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Ndlovu

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Umi Katon: Avaron no ame | Liquid Fire: Rain of Avalon
Type:
Supplementary
Rank: A-Rank
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 30 (-10 per turn)
Damage: N/A (+20 water based techniques)(+20 Liquid Fire techniques)
Description: The user will make two handseals creating a large portal above the battlefield, letting liquid fire to rain down heavily on the battlefield. This liquid fire burns, but is not as potent. Instead it fuels liquid fire techniques and techniques that use water or elements that use water as a base for their release by using the natural reaction liquid fire has when it comes into contact with water. Then using their chakra to manipulate the liquid fire combining it giving it an explosive effect. This can only be done by those who have mastered liquid fire, to be able to utilize the liquid fire in the air and use it to fuel their techniques.

Note: Can only be done twice per combat
Note: Can only last for four turns
Note: Has a two turn cooldown after deactivation

± Declined. I would much rather have this be more refined, how large is the portal, and at A rank, is it affecting Water techniques regarding S/W of Liquid Fire, what about its interaction with other water based CE, etc? Also, not happy with it lasting four turns. ±
 
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(Inton: Maryoku no Shōheki) - Yin: Impend
Type:
Supplementary
Rank: C-Forbidden
Range: Jutsu dependant
Chakra: Jutsu dependant
Damage: Jutsu dependant
Description: Throughout perfect control of Yin release, either via mastery of possession of Yin/Yang - the user spikes their chakra network whilst being under the influence of a foreign Genjutsu or other Yin-based technique and feed upon it before reflecting it back towards it's origin. The multi-ranking function of the technique reflects the technicalities of Kai release, meaning the stronger the opposing technique's Genjutsu or influential technique is, the more chakra the user needs to spend to successfully cast Impend. As a Genjutsu is reflected back towards its caster, it will create the illusion of their own casting being succesfull and trap them in a false reality where they can deliver a final blow, while in reality they're bound to their own Genjutsu. Naturally, this technique can be boosted/altered by regular means.

Note: Yin/Yang users or Yin masters can deflect any non-ms genjutsu back towards its caster.
Note: Can be used a total of 5 times per battle, however, depending on the strength of the technique it will count as a higher amount of use. Countering a Forbidden ranked Genjutsu counts as 3 | S-rank as 2,5 | A-rank as 2 | B-rank as 1,5 etc.
Note: No Yin release/Genjutsu technique can be used in the same turn.
Note: Has a two-turn cooldown.
 

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Genjutsu: Shinnyū Shikō | Illusionary Arts: Intrusive Thought
Type:
Supplementary
Rank: C-Rank
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A
Description: This is a spasmic illusion either immediately awoken in the target's mind or dormant until it meets its trigger. The user implants what seems like a thought into the target's mind fashioned in a way to seem as if it is the target's own before the illusion gets self-dispelled. One cannot unthink a thought they had on the spot, which is what this whole technique is about. Whether they chose to feed or push aside the intrusive though is up to the target. Something like "they seem truthful/distrustful", "they're down to mingle", "this will/won't work", "I should stay/leave", etc. It's more like an angel/devil whispering in your ear. The illusion's medium can be flexible whether it be hearing, touch, sight, taste or smell.

- Immediate Variant: This is the most common use of it, like most illusions, where the illusion is triggered immediately.
- Dormant Variant: This one follow the rules of dormant illusions, where in addition to the medium in which you implant this illusion with, you'll also have to describe how/when the illusionary intrusive thought you've implanted will be triggered. An example would be to have the dormant illusion trigger once the target sees a village leader "they're trustful/distrustful".

Note: The immediate variant has no usage restrictions.
Note: The dormant variant can only be used once per target.
Note: If 2 targets at short range then the illusion can become AoE but halving its rank on each.
 
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