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[P3ĮÑ]

Cound't think of a creative thread title. hello there, I was incredibly bored and played around with an old render saved on my pc, now I wasn't really working on it but just, like, messing with the background and other things, the final result was actually not bad so I decided to share.

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[Αizen]

Not bad

 

[Deliquesce]

awesom !!!!!!!

 

[P3ĮÑ]

Thanks. Just saw I forgot to erase the shit on top right hand of the render, god I'm stupid.

 

[Aømine]

Looks cool man.

 

[Azu]

Hmm... Pretty weird size, allows little work in the BG.

But, anyway, focal has strong blue light on itself and with that green light behind just looks strange. But at the front of it green looks nice, so maybe you could have tried split color scheme. The main light source is to white-ish, lower the opacity, work on blending the main light, not just putting it there. Also, imo, you should have worked a bit more at blending the focal doing things at front. Text is no, no... Look up at tutorials Horus is making, this is his kind of focal and I think you are having similar style as he.

Good job and KIU! :bouncy:

 

[P3ĮÑ]

Hmm... Pretty weird size, allows little work in the BG.

But, anyway, focal has strong blue light on itself and with that green light behind just looks strange. But at the front of it green looks nice, so maybe you could have tried split color scheme. The main light source is to white-ish, lower the opacity, work on blending the main light, not just putting it there. Also, imo, you should have worked a bit more at blending the focal doing things at front. Text is no, no... Look up at tutorials Horus is making, this is his kind of focal and I think you are having similar style as he.

Good job and KIU! :bouncy:

As always, your criticism and input is key to my progress so thanks a lot. I will improve on the points you mentioned.

 

[Torche]

Looks good! Only thing I don't particularly like is the green text; the style.