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Alright, Thanks ^__^ I've chosen this one.

(Meiton: Gōsuto Hanabi) Dark Release: Ghastly Fireworks
Type: Offensive
Rank: A-rank
Range: Short to Mid range
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description:
After the absorbing the enemy's energy based technique using Dark Release: Inhaling Maw the user will mold the chakra from Inhaling Maw into their left arm, then user extends their arm forward and releases ghosts from a sphere in his/her left wrist. They seem to follow a set and guided path and they differentiate from it but they can cause enough damage to an opponent by slamming and leaving deep burning marks onto there stomach. The ghosts the user fires are only small (about two feet wide and five feet long) and shoots what seems to be an endless wave of Dark Fireworks.

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Alright, Thanks ^__^ I've chosen this one.

(Meiton: Gōsuto Hanabi) Dark Release: Ghastly Fireworks
Type: Offensive
Rank: A-rank
Range: Short to Mid range
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description:
After the absorbing the enemy's energy based technique using Dark Release: Inhaling Maw the user will mold the chakra from Inhaling Maw into their left arm, then user extends their arm forward and releases ghosts from a sphere in his/her left wrist. They seem to follow a set and guided path and they differentiate from it but they can cause enough damage to an opponent by slamming and leaving deep burning marks onto there stomach. The ghosts the user fires are only small (about two feet wide and five feet long) and shoots what seems to be an endless wave of Dark Fireworks.

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(Meiton: Gōsuto Hanabi) Dark Release: Ghastly Fireworks
Type: Offensive
Rank: A-rank
Range: Short to Mid range
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description:
After the absorbing the enemy's energy based technique using Dark Release: Inhaling Maw the user will mold the chakra from Inhaling Maw into their left arm, then user extends their arm forward and releases ghosts from a sphere in his/her left wrist. They seem to follow a set and guided path and they differentiate from it but they can cause enough damage to an opponent by slamming and leaving deep burning marks onto there stomach. The ghosts the user fires are only small (about two feet wide and five feet long) and shoots what seems to be an endless wave of Dark Fireworks.
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Interesting choice. This is for saying thanks for being my first student or so to speak.

Okay with this, you'll need to use the canon jutsu Dark Release: Inhaling Maw, then with the absorbed chakra you will extend you left arm forward, make a small orb in your hand that will release a heap of dark ghosts that are on a guided path once they reach there target, the target will get servery burned by the ghosts.

Also, with this jutsu it will have to be used as your last move out of the 3 moves you can perform per-turn since it's a endless stream.

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One/three advantages and disadvantages:
  • 1. Great widespread justu. With the amount of dark release balls flying towards the opponent it could provide a great distraction.
  • 2. Requires no handseals , and must be done right after absorbing a technique. Which could startle the opponent.
  • 3. Only mid range, if this justu was long range it would be very versatile. Also needed to use inhaling maw prior to usage is a bad thing.
How you would use it in battle: I'd use this as a distracton which could actually win the fight. The large amount of dark chakra will without a doubt grab my opponents attention, leaving him open for other attacks.
How you would counter it: To counter I'd use earth spear. And just eat(not actually lol) the dark chakra as it hits me.
How you perform it (with as much detail as you can): As a random A ranked fireball comes from the sky, I raise my hand consuming the chakra and energy of the fireball. I then turn my attention to a field of trees, where i then extend my left arm forward while condensing the absorbed chakra into my left hand. That releases a clutter of dark ghosts that when reaches and attacks the opponent could deal major damage due to burns.
 

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One/three advantages and disadvantages:
  • 1. Great widespread justu. With the amount of dark release balls flying towards the opponent it could provide a great distraction.
  • 2. Requires no handseals , and must be done right after absorbing a technique. Which could startle the opponent.
  • 3. Only mid range, if this justu was long range it would be very versatile. Also needed to use inhaling maw prior to usage is a bad thing.
How you would use it in battle: I'd use this as a distracton which could actually win the fight. The large amount of dark chakra will without a doubt grab my opponents attention, leaving him open for other attacks.
How you would counter it: To counter I'd use earth spear. And just eat(not actually lol) the dark chakra as it hits me.
How you perform it (with as much detail as you can): As a random A ranked fireball comes from the sky, I raise my hand consuming the chakra and energy of the fireball. I then turn my attention to a field of trees, where i then extend my left arm forward while condensing the absorbed chakra into my left hand. That releases a clutter of dark ghosts that when reaches and attacks the opponent could deal major damage due to burns.

Well done, and there you go we are done here. Congrats once more. ^.^
 

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0. Dark Releas/Meiton is an advanced nature kekkei genkai that can be used to absorb, manipulate, and release chakra taken from an opponent. Chakra is absorbed through the upper square, while it is released and manipulated through the lower. Just wanted to make it a little more clear. But you're pretty much correct on that point.

1. Good.

2. That is correct.

3. Yes, Hiruko is the one who uses it, he used it via the Chimera Technique, to change his chakra type to Dark, Steel, Swift and Storm.

Okay, I shall explain the strength and weaknesses of our KG.

Since Dark release isn't solid based it's matter based, so Dark release is strong against Fire, wind, lighting and raw chakra because? Yes, they are matter based. Another thing, Dark is able to absorb things like; Storm, Dust, Scorch and even raw Sage Jutsu.

But when release your opponents technique, if your opponent blocks using any of the following; The four obvious ones; Fire, Lighting, Wind and Raw chakra along side these more uncommon ones; Sand, Rain, Steam or Boil you will have the upper hand, since dark just eats right though matter based chakra.

While Dark isn't strong against Water and Earth since they are both solid and, lets be real you can't absorb something that is solid, just doesn't work like that. Earth suffers double strength towards the absorbing ability of Dark Release (meaning that only an S-Rank Dark release can absorb a B-Rank Earth technique)

And again when release your opponents technique. If your opponent blocks using any of the following; The two obvious ones Earth and Water as well as; Solid Ice, Steel, Wood or Lava. They will overpower your dark as they are solid based.

The reason I like dark release, it gives you the chance to absorb your opponent attack and redirect it stronger.
Let me ask you this, what is the usual color of dark based chakra attacks?

What hand are you going to be absorbing jutsu with?
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Do you understand? Any questions?

I expect much more detail.

Meiton is a KG in which the user acts almost as an Organic Fuuinjutsu of sorts, absorbing and releasing physical and spiritual energies (chakra). Because it works, in a sense, like a Fuuinjutsu, the absorbed chakra doesn't actually enter the users Chakra Circulatory System (like what happens with the Rinnegan's absorption abilities) but its kept in the KG mark, as if stored in a separate space within the body. One can say the squares (upper and lower) are much like portals to the sealing space but the sealing space has no connection with the user's chakra. Because of this, the user has little control over the form he can release said chakra. As he releases it, it manifests in a raw energy form rather than a specific elemental one.

Your weaknesses are wrong or btter put, wrongly explained.

Dark Release is strong towards energy based elements because energy absorption is the core ability of dark release. Not only that but Energy is easier to absorb and manipulate than matter... Matter based elements are Water and Earth as well as Steel, Wood, Ice, etc.

Dark Release

Absorption ability:
Weak to: Earth and Water. Dark Release is used to absorb and redirect chakra and energy in general. This makes it so that while it can absorb the chakra in Earth and Water techniques, it will have a difficult time absorbing the Earth itself or the Water produced by techniques since it doesn't work exactly like a Fuuinjutsu technique. Earth suffers double strength towards the absorbing ability of Dark Release (meaning that only an S-Rank Dark release can absorb a B-Rank Earth technique).

Strong to: Raw chakra, Fire, Lightning, Wind and other forms of raw energy like Storm, Dust, Scorch or even raw Sage Jutsu. Raw chakra absorption and redirection is the core of Dark Release, making it gain double strength towards it (B-Rank Dark overcomes S-Rank Raw Chakra).

Release ability:
Weak to: Earth and Water. Both elements have substance and density to defend from raw forms of energy like those produced by dark release after the absorption of a technique. Other solid elemental forms may serve the same purpose, such as Solid Ice, Steel, Wood or Lava

Strong to: Wind and Fire. Both elements lack the substance and strength needed to actually overcome or even deal with the raw form of energy produced from dark release after absorbing a technique. Other intangible or less tangible elements such Snow (basically, snow based ice techniques), Sand, Rain, Steam, Boil, etc may also be susceptible of being overcome by the raw energy of Dark Release.


While your end result may be almost correct, the explanation to the "why" behind it is not.

Cibeer, do you have any questions regarding the KG itself?
 

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I expect much more detail.

Meiton is a KG in which the user acts almost as an Organic Fuuinjutsu of sorts, absorbing and releasing physical and spiritual energies (chakra). Because it works, in a sense, like a Fuuinjutsu, the absorbed chakra doesn't actually enter the users Chakra Circulatory System (like what happens with the Rinnegan's absorption abilities) but its kept in the KG mark, as if stored in a separate space within the body. One can say the squares (upper and lower) are much like portals to the sealing space but the sealing space has no connection with the user's chakra. Because of this, the user has little control over the form he can release said chakra. As he releases it, it manifests in a raw energy form rather than a specific elemental one.

Your weaknesses are wrong or btter put, wrongly explained.

Dark Release is strong towards energy based elements because energy absorption is the core ability of dark release. Not only that but Energy is easier to absorb and manipulate than matter... Matter based elements are Water and Earth as well as Steel, Wood, Ice, etc.


While your end result may be almost correct, the explanation to the "why" behind it is not.

Okay. But I am going to be honest, that was never explained to me ever at all (not trying to make excuses or whatnot. I explained it the best I could). But I buggered up. .-. Shame on me.

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Well, congrats... Master Nathan. Just be sure to polish the Why behind the How To.
 

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Well, congrats... Master Nathan. Just be sure to polish the Why behind the How To.

Huh. O_O Don't you worry, I shall. I won't disappoint. Thank you, Scorps. :D
 

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I expect much more detail.

Meiton is a KG in which the user acts almost as an Organic Fuuinjutsu of sorts, absorbing and releasing physical and spiritual energies (chakra). Because it works, in a sense, like a Fuuinjutsu, the absorbed chakra doesn't actually enter the users Chakra Circulatory System (like what happens with the Rinnegan's absorption abilities) but its kept in the KG mark, as if stored in a separate space within the body. One can say the squares (upper and lower) are much like portals to the sealing space but the sealing space has no connection with the user's chakra. Because of this, the user has little control over the form he can release said chakra. As he releases it, it manifests in a raw energy form rather than a specific elemental one.

Your weaknesses are wrong or btter put, wrongly explained.

Dark Release is strong towards energy based elements because energy absorption is the core ability of dark release. Not only that but Energy is easier to absorb and manipulate than matter... Matter based elements are Water and Earth as well as Steel, Wood, Ice, etc.




While your end result may be almost correct, the explanation to the "why" behind it is not.

Cibeer, do you have any questions regarding the KG itself?

Nope, I don't have any questions scorpsy. Thanks again Nathan. ^_^
 
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