Dead Art

[Omega]

Dead Art
I'm an artist but my pictures aren't physical
My mind's a canvas and your pen stay on my mental
Red ink never got me down confidence subliminal
Subliminal confidence spread by similar weasels
This your prototype and you type billion just another me
another me stuck in the crowd creativity too loud
If I speak loud enough maybe I'll get a crown
Then I could look down
at the sun beating a dragon now
To sleep under his brothers make a wish when he shoots
If I had one wish I would wish for to
To understand a speech you can't hear
To understand an understanding too smeared
between two people who never knew fear
but new fears arise and we still die clear
clear headed simple minded or maybe just content
Content with the context of death sent-
enced to a generation of youth subjected to the explicit
and that's just life and we all paid her a visit.

(Not sure how may heads this might fly over but yeah I don't mind any questions. I was sleepy and was feeling some type a way)

 

[A$AP Wap]

good job

 

[Power Bottom]

Nice poem

 

[Omega]

good job

Nice poem

Thanks guys. Getting into poetry of late. Good way to vent.

 

[Waindo]

"but new fears arise and we still die clear
clear headed simple minded or maybe just content
Content with the context of death sent-
enced to a generation of youth subjected to the explicit
and that's just life and we all paid her a visit."

That finale blew my mind! I'm seriously itching to flow out something like this, I didn't do any freestyle/hhop writing for long.
Awesome piece of work! I hope to see more of you here!

 

[Omega]

"but new fears arise and we still die clear
clear headed simple minded or maybe just content
Content with the context of death sent-
enced to a generation of youth subjected to the explicit
and that's just life and we all paid her a visit."

That finale blew my mind! I'm seriously itching to flow out something like this, I didn't do any freestyle/hhop writing for long.
Awesome piece of work! I hope to see more of you here!

Yeah this one was basically a freestyle. That line came out of nowhere as I was typing. xD, as far as pure flor, syntx, style etc. I really liked this one. Im really glad you liked it. LOL

 

[fiend]

Nice one dude and as Waindo said end was brilliant.

 

[Omega]

Nice one dude and as Waindo said end was brilliant.

Thanks man. I liked that part as well. xD

 

[Hotaruko]

amazing work! i really liked this part

If I had one wish I would wish for to
To understand a speech you can't hear
To understand an understanding too smeared
between two people who never knew fear
but new fears arise and we still die clear

and also the part that waindo quoted was really good too

 

[Omega]

amazing work! i really liked this part

If I had one wish I would wish for to
To understand a speech you can't hear
To understand an understanding too smeared
between two people who never knew fear
but new fears arise and we still die clear

and also the part that waindo quoted was really good too

It was pretty fun writing that part. I liked it as well. It flowed well into the last verse. Most of the time I am writing these off the top of my head like a freestyle and I surprise myself xD. The better ideas came toward the end this time. xD