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johnny scars

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that looks really good! could do with a bit more darker colours to make them stand out but overall its really good! + rep to you!
 

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yup. you're on my Note
 

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looks awesome, nice job :win:
 

Lan Fan

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You should repeat the lines in order to make it look more smooth, and also to rotate the image- it takes 0.001 sec to do it :yeah:
Good work, though. Pictures become better and better if devoted to so. or something imo.
 

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Good good, but here's an advice.

Add more strokes. You know those gentle ones.

Drawers love strokes.
 

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It's pretty decent. As someone here already said, try out some darker pens and repeat the lines.
 

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Make it landscape but other than it's awesome. :D
 

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It's alright, keep practicing and you'll be able to do even better.
 
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