Customs by Ragerok.!!

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"Why hello there"
"I shall teach you my art."
Do you want a normal spear or a retractable and extendable spear

My favorite are the retractible and extendable spears but you can choose either or.
 

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Ok first thing first, the good thing about it being extendable, is that you can still wield it like a sword (by only having one end extended) although it will be blunt, and you won't be able to cut anything (unless you use the tip) so this next techinque Gets around that con.

Firstly I want you to have only one side extended. Then I want you to channel wind chakra into the spear, and cover it with a "shroud", imagine the shroud being sharp like a sword and cover your spear with this shroud.
 

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Okay sure thing. I'm good at using wind chakra so this will be great.

*I grab the spear and make one side of it extend. I then pour a controlled amount of wind chakra into the spear, making it surround the spear and become sharp and sword-like*

How was that??
 

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Okay sure thing. I'm good at using wind chakra so this will be great.

*I grab the spear and make one side of it extend. I then pour a controlled amount of wind chakra into the spear, making it surround the spear and become sharp and sword-like*

How was that??
*you make a perfect shroud*
Good work now decapitate that dummy with the side not the tip.
 

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*I continue to channel wind chakra into the spear. I then walk over to the dummy and chop his head off like with a regular sword.*

*Dummy's head falls off.*

Okay what's next.
Good work ^_^
You just learnt this:
Naruyari-ryu : Amatsukaze Ooi | Thundering Spear Style : Heavenly Wind Shroud
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20 per turn
Damage: 80
Description: Normally a Spearman can only use their spears to stab their opponent, this technique allows the spearman to "Slash" and "Slice" their enemies. The user channels Wind chakra into their spear/s and covers most of their spear in a sharp wind "shroud"(apart from where the users hands are holding the spear), which can cut through normal rock. This technique can be used almost instantly (takes a second to cover the spear).

-Lasts for 3 turns
-Twice per battle
-The user cannot use any S-rank or higher wind jutsu for 1 turn after it is deactivated.
-Can only be taught by Ragerok.

Ok next jutsu requires you to charge your spear with static electricity and throw it anywhere in short range. I'll fire a lightning jutsu at you so you need to learn fast xd

I use:
(Raiton: Ikazuchi no Utage) - Lightning Release: Lightning Burial ~ Banquet of Lightning
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Mid/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user brings their hands together and an electrical energy will begin to crackle around them. They will then slam their hands to the ground to send an electric current racing through the earth. When the current approaches its target, it can split into multiple tendrils to attack separate targets individually.

Sending lightning through the ground at you. Charge your spear with lightning and throw it anywhere in short range away from you.
 

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*I grip my spear hard and force a a great amount of lightning chakra into the spear and then the lightning spreads out throughout the spear. I then throw it in front of me in short range.*

I wonder what's going to happen next??
 

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*I grip my spear hard and force a a great amount of lightning chakra into the spear and then the lightning spreads out throughout the spear. I then throw it in front of me in short range.*

I wonder what's going to happen next??
*The lightning jutsu redirects to the spear and disappears, I use the lightning jutsu again and it goes to the spear again and disappears*

Congratulations you just learnt:

Naruyari-ryu : Seiteki Chibou | Thundering Spear Style : Static Earthing Rod
Type: Defence
Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: The user charges a metal spear with Static electricity and throws the spear anywhere in short range. All (this includes the users) B-rank and under Lightning jutsu are redirected to the spear and grounded into the earth.

-Can only be used twice
-The spear goes back to normal, once it grounds two jutsu
-Must be taught by Ragerok
-This only affects Lightning jutsu that are in Short to Mid range.


Ok that's all for now, add those two to your custom jutsu thread saying I allowed you too. I'll make some more and i'll teach them to you when they get approved. I've gone over my weekly limit so I cnt submit the ones i've made yet.
 

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Concentrates and make all the Suiton chakra flow to the tip of the spear. Keeps it focus and compresses it, building up a great amount of pressure.

Okay. It's building up what do I do next??
Okay now, release the pressure by materializing a small but powerful water jet that goes in a straight line and fires where the tip is pointing. Before you release it, keep both hands on the spear and aim at those rocks and that tree in short-range.
 

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Okay Sure thing.

I aim my spear at the rock behind me. I release my built up chakra from the tip of my spear and make it travel into a straight. concentrated, and powerful jet of water.

The Rocks basically erode away!

I then build up more chakra into the tip of my spear and release a concentrated jet of water at the nearby tree.

The Tree is destroyed.
 

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Okay Sure thing.

I aim my spear at the rock behind me. I release my built up chakra from the tip of my spear and make it travel into a straight. concentrated, and powerful jet of water.

The Rocks basically erode away!

I then build up more chakra into the tip of my spear and release a concentrated jet of water at the nearby tree.

The Tree is destroyed.
The jet carves through the rocks and cuts the tree in half. Well done
Naruyari-ryu : Poseidon's Gyoushi | Thundering Spear Style : Poseidon's Gaze
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: 60
Description: Using the tip of his spear as "pointer", the user can fire a small, but powerful jet of water that goes in a straight line. It is powerful enough to cut through normal rock (at short range). The user must keep both hands on the spear to channel the water chakra and fire the beam.

Twice per battle
Lasts 1 turn (or less, if the user removes a hand)
Must be taught by Ragerok

That's all for now, when I get more approved I'll teach you.
 
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