

ikaru:.......you lied to me.........you said that the good guy always win......*crying*....what did the do to deserve this kekenu????

kekenu:.....ikaru.........there is something i have to tell you.....one man's justice is another man's punishment,ikaru.....madara thought konoha deserved this.....we cant judge him for that...do you want a ride?

ikaru:.....h-how how could you side with this monster?????

*ikaru runs away crying*

kekenu:*running*.....ikaru!!!!!!!!!!......wait!!!!!!!!

*ikaru stops looks and sees madara so he hides, kekenu sees madara and stops*

madara:...well.......thank you kekenu.........your services are no longer needed....unless*interupted*

kekenu:...unless what????

madara:..unless you want to join the akatsuki????....we could really need your powers...what do you say?

kekenu:....no way in hell am i going to join you......you already devistated my little brother by killing inecente people....madara..your a monster

madara:*grabs kekenu*.....well i am many things.........but call me a monster for paying my debt to this horrid country..........than your just stupid.*throws kekenu through a tree*

ikaru:.....brother!!!!!!!!!!!!!

madara:..well...well...what do we have here.........a ease dropper*grabs ikaru* now we cant have that.....can we......

kekenu:.....put him down!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!......odoma rasengan!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


*madara dropped ikaru and went intangable...............kekenu grabed ikaru and ran off*



*they arive at the uzumaki clan's entrance and saw it was ruined also*

kekenu:...*looks at the damage*...well...these burn marks are singed....this could have happened at any time we were gone....

ikaru:...how doesn't this bother you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

kekenu:..........

ikaru:....agh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

*a blast of black chakra knocks kekenu away*


ikaru:....how...doesn't....this.......bother.......you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

kekenu:....it bothers me alot..........i just dont show it....i cant show weakness......or we both die.... if a ninja senses weakness we coul*gets hit by ikaru*

ikaru:......just shut up!!!!!!!!

kekenu:.......ikaru...just calm down.......

ikaru:......no!!!!!!!!!! *runs towards keknu*.......agh!!!!!!!!!!!!!.......rasengan!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


*as ikaru was forming the rasengan turned black*

ikaru:........agh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

*ikaru hits kekenu and sends him flying 30 feet, ikaru's chakra went down*

ikaru:*whispers*.....oh no...what have i done....*crying*

kekenu:*gets up*....ikaru......i told you to calm down!!!!!!!!!!!

ikaru:*talking to himself*....i gotta get out of here........*talking to kekenu*....goodbye brother*runs off*


kekenu:....ikaru....ikaru....*crying*..ikaru!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 

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not a bad beginning, could use less .......................... lol
im hooked already but the characters need more development if you want more readers.
black rasengan=awesome
awaiting more,
ES the 3rd
 
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