[CJ] Customs with the Rival

Zaphkiel

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Ok lets make this snappy. Here's the jutsu:

(Raiton: Endā no gēmu)- Lightning Release: Ender's Game
Rank: B
Type: Defensive/Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user fires a normal bolt of Raiton chakra into the sky inducing slight storm clouds. This initial bolt of lightning then becomes charged using the clouds as an incubator. Then, in the same or next turn the user 'calls' the lightning strike to his position with a simple hand seal. The return strike has a full 5 meter radius in a 360 range of the epicenter, the user. It may appear to engulf the user but in fact it is various tendrils of Raiton raining down in a cage like manner leaving the user and center unscathed for approximately 8 seconds straight. The 'bars' are so close together it looks like a single bolt had hit. If caught in the walls the opponent would experience intense lightning damage and pain leaving the muscles in spastic intervals throughout the turn afflicted.
Notes:
- Can only be taught by Zaph
- Cannot perform any other Raiton techniques during the turn initialized
- Can only be used 3x per match​

Advantages, disadvantages, and questions.
 

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Advantages:
Well I find this technique extremely versatile, it's ability to trap people within itself is very helpful giving more time for other techniques.
Disadvantages:
Well the 2nd restriction seems kind of over the top for a B rank and also the range is very tricky but eh guess im just a picky person xD
Questions:
Can this be used on myself as a defensive jutsu to protect me from an attack?
 

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Advantages:
Well I find this technique extremely versatile, it's ability to trap people within itself is very helpful giving more time for other techniques.
Disadvantages:
Well the 2nd restriction seems kind of over the top for a B rank and also the range is very tricky but eh guess im just a picky person xD
Questions:
Can this be used on myself as a defensive jutsu to protect me from an attack?
Yea, in the next update (A ranked) it will be much more versatile and yes it can be used on your self. That was the main aim anyway. Add it to your CJ list while I update people I've taught.

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(Suiton: Hakai torentokomando)- Water Style: Destruction Torrent Command
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage: 80
Description: A unique and tricky technique, requires the finesse of a water affinity to be completed perfectly due to its complexity and range. The technique begins with two hand seals (Ram➡Boar) where the user will begin an uppercut motion with his dominant arm, as he does this a thin film of water flat and round spanning 5m in diameter and mere centimeters in height would condense from the air above him. As he punches, his hand passes through this film sending splashes of water into the air above. As the splashes fly upward they grow exponentially in size gathering moisture from the atmosphere while joining together until 4 dense comets of water each the size of an adult bear come crashing down anywhere the user wills up to long ranged. The user can choose to release all comets at once for maximum splash damage or one at a time for strategic importance, however at one at a time the user has to remain focused on the technique and is unable to perform any other chakra needed techniques until the move is finished.
Note(s):
- Can only be done 2×
- Bios with Suiton primary affinity can perform this without the need for hand seals
- Requires a turn cool down

(Genjutsu: Midare)- Illusionary Technique: Disturbia

Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A
Description: The user will and cast an illusion on the opponent's mind that sees a single figure appearing on the terrain- this figure can be anyone and anywhere the user chooses but it can't be made within 5 meters of the opponent. This figure will have a distant look at everything, as if looking through you and won't appear to be concerned with the world around them. They can't move, can't talk, not even think- they are essentially living statues. If left ignored by the opponent after one turn this figure multiplies into two figures with the second one being set anywhere the user pleases, even beside the opponent which is unlike the first figure. After the second turn these two multiply into 8 figures, and after the third turn 16 and so on until the entire field is completely filled and the opponent has nowhere to move. In reality, these multiplying statues are actually explosive kunai that the user throws at strategic locations- of course the opponent wouldn't actually see when the user throws these kunai. The more turns that pass the user throws more around the field until it is riddled with explosives. Then, with a single hand seal the user will detonate all the tags he had set. The aim is to get as many as close to the opponent as possible to ensure death before the illusion is broken.
Note(s):
- Can only be done 3x
- Requires a turn cooldown

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Doton: Kuishinbō tatchi | Earth Release: Gluttonous Touch
Type: Attack
Rank: A-rank
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60 (+10 if the mud is ignited)
Description:
As the name hints towards, 'Kuishinbō tatchi' is a jutsu that is initiated either off of coming into contact with the target or doing a series of 3 hand seals to initiate it from a distance. Once the user touches the target, whether it's through his (user's) hand, leg, elbow etc. he'll release a a baseball sized dark blob of muddy earthen material which will stick to the target. Alternatively the 3 hands seals allow the user to make the blob shoot from the ground anywhere within 15m of himself to stick onto a target. The blob of Earth takes on unique properties of the flammable mud variant of Earth, being very mud-like and sticky to the touch, thus seeming like a ball of swamp material with its dark color and sticky texture. Once the blob is in contact with the opponent it starts to act on its own accord. The blob of mud begins to duplicate itself like a germ of some sort, quickly spreading across the target as it expands to become thicker and heavier by the second. Within a moment's notice the mud would completely ensnare the opponent's entire body, starting to smother and crush him within the mud. Due to the flammable nature of the mud it would be highly reactive to flames, sparks and electricity; catching a blaze and making the mud even more dangerous. The mud doesn't make explosions when it is ignited though, but simply catches on fire to start heating and turning the mud into a molten mud of sorts. This isn't limited to simply being used on a human either, it can be used on summonings or other jutsu within reason (like a stone golem) to ensnare and constrict them with the mud.

☆ Needs to be taught by BlackCrow
☆ Usable 3x
☆ Lasts 2 turns unless destroyed

here you go fam
 
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