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“Ivan…this is Matius. The one who fought your brother”, Lemionas introduces as Ivan looks in surprise. “By the gods you’re here! It’s such an honour to meet you at last”, Ivan exclaims, “I’ve heard so much about you amongst my men, they spoke of you greatly and I can see why. I made the right choice not sending men after you on earth”. Matius listens looking back at Ivan, “So you knew about my trial?”. Ivan smiles to himself, “well of course! Everyone was talking about it people believed you killed Sousan. I didn’t however because I knew you wasn’t the one”. “Then why didn’t you try to defend me?”, Matius blasts, “Why? I could have been freed, lived my life in peace! I can’t even live in hell now because of it!” Ivan lowers his head in guilt thinking back. “Dervish would have branded me a traitor for trying to protect you. There was nothing I could do!”. Matius looks down in frustration as Lemionas gets involved. “I didn’t you yourself to show but why?”, Lemionas questions. Ivan chuckles in thought; “I don’t think any of our men would stand against him if I’m honest. I felt like the best option, since I know him as a brother”. One of the angels looks at Ivan puzzled. “You’re brothers? But he’s completely different from you!”, one of the angels states. “Yes we are brothers…It might not seen it, but he wasn’t always like this back then”.
They all turn their attention to Lemions who is trying to locate where Dervish is. “I’ve found Dervish but…he’s still in London”, Lemionas explains. “That’s impossible”, Matius questions, “I was there just two days ago. I saw what looked like him heading out of London!” Ivan walks upto Matius placing his hand upon his shoulder, “That was probably his clouds of ash, spreading through the outskirts of the city killing anything left alive”. Matius grit his teeth in anger, “so what are we still doing here? Let’s go!!”. Ivan pauses looking at the angels, “You angels…what do you know of Dervish, my brother?” . The angels look in combustion approaching Ivan. “We’ve heard that he is a dangerous opponent that should be dealt with extreme caution. His body if made of ash, from those he kills reckless but intelligent”, he replies. “Good seems you know a bit about my brother”, Ivan compliments, “but be warned he’s very dangerous so be on guard. some of us know his true power”, looking to Matius.
“Alright everyone come to me!”, Lemionas announces, “I’ll take everyone to his location!”. Everyone approaches Lemionas, everyone placing a hand on Lemionas shoulders. Matius glances at the angels who look nervous, their first fight. One they might not survive. Matius then look at Ivan, a look filled with determination ready to end his brother once for all. As they all look in each other’s eyes they see trust, a sign of hope. For the first time Matius feels ready as they head for their destiny and perhaps their end.
Chapter 8
All of them arrive back onto London, immediately looking at their surroundings. Ivan takes several steps looking in surprise, as the angels look in horror. “So this is London?”, Ivan utters surprised by it’s modern architecture. “My god”, one of the angels stutters, “is this…Dervish’s doing?”. Matius looks bitterly around him seeing all the buildings desecrated by Dervish. “Yes this is Dervish’s doing…”, Matius admits angered. Lemionas looks ahead trying to pin point Dervish’s location. “We can grief later, right now we need to find Dervish!”, Lemionas demands. Everyone listens to Lemionas advancing deeper into London.
As they walk Matius looks towards Ivan in confusion. “You were saying that Dervish wasn’t always like this?”, Matius questions. “No”, Ivan explains, “when we were young Dervish and myself were close. We looked out for each other, as brothers do”. Lemionas looks to Ivan listening into the conversation, “then how did he become this way?”. Ivan closes his eyes remembering his father. “Our father Sousan was afraid of my brother, he was fearful of what he could do. Sousan distanced himself from my brother and asked me to look out for him. But…I too felt afraid of Dervish, his power it was dangerous. As time passed my brother’s hatred grew so did his ambition to have the throne. He never felt loved in his life so I could understand why. However…”. Matius listens to Ivan in interest. “Dervish ‘s ambitions grew too much and planned to take the throne, creating his own cult. Dedicated to his beliefs” . “I know about his clan!”, Matius exclaims, “he came to me and my men, some of my own men joined him!” Ivan closes his eyes in guilt, “that’s when it finally happened. Sousan afraid of Dervish sent men into Dervish’s home, seemingly killing him. For a time things returned to normal, Dervish’s death was covered up by Sousan. Some days later people started disappearing, no one was sure why. Then a week later as you know Matius, civil war broke out between Dervish’s cultists and our father’s men. Realising the danger Sousan faced me and several men went into the royal palace, to save him. However we were already too late…” Matius listening intently, “so who killed him?”, Matius demands, “surely you know!”. Ivan continues walking as the other angels listen in. “I don’t know…I believed it was Dervish, because of the attack but I remembered that he already died. Some time passed as things went calm, there was already talk about who would become new ruler. That’s he returned…”
Everyone looks in shock hearing this, “Dervish had come back, and with Sousan out of the picture he wanted the throne. From that moment I believed that Sousan’s death was my brother’s doing, however as much as I protested no one would believe my words…As I was about to become ruler in Sousan’s footsteps, Dervish became the successor. Frustrated and hungry for revenge I left hell, going into the wildlands to do my own special training.”, Ivan explains passing a ruined car. “Now that I’m here I can finally test to see if the training has paid off and fight my brother at last. Lemionas…when this fight is over, I promise you with the power invested in me I will bring hell and heaven to peace at last”. Lemionas looks smiling in approval, “Let’s defeat your brother first, then we will talk”. Matius looks ahead, "Is any way we can beat him?"Matius asks hopefully. Ivan pauses gathering his thoughts, looking for a suitable answer, "I don’t know as you all know his body is lethal. If he gets a hold of you, it’s all over”. Just as he says this everyone stops suddenly seeing Dervish up ahead.
All around him the surroundings are blackened. Dervish himself is crouched on a wrecked car, the roof completely given way because of his weight. The glass decorates the car bonnet. Like a beast Dervish grows in height menacingly towards them. “ahhh brother it’s soo good to see you after these long years...” Dervish turns his head looking at Matius, “...and Matius, you finally got here. Good I will kill you here and now”. Dervish allows himself a smile, tossing the wrecked car into a building trying to intimidate them. “You might be strong in numbers, but it will NOT be enough. For I am far stronger than I was before”. Dervish then slowly starts to rise into the air, his shadow descending upon Matius and the group. Lemionas and the angels looking back in terror, as a wind starts to gather. Both angels take nervous steps backwards, as Matius and Ivan remain unmoved. Then in the sky large clouds of ash gather from the sky, circling around Dervish, like a cyclone. Dervish disappears into the cyclone as it grows thicker, small loose objects fly into the cyclone.
Matius can only watch in horror, all those people…how many has he killed? How many has that bastard killed? Matius thinks in disgust. The angels watch nervously, Ivan holds his ground, his hair moving swiftly in the wind calm and composed. The cyclone starts to slows down, quickly a giant ash hand crashes down onto the ground, breaking several buildings. All of the group quickly leap out of harms way, trying to see though the smoke. Then from the smoke Dervish rises high into the air roaring, his body raises level with the buildings surrounding him. Dervish then gazes down upon the group, his eyes filled with malice. He fixes his eyes on Ivan then his gaze shifts to Matius. The entire group stare at Dervish, completely stuck for words, black smoke pours from him. “You are not more than a mere nuisance to my power! Nothing more!”. Dervish quickly sends ash trails towards the group as everyone disbands, evading the merciless trails. One of the angels takes to the sky as several trails of ash try to get her, quickly she swerves past a building as the trails smash through it blackening it on contact. Ivan himself runs inside a building as the trails; follow him smashing through the pillars. Quickly Ivan runs down the corridor before leaping through the air, catching Dervish off guard. Ivan’s sword slices into Dervish’s arm, breaking pieces of ash.
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“Ivan…this is Matius. The one who fought your brother”, Lemionas introduces as Ivan looks in surprise. “By the gods you’re here! It’s such an honour to meet you at last”, Ivan exclaims, “I’ve heard so much about you amongst my men, they spoke of you greatly and I can see why. I made the right choice not sending men after you on earth”. Matius listens looking back at Ivan, “So you knew about my trial?”. Ivan smiles to himself, “well of course! Everyone was talking about it people believed you killed Sousan. I didn’t however because I knew you wasn’t the one”. “Then why didn’t you try to defend me?”, Matius blasts, “Why? I could have been freed, lived my life in peace! I can’t even live in hell now because of it!” Ivan lowers his head in guilt thinking back. “Dervish would have branded me a traitor for trying to protect you. There was nothing I could do!”. Matius looks down in frustration as Lemionas gets involved. “I didn’t you yourself to show but why?”, Lemionas questions. Ivan chuckles in thought; “I don’t think any of our men would stand against him if I’m honest. I felt like the best option, since I know him as a brother”. One of the angels looks at Ivan puzzled. “You’re brothers? But he’s completely different from you!”, one of the angels states. “Yes we are brothers…It might not seen it, but he wasn’t always like this back then”.
They all turn their attention to Lemions who is trying to locate where Dervish is. “I’ve found Dervish but…he’s still in London”, Lemionas explains. “That’s impossible”, Matius questions, “I was there just two days ago. I saw what looked like him heading out of London!” Ivan walks upto Matius placing his hand upon his shoulder, “That was probably his clouds of ash, spreading through the outskirts of the city killing anything left alive”. Matius grit his teeth in anger, “so what are we still doing here? Let’s go!!”. Ivan pauses looking at the angels, “You angels…what do you know of Dervish, my brother?” . The angels look in combustion approaching Ivan. “We’ve heard that he is a dangerous opponent that should be dealt with extreme caution. His body if made of ash, from those he kills reckless but intelligent”, he replies. “Good seems you know a bit about my brother”, Ivan compliments, “but be warned he’s very dangerous so be on guard. some of us know his true power”, looking to Matius.
“Alright everyone come to me!”, Lemionas announces, “I’ll take everyone to his location!”. Everyone approaches Lemionas, everyone placing a hand on Lemionas shoulders. Matius glances at the angels who look nervous, their first fight. One they might not survive. Matius then look at Ivan, a look filled with determination ready to end his brother once for all. As they all look in each other’s eyes they see trust, a sign of hope. For the first time Matius feels ready as they head for their destiny and perhaps their end.
Chapter 8
All of them arrive back onto London, immediately looking at their surroundings. Ivan takes several steps looking in surprise, as the angels look in horror. “So this is London?”, Ivan utters surprised by it’s modern architecture. “My god”, one of the angels stutters, “is this…Dervish’s doing?”. Matius looks bitterly around him seeing all the buildings desecrated by Dervish. “Yes this is Dervish’s doing…”, Matius admits angered. Lemionas looks ahead trying to pin point Dervish’s location. “We can grief later, right now we need to find Dervish!”, Lemionas demands. Everyone listens to Lemionas advancing deeper into London.
As they walk Matius looks towards Ivan in confusion. “You were saying that Dervish wasn’t always like this?”, Matius questions. “No”, Ivan explains, “when we were young Dervish and myself were close. We looked out for each other, as brothers do”. Lemionas looks to Ivan listening into the conversation, “then how did he become this way?”. Ivan closes his eyes remembering his father. “Our father Sousan was afraid of my brother, he was fearful of what he could do. Sousan distanced himself from my brother and asked me to look out for him. But…I too felt afraid of Dervish, his power it was dangerous. As time passed my brother’s hatred grew so did his ambition to have the throne. He never felt loved in his life so I could understand why. However…”. Matius listens to Ivan in interest. “Dervish ‘s ambitions grew too much and planned to take the throne, creating his own cult. Dedicated to his beliefs” . “I know about his clan!”, Matius exclaims, “he came to me and my men, some of my own men joined him!” Ivan closes his eyes in guilt, “that’s when it finally happened. Sousan afraid of Dervish sent men into Dervish’s home, seemingly killing him. For a time things returned to normal, Dervish’s death was covered up by Sousan. Some days later people started disappearing, no one was sure why. Then a week later as you know Matius, civil war broke out between Dervish’s cultists and our father’s men. Realising the danger Sousan faced me and several men went into the royal palace, to save him. However we were already too late…” Matius listening intently, “so who killed him?”, Matius demands, “surely you know!”. Ivan continues walking as the other angels listen in. “I don’t know…I believed it was Dervish, because of the attack but I remembered that he already died. Some time passed as things went calm, there was already talk about who would become new ruler. That’s he returned…”
Everyone looks in shock hearing this, “Dervish had come back, and with Sousan out of the picture he wanted the throne. From that moment I believed that Sousan’s death was my brother’s doing, however as much as I protested no one would believe my words…As I was about to become ruler in Sousan’s footsteps, Dervish became the successor. Frustrated and hungry for revenge I left hell, going into the wildlands to do my own special training.”, Ivan explains passing a ruined car. “Now that I’m here I can finally test to see if the training has paid off and fight my brother at last. Lemionas…when this fight is over, I promise you with the power invested in me I will bring hell and heaven to peace at last”. Lemionas looks smiling in approval, “Let’s defeat your brother first, then we will talk”. Matius looks ahead, "Is any way we can beat him?"Matius asks hopefully. Ivan pauses gathering his thoughts, looking for a suitable answer, "I don’t know as you all know his body is lethal. If he gets a hold of you, it’s all over”. Just as he says this everyone stops suddenly seeing Dervish up ahead.
All around him the surroundings are blackened. Dervish himself is crouched on a wrecked car, the roof completely given way because of his weight. The glass decorates the car bonnet. Like a beast Dervish grows in height menacingly towards them. “ahhh brother it’s soo good to see you after these long years...” Dervish turns his head looking at Matius, “...and Matius, you finally got here. Good I will kill you here and now”. Dervish allows himself a smile, tossing the wrecked car into a building trying to intimidate them. “You might be strong in numbers, but it will NOT be enough. For I am far stronger than I was before”. Dervish then slowly starts to rise into the air, his shadow descending upon Matius and the group. Lemionas and the angels looking back in terror, as a wind starts to gather. Both angels take nervous steps backwards, as Matius and Ivan remain unmoved. Then in the sky large clouds of ash gather from the sky, circling around Dervish, like a cyclone. Dervish disappears into the cyclone as it grows thicker, small loose objects fly into the cyclone.
Matius can only watch in horror, all those people…how many has he killed? How many has that bastard killed? Matius thinks in disgust. The angels watch nervously, Ivan holds his ground, his hair moving swiftly in the wind calm and composed. The cyclone starts to slows down, quickly a giant ash hand crashes down onto the ground, breaking several buildings. All of the group quickly leap out of harms way, trying to see though the smoke. Then from the smoke Dervish rises high into the air roaring, his body raises level with the buildings surrounding him. Dervish then gazes down upon the group, his eyes filled with malice. He fixes his eyes on Ivan then his gaze shifts to Matius. The entire group stare at Dervish, completely stuck for words, black smoke pours from him. “You are not more than a mere nuisance to my power! Nothing more!”. Dervish quickly sends ash trails towards the group as everyone disbands, evading the merciless trails. One of the angels takes to the sky as several trails of ash try to get her, quickly she swerves past a building as the trails smash through it blackening it on contact. Ivan himself runs inside a building as the trails; follow him smashing through the pillars. Quickly Ivan runs down the corridor before leaping through the air, catching Dervish off guard. Ivan’s sword slices into Dervish’s arm, breaking pieces of ash.