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Ulquiorra looks at Alucard from a short distanced tree which he was sitting on, He walks towards Alucard while folding up his sleeves.

I like that smexy coat of yours ~.~ Anyways..

(Katon: Ningenno Haino Bakuhatsu) Fire Style: Exploding human ash technique
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user gathers Fire chakra in his lungs and spits out a great amount of ash around the opponent which then are manipulated into the shape of that of a human body which will jump and gag up on the opponent as the user exhales a small fireball towards the human-shaped ash. As soon as the ash comes in contact with the fire it explodes along with burning the opponent.
Note: Can create upto 5 human-shaped ash.
Note: Can only be used 4 times per Battle.

This jutsu is basically you spitting out ash and then manipulating them into the shape of that of a human body, the so called human shaped ash will gag up on the opponent while you release a small fireball which will lead to an explosion once the ash comes in contact with the fire. Its not such hard technique, personally i think i could fit this in your memory by just plain explanation but i shall not take that type of risk, So what i want you to do is first preform the technique and list an advantage and disadvantage. If you can't find any then i shall enlighten you. Also do not hesitate in asking any question.
 
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Ulquiorra looks at Alucard from a short distanced tree which he was sitting on, He walks towards Alucard while folding up his sleeves.

I like that smexy coat of yours ~.~ Anyways..
Thanks lad :p

Hm, alright it seems pretty nice and handy. I'll perform the tech and list some advantages/disadvantages i can come up with then.

*Alucard starts by focusing on his chakra, which then starts to mount up from the core of his body. As he gathers chakra, Alucard channels it towards his lungs where he then turn the chakra into katon chakra, using his nature affinity. So hmm.. ash it is right..

Alucard now channels the katon chakra to his mouth and turns it into ash which he then exhales. As the ash lands infront of him, Alucard uses shape manipulation and shapes the ash into an "ash clone" of himself. As he's done that he commands the clone to run in a straight line towards a tree infront of Alucard. Mid range btw.

The clone starts running towards the tree and once there, clings onto it like a parasite with a steady grip with both arms and legs. Escaping is almost impossible, atleast for the tree :rolleyes:.

while you release a small fireball which will lead to an explosion once the ash comes in contact with the fire.
Following this, Alucard still has some katon chakra in his lungs which he exhales into a fireball that is directed towards his ash clone. As the fireball hits the clone, an explosion takes place and the tree is no more. Not to mention there's a cloud of burning ash in the area where the tree where so vision isn't precisely good even if the opponent survived.*

(Katon: Ningenno Haino Bakuhatsu) Fire Style: Exploding human ash technique
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user gathers Fire chakra in his lungs and spits out a great amount of ash around the opponent which then are manipulated into the shape of that of a human body which will jump and gag up on the opponent as the user exhales a small fireball towards the human-shaped ash. As soon as the ash comes in contact with the fire it explodes along with burning the opponent.
Note: Can create upto 5 human-shaped ash.
Note: Can only be used 4 times per Battle.



Advantages: Clones can be used as distraction aswell. Upon combination with the fireball, there should be a negative sense of vision since hot ash is surrounding the opponent even if they survived the attack itself. It's also a pretty easy attack to perform.

Disadvantages: The fact still remains that it's not that hard to destroy/derail the tracks of the clones as they run towards the opponent. By simply smashing the clones, create floods of water the opponent has easily evaded the attack.
 

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Well, that was spectacular but the problem is that how you think of these human shaped ash and clones, they are nothing like clones it is just ash which is manipulated together in the shape of a human. And the ash doesn't have skin, eyes or any other details related to a human body besides its shape. So remember to refer it as a pile of ash which is shaped into that of a human body since it is the case. Other then that the advantages and disadvantages seem to be build up well so well done. Also always in battle remember to name the amount of human shaped ashes you create, the limit is 5 tho.

Well now that's it i guess, now go and make a smexy Custom thread and use this tech wisely in battle.
 
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Well, that was spectacular but the problem is that how you think of these human shaped ash and clones, they are nothing like clones it is just ash which is manipulated together in the shape of a human. And the ash doesn't have skin, eyes or any other details related to a human body besides its shape. So remember to refer it as a pile of ash which is shaped into that of a human body since it is the case. Other then that the advantages and disadvantages seem to be build up well so well done. Also always in battle remember to name the amount of human shaped ashes you create, the limit is 5 tho.

Well now that's it i guess, now go and make a smexy Custom thread and use this tech wisely in battle.
I was aware of that, maybe putting it as a clone gets the wrong message though x).
Thanks for the Cj :)
 
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