mattchew1997
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First fanfiction i have made.....ever. it will suck
here goes:
Prologue:
in front of konoha ninja school. it's a dark, cloudy night and shadows are cast everywhere from the weak light. A girl, Hinata, is walking by when she hears a noise.
Hinata stops and turns to the sound...
Hinata: 'Is anyone there"? "Hello"?
after no answer Hinata continues to head home. another noise goes off behind her and she turns towards it.
Hinata: " hello, is anyone there?!"
terrified, Hinata starts running down a side alley to get to her house quicker.She stumbles out of the alley and runs down the street. she stumbles and falls, hands shooting out to protect her face.a kunai comes out of the shadows and pins her to the ground.
Hinata: "HELP ME!!!!!!!!"
Hinata lets out a blood curdling scream before it is cut of by the blade that ends her life....
Chapter 1
setting:
detective office but like a Japanese style to it like the paper doors and stuff.
Tenten is at the front desk while Naruto is in the office. Naruto (the detective) is dressed in an orange and black trench cloak open at the waist. He is sitting laid back in his leather desk chair with his boots on the desk. he goes to pickup a request for a C rank investigation when an old friend walks into the foyer outside the office. Naruto starts to listen in on the conversation.....
Tenten: "Why hello Mr. Choji, what can I do for you today"?
Choji: "Nothing Tenten I'm here on official business. the Hokage wants Naruto to investigate a homicide involving a girl from the Hyuuga clan. Can I see the detective"?
Tenten: "hold on let me see if hes taking any cases today".
Naruto walks out of his office and walks into the foyer.
Naruto: "Dont worry Tenten, I'm already out. If anyone calls tell them I'm already on a case."
Naruto motions to Choji towards the door. they both walk out into the shade of a tree in front of the office.
Naruto: "I heard what happened to the Hyuuga girl on the news. Poor kid".
Choji: "Yeah. But what the news didn't mention was that she was rich beyond belief. There were so many notes in her purse it was shameful."
Naruto: "Well that rules out one option."
Choji: "What?!" he looks at Naruto and stares. "You figure something out already"?!
Naruto: "Yeah. Based on the information you just gave me ruled out one of the motives: The murderer was originally a thief looking for money. But since the purse was full of money and none of it was taken, it rules out that theory. Either that or the murderer had no time to get the money.
Choji: "wow, how did you figure out that so fast"?
Naruto: "Easy, its basic knowledge in a homicide case."
Choji: "wow"
Naruto starts walking down the road, leaving choji behind. he then turns around.
Naruto: "Choji! Come on and hurry up. i need to look at the crime scene!"
he then continues walking down the road
Choji: "hey, wait up!"
P.S. i did not makeup the characters from naruto, just used there profile for this fanfiction. the characters have been changed to suit the FF needs
- did this cause of copywright thing lol. im paranoid there gonna suehere goes:
Prologue:
in front of konoha ninja school. it's a dark, cloudy night and shadows are cast everywhere from the weak light. A girl, Hinata, is walking by when she hears a noise.
Hinata stops and turns to the sound...
Hinata: 'Is anyone there"? "Hello"?
after no answer Hinata continues to head home. another noise goes off behind her and she turns towards it.
Hinata: " hello, is anyone there?!"
terrified, Hinata starts running down a side alley to get to her house quicker.She stumbles out of the alley and runs down the street. she stumbles and falls, hands shooting out to protect her face.a kunai comes out of the shadows and pins her to the ground.
Hinata: "HELP ME!!!!!!!!"
Hinata lets out a blood curdling scream before it is cut of by the blade that ends her life....
Chapter 1
setting:
detective office but like a Japanese style to it like the paper doors and stuff.
Tenten is at the front desk while Naruto is in the office. Naruto (the detective) is dressed in an orange and black trench cloak open at the waist. He is sitting laid back in his leather desk chair with his boots on the desk. he goes to pickup a request for a C rank investigation when an old friend walks into the foyer outside the office. Naruto starts to listen in on the conversation.....
Tenten: "Why hello Mr. Choji, what can I do for you today"?
Choji: "Nothing Tenten I'm here on official business. the Hokage wants Naruto to investigate a homicide involving a girl from the Hyuuga clan. Can I see the detective"?
Tenten: "hold on let me see if hes taking any cases today".
Naruto walks out of his office and walks into the foyer.
Naruto: "Dont worry Tenten, I'm already out. If anyone calls tell them I'm already on a case."
Naruto motions to Choji towards the door. they both walk out into the shade of a tree in front of the office.
Naruto: "I heard what happened to the Hyuuga girl on the news. Poor kid".
Choji: "Yeah. But what the news didn't mention was that she was rich beyond belief. There were so many notes in her purse it was shameful."
Naruto: "Well that rules out one option."
Choji: "What?!" he looks at Naruto and stares. "You figure something out already"?!
Naruto: "Yeah. Based on the information you just gave me ruled out one of the motives: The murderer was originally a thief looking for money. But since the purse was full of money and none of it was taken, it rules out that theory. Either that or the murderer had no time to get the money.
Choji: "wow, how did you figure out that so fast"?
Naruto: "Easy, its basic knowledge in a homicide case."
Choji: "wow"
Naruto starts walking down the road, leaving choji behind. he then turns around.
Naruto: "Choji! Come on and hurry up. i need to look at the crime scene!"
he then continues walking down the road
Choji: "hey, wait up!"
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