[Mystery] Define, "The End"

[Cornballs227]

Darkness, Silence, loss of breath,
Is this is it like, moments before death?
No movement, no feeling, nor taste nor sound,
What is it like, going 6 feet down?

A scrapped knee, or an arm with a sprain,
is death really something without any pain?
Thoughts rampant like bullets, going through the head,
Trying to get you out and away from the death bed.

Light is fading, and darkness consumes,
nearing closer to an inevitable doom.
They are clinging to life, for it is a precious thing,
But this life is no more, just listen to the bells ring.

 

[Nonomi]

I like this. Nicely done Corn

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[farhca]

nice one.

btw though, you meant death's bed there right?

 

[I m an Ass]

the end is only the beginning of all mystery in this world we are energy and energy never dies
the end is a start of a new aventure

 

[Filo]

for whom the bell tolls nice subtle reference

nice one.

btw though, you meant death's bed there right?

check out the wiki the OP makes a lot of hints towards this poem by Hemingway

 

[farhca]

for whom the bell tolls nice subtle reference

check out the wiki the OP makes a lot of hints towards this poem by Hemingway

Will do, thanks.

 

[Cunning Linguist]

for whom the bell tolls nice subtle reference




check out the wiki the OP makes a lot of hints towards this poem by Hemingway

It reads like a Hemingway poem. Good job OP

 

[Rikudoou naruto]

this could be a rap song

 

[Cornballs227]

All of your replies mean a lot to me, thank you very much! Though, I never heard of Hemingway, actually. These were just thoughts spewing out my head, normally the thoughts before I fall asleep at times.

 

[NaNaNaaaaa]

Excellent poem, you have natural talent...I'm so jealousLOL

 

[Kishi Uzumaki]

Is it really the end that we awaits....
what's really beyond,
is it just memories that fades...
or a new life in it's wake,
there's no words that explains...
feelings of things..that meets an end .