[Approved] Dark Necros (improved)

[Truemadara]

Basic Information Name: Dark Necros

Nickname: Dark Ninja

Gender: male

Age:20

Clan:

Looks: White hair, Black eyes, red pupils, scar on right eye, A Infinite symbol appears on his
forhead whenever he is in danger

height:6'5

Clothes: wears black bodysuit with black mask as everyday outfit (pic 1 with scythe), And wears no mask and wears an outfit tht follows a skeleton theme(pic 2) black and white

Shoes: black boots

Hands: spiked ninja gloves (pic 1) skeleton ninja gloves (pic 2)

Personality: He is very sarcastic and likes to hang around villages despite being a rogue nin.He usually has a dispassionate appearance, rarely showing emotion and keeping his composure even when surprised or irritated

Village Info.Konohagakure

Village of Birth:Konohagakure

Village of Alliance:Konohagakure

Rank//Chakra Info.

Ninja Rank: Genin

Specialty:N/A

Elements: Earth (needs Training)

Your ninjutsu:
(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)

(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.

(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)

Background Info.

History: Konohagakure's most Gifted ninja, The shadow warrior called Necros, used to be known as a peaceful and kindhearted man.He ended up defecting from the village in pursuit of his own self-seeking desires, such as learning every technique possible. Necros stood out as a prodigy and his talents, knowledge, and determination were considered by his sensei a prodigy only seen once in a generation.
His dreams are to reputedly possessed of all manner of mysterious powers including invisibility and intangibility. He was trained at the age of 12 to be able to infiltrate even the most heavily guarded fortress without being detected. They say he may be portrayed as cutting down any opposition superhumanly swiftly. His dress code has always been a black bodysuit with a black mask or veil to hide his face. He wears this to hide when the Infinite symbol appears on his head which starts speculation on him being more than just an average person. He has always known superior knowledge of survival skills, a lot of actual stealth, assassination techniques and unorthodox tactics. His dream is to be the greatest Ninja to ever live. He swore an oath to never to give up and to never surrender. One day he will return to his village as the ninja who learned all things and as a man who forfilled his dream of being the greatest Ninja to ever live.


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Battles

Won: Lost:

-Approved-
Next time copy the full template with the codes and stick to it. Its easier to read.

 

[Kimimaro7865]

japan isnt a village in naruto

 

[Truemadara]

japan isnt a village in naruto

well now i changed it..not sure if its right tho..this whole profile thing is type difficult for me

 

[aradmehr]

Hard to read.
You could have made it better by putting some space between them.

 

[System001]

Lol Ragnarok Assassin Cross xd

 

[Petrichor]

Not bad for your first, but could be better.

 

[Necron]

So, basically you made a bio of me?

just kidding ^^

 

[Alucard]

You're a ninja and not a samurai. On the Naruto World they are different people and cultures and as such, you should not mix things up. Either remove samurai references or turn into one.
Also, remove the parts where you say refer to the ninja techniques as magical abilities, along with the part where you talk about the poison. Only med-ninjas and puppet users can use poison on our RP.
On your background info you mostly talk about a ninja's abilities and that can't be called a background history, so you will have to edit that and add some actual information on the history of your character.

And i just want to make sure that you only supposedly have invisibility and intangibility. You don't actually have those abilities and can't use them on our RP.

One last thing: state that you need training on earth element.

 

[Truemadara]

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You're a ninja and not a samurai. On the Naruto World they are different people and cultures and as such, you should not mix things up. Either remove samurai references or turn into one.
Also, remove the parts where you say refer to the ninja techniques as magical abilities, along with the part where you talk about the poison. Only med-ninjas and puppet users can use poison on our RP.
On your background info you mostly talk about a ninja's abilities and that can't be called a background history, so you will have to edit that and add some actual information on the history of your character.

And i just want to make sure that you only supposedly have invisibility and intangibility. You don't actually have those abilities and can't use them on our RP.

One last thing: state that you need training on earth element.

I have made the changes I hope its better and thanks 4 the help