DarkNexus (bio awaiting approval)

Vexion

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Basic Information

Name: Kumori Kitsune
Nickname: DarkNexus
Gender: Male
Age: 25
Clan: None

Looks: Athletic build with long black hair. Stands six feet wieghs 185.

Personality: A kind soul but deep down he is very vengeful and jelalous.

Village Info

Village of Birth: Leaf Village
Village of Alliance: Sand Village

Rank//Chakra Info

Ninja Rank: Genin
Specialty: Swords
Elements: None
Your ninjutsu: None




Background Info

History: Kumori Kitsune was born in a village on the outskirts of Konoha. He was raised to cherish his family and fellow villagers. At age twelve his mother passed and his father mentally could not deal with the burden of being alone so he commuted suicide. Kumori walked in and found his father lying in a pool of his own blood. At age thirteen Kumori set out on his own learning the way of the sword as he traveled the land. Twelve years later to this present day Kumori Kitsune appears happier on his own travelling the land learning the lay of the land. His blade Kage Kitsune (Shadow Fox) was given to him by his fathers best friend Chibisama Kojiro.

Other


Theme Song and Background Music: Chimaira - Destroy and Dominate

Battles

Won: 0
Lost: 0
 

Sefirosu Masamune

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Yes much better than the first time. this is actually pretty decent. could use more detail but this is good for a first bio
 

drxdroopy

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Much better. You should add a pic though
 

-Thad-

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I'd advice removing 'Swords' from your specialty, as you've had no training in the art, and to be a master of the sword, I believe you must be a Samurai from the land of iron, which requires a specific rank...
As well, put a single element you desire training in under your 'Elements' portion. Simply choose an element (Fire, Water, Earth or Wind), and then simply put a note stating that you require training in said element...
(Ex. - Fire [Requires Training])

Aside from that, as mentioned before, it is very plain, but it is at least clean.. no pun intended...
 

Vexion

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*dropped* made a new one
 

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Nexus? Is that you?
 

Vexion

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Different one. I'm new lol
 
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