Lord of the Kings
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A poem i just invented in my mind, please giving me honest answer. I will appreciate in every comment, rep if you like or love. 
That's all! 
Dawn of Humanity
Day to day, week to week, year to year.
Decay treads as corruption rules;
Tears of fear since Lear fears,
Since arrogance of night comes, tools for fools;
Even absorbing a slice of life, forbidden !
Restrictions to feed the mechanism of doom;
Ridin’ on the thread of fate, thou may’st find haven.
Until time passes, a object of time changes curse of doom;
Alteration of fate is such an augmentation!
From days to days, we eat decay so life;
As master plan found, salvation found in augmentation,
Uneasy world waits to decapitate us but life ties.
Until the end of time, we tread in this world.
New Earth rebuilt as we toward the new works!
That's all! Dawn of Humanity
Day to day, week to week, year to year.
Decay treads as corruption rules;
Tears of fear since Lear fears,
Since arrogance of night comes, tools for fools;
Even absorbing a slice of life, forbidden !
Restrictions to feed the mechanism of doom;
Ridin’ on the thread of fate, thou may’st find haven.
Until time passes, a object of time changes curse of doom;
Alteration of fate is such an augmentation!
From days to days, we eat decay so life;
As master plan found, salvation found in augmentation,
Uneasy world waits to decapitate us but life ties.
Until the end of time, we tread in this world.
New Earth rebuilt as we toward the new works!
