Death of Peace draft

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Chapter 1: No More Peace

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Its been fifteen years since the Fourth Shinobi War, the world had finally achieved peace. The Land of Fire was probably the most peaceful of all.But there is someone that wants to put an end to this peaceful world and he has many followers.


Its a stormy day in the Leaf village. At the Academy all students but one is paying attention to their sensei.

Udon: The reason for four men squads are-
Theres a knock on the door
Udon: Yes. Come in. Wait for a moment class.
A man with hokage robes enters the classroom.
Udon: Hello Kakashi-sama. How are you today?
Kakashi: I'm doing well. How about you?
Udon: The same sir. Class say hello to Hokage-sama.
The entire class says hello except the one child that is sleep.
Udon: What brings you here sir?
Kakashi: I just came to see if your class would enjoy coming to see the me name the new hokage.
Udon: We will be there sir. I wouldn't missed for the world. He has been dreaming of this day since he was the age of these children.
(Kakashi smiling): Yes he has. These students are pretty lucky aren't they?
Udon: Why do you ask?
Kakashi: Well they get to see the ceremony for the new hokage and they graduate the after.
(Kakashi looks up at the sleeping student and sighs.)
Kakashi: Takumi Hyuga wake!
(Takumi hops out of his seat and falls to the floor.)
Kakashi: Takumi, why did you fall asleep in class?
Takumi: We all graduate in two days. I just don't see the point in paying attention. I mean all that Udon sensei is doing is reviewing over everything he has taught us. Plus I'm the top student in the class so whats the point.
???: Don't I always tell you ignorance will be the death of you.
(Takumi angered): Who even asked you Hiro?! Stay out of this.
Hiro: Also the only reason why you have you're top academy student is because Udon sensei has a soft side for you. If it wasn't for that you would be number two. Under me.
The rest of class bursts out in laughter.
(Kakashi looks at Udon and smiles): Nothing like family rivalry, huh?
(Udon smiles): Nope

End

Takumi and Hiro are both members of the Hyuga clan.

Takmi is the son of Neji. I was going with a little bit of irony. Neji is a focused shinobi while his son is a care free guy. Even though he is still amazingly strong.

I can't decide who Hiro will be. I want him to be Hinata's son or Takumi's twin brother. Which should he be? He is also incredibly strong.

Also this was just a draft. I want to see what everyone thinks of it before I go to deep into it.

I probably still make them though. Even if everyone hates it. xdxd
 
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