[Approved] Dark Draco

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Basic Information
Name: Dark Draco
Nickname: Death-bringer
Gender: Male
Age: 14
Clan: None

Looks: Often carries a sword. Tall and fit. Few people have seen his face and those who saw it never got a chance to tell others.

Personality: Cunning and smart. Able to outsmart even the smartest foes. Cold-hearted and shows little mercy to rivals.

Village Info
Village of Birth: - Konohagakure
Village of Alliance: - None

Rank//Chakra Info
Ninja Rank: Genin
Specialty: None
Elements:
Lightening - in progress

Your ninjutsu
(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)
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(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.
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(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.
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(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.
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(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.
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(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).
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(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)


Background Info
History: In Konohagakure, there once lived a happy family. Dark's family. He and his parents lived peacefully. One day, a mysterious ninja arrived at their house. Dark's father told them that he was a friend of him, and that he is going to stay with them for a while. Dark immediately had a feeling of dislike when he saw him, but said nothing about it. A few days later, the ninja and Dark's father had an argument, and ended up in a fight. Dark's father was killed, and his mother was also killed trying to assist his father. For some reason, Dark was spared by the ninja. From that day on, Dark had a single goal in mind, to get revenge. He trained continuously every day to get stronger and stronger. Although he trained hard, he knew that he will not become strong enough to defeat the mysterious ninja if he trained this way. For this reason, he left Konoha, searching for more power.

Other

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Theme Song and Background Music: Not selected yet

Battles
Won: 0
Lost: 0

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Here it goes...

-Remove village of alliance. You are not in a village right now, meaning you are not allied with any of them.
-Remove specialty. You need a good amount of training before you can consider ANYTHING a specialty.
-Add A LOT more history. We need to know about your character more.
-Put in some pictures. Its too plain.
-Use the ENTIRE template!
Basic Information
Name:
Nickname:
Gender:
Age:
Clan:

Looks:

Personality:

Village Info.
Village of Birth:
Village of Alliance:

Rank//Chakra Info.
Ninja Rank:
Specialty:
Elements:
Your ninjutsu:


Background Info.
History:

Other

Picture:

Theme Song and Background Music:

Battles

Won:
Lost:


-When you get to the "Your ninjutsu:" part, put IN A SPOILER the following:
Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)
_____
(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.
_____
(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.
_____
(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.
_____
(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.
_____
(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).
_____
(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)


go to bio testing and test it

This does not need to be put into Bio testing. It is a custom Genin bio. The bio testing section is for the OP characters like Pain, Biju holders, etc. This DOES NOT require testing, only approval by Caliburn. Which if he does not fix the following problems I listed above, it will get trashed instantly.
 
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