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Hello :3

I'd like you to go first please, seeing as how I'm feeling lazy.
z.z

Damn, had to edit the title, accidentally wrote 'Erzo' xD
 

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The ones I wanted:


1) (Katon: Katana Kaji) - Fire Style: Blade of Fire

Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user creates a sword of fire. When the user stabs something, the whole body/whatever ignites in flames.
Note: No sword intended

I use my Katon chakra to create a sword of fire which has intense heat. I then make a clone who I stab with the newly made Fire sword, as soon as the clone is stabbed, he bursts into flames.

(Katon: Kaji Kawari ) - Fire Substitute

Type: Supplementary
Rank: C
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This jutsu uses the Ox handseal. When your opponent attacks you, you disappear in a cloud of fire. When you poof away, your opponent gets burnt while they are in that cloud of fire that you created.

I perform the Ox hand seal and disappear in a cloud of fire whilst the opponent gets burst.
Question: Where do I re-appear?

(Suiton: Mizu Kabe ) - Water Style: Water Wall

Type: Defence
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: A wall of water rises in front of you. When an object contacts the water, it turns into ice.

I create a wall of water in front of me which i then throw a rock into, upon entering the water wall, the rock would instantly freeze and turn into ice.

(Suiton: Sui Mizu) - Water Style: Acid Water

Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user spits out a portion of water that is acid. When the acid contacts skin, the skin just sizzles and disappears. Just leaving the opponent's raw flesh.

I concentrate on my water chakra and somehow manipulate it to acid, I then spit out that acid on the skin of your clone. The acid burs the clone's face off, leaving raw flesh.

(Kumokasumi Saezuru) - Disappearing Chirps

Type: Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user does the Tiger hand seal. When your opponent attacks you, you disappear into 10 birds flying and chirping away.
You reappear 30 meters away from where you disappeared.

I perform the tiger hand seal and disappear into 10 birds flying away, I then re-appear 30 meters away from my location.
Question: Am I one of the birds? Or are they just used as a distraction?

(Doton: Daichi Kunai) - Earth Style: Earth Kunai

Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user shapes their chakra to make a kunai from the earth. When this kunai is hit on the opponent, the nearest organ turns into stone.

I release my Earth chakra into the ground and make a Kunai of Earth to come out from the ground and hit the opponent in the chest, turning the nearest organ into stone.
Question: It comes from the ground, right? Because the range says Mid-Long.
 

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(Katon: Katana Kaji) - Fire Style: Blade of Fire - Good.
(Katon: Kaji Kawari ) - Fire Substitute - Short to Mid, it needs to get updated tho.
(Suiton: Mizu Kabe ) - Water Style: Water Wall - Nice, remember that this justsu is extremely handy and can get created whenever and wherever on the battle field up to mid ranged area, but also can be expanded to mid ranged width.
(Suiton: Sui Mizu) - Water Style: Acid Water - Again, more description please.
(Kumokasumi Saezuru) - Disappearing Chirps - You are the chirps (You actually change in them, customs where approved so easily back in 2009...) and they're extremely fast, you would reach your destination in let's say... three/four seconds.
(Doton: Daichi Kunai) - Earth Style: Earth Kunai Exactly and you can also use the technique Orochimaru and Minato uses to multiply the kunai's into hundred or thousand of kunai's.

Now perform the Water acid again, be more descriptive. :p
 

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(Katon: Katana Kaji) - Fire Style: Blade of Fire - Good.
(Katon: Kaji Kawari ) - Fire Substitute - Short to Mid, it needs to get updated tho.
(Suiton: Mizu Kabe ) - Water Style: Water Wall - Nice, remember that this justsu is extremely handy and can get created whenever and wherever on the battle field up to mid ranged area, but also can be expanded to mid ranged width.
(Suiton: Sui Mizu) - Water Style: Acid Water - Again, more description please.
(Kumokasumi Saezuru) - Disappearing Chirps - You are the chirps (You actually change in them, customs where approved so easily back in 2009...) and they're extremely fast, you would reach your destination in let's say... three/four seconds.
(Doton: Daichi Kunai) - Earth Style: Earth Kunai Exactly and you can also use the technique Orochimaru and Minato uses to multiply the kunai's into hundred or thousand of kunai's.

Now perform the Water acid again, be more descriptive. :p
Alright, awesome.

I gather my water chakra in my body and channel it all towards my mouth as I bring out the acidity within the water in order to make it more dangerous. Once it's gathered in my mouth, I spit it out forcefully, releasing acidic water which has the ability to burn through human flesh and leave raw skin.
 

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Alright, awesome.

I gather my water chakra in my body and channel it all towards my mouth as I bring out the acidity within the water in order to make it more dangerous. Once it's gathered in my mouth, I spit it out forcefully, releasing acidic water which has the ability to burn through human flesh and leave raw skin.
Better. O^O

  • (Raiton/Kenjutsu: Inperiaru Sutoraiku)- Lightning/Sword Arts: Imperial Strike

    I take out my Katana, and once I touched it a large amount of lightning chakra was send trough the katana once touched and then rapidly make a horizontally slash in front of me whilst still sending lightning chakra trough the Katana, and once I slashed a thin lightning line of lightning chakra unnoticeable to the naked eye, the thin line of lightning chakra will expand once reaching short ranged arena of the trees over there o.o and suddenly extends into multiple other thin yet extremely sharp and lethal blades of lightning which bolt towards the trees, turning them into ashes.

  • (Raiton: Tori Dageki) Lightning Release: Bird Strike

    I quickly make the ''+'' handseal and create a clone in front of me and thereafter concentrate my lightning chakra in the the sky in the arena behind my clone and use shape manipulation to create a hawk -which is the same size as the one summoned Sasuke Uchiha against Danzou- then I send a large amount of chakra trough the hawk, which I will cause him to fly downwards at an angle towards my clone with its extremely sharp beak pointed at my clone's neck area/upper back aiming to piercing him from behind. After piercing my clone, the bird disperses in all areas short range from it acting like Nagashi and paralyzing my clone instantly, causing him to disperse.

  • (Katon: Nibai Batsu) Fire Release: Double attack


    I concentrate my Katon chakra and slam my hands onto the ground, releasing fire chakra where it then comes out from my other clone which I created after finishing the previous lightning technique (3 meters away) the fire then forms into two hawks -each roughly the size of the hawk Sasuke Uchiha summoned against Danzou- to come out and shoot off towards the clone his location from both his sides (his left and right side) trapping the clone into center of the attack. Upon collision with each other and the clone being in the middle of the huge hawks, the birds explode and create a giant fire viciously burning the clone in between and cause him to disperse.

  • (Genjutsu: Mizu Ei ) - Illusion Technique: Water Wrap


    I send a slight amount of chakra trough your brain (Yes Erzo, your brain o.o) and then perform the snake handseal making you seem as if a long thick rope of water has suddenly materialize out of nowhere and wraps it self around you, your movement. The rope would is so tight that you wouldn't be able to move any parts of your body, thus preventing you from performing any hand seals, while in reality you would just be standing still struggling to move since you probably will be thinking a rope of water has tightly wrapped itself around your body.

  • (Doton: Hebi Kyouran) - Earth release: Snakes Frenzy


    I quickly make three handseals, when thereafter a ''+'' handseal that will cause a clone to appear upon my swamp that I created, and send a large amount of earth chakra trough the mud and shape the mud into seven snakes and head towards you in a fast rate and make 'em strangle my clone to death, causing him to disperse instantly.
 

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Damn, now I feel like a slacker. xD

Nicely done, any questions? ^.^
Uhm... no questions on this side. Let's promise that we aren't able to use our customs against each other if we ever manage to face each other. And if you got any questions in the future about my customs then feel free to drop a VM. ;)
 

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(Mokuton: Mokusei No Sōzō ) - Wood Style: Wooden Creation
Rank: A
Type: Attack/Defence/Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user focuses his Mokuton chakra into the ground and uses it to grow animals all varying in size from the ground. The biggest an animal can be is the size of Gamakichi, after time skip, allowing the wooden creation to be big enough for the user and at least 2 other people to hide behind it. The wooden creations have the ability to use Mokuton, Earth and Water jutsus up to B-rank without the need to perform hand seals for the Mokuton but they'd need to perform hand seals for the hand seal requiring Earth and Water jutsus. Furthermore the user has the ability to clap his hands together whilst focusing a large amount of chakra within the wooden creatures and explode them, in a similar to fashion to Exploding of Dense Woodland jutsu.
Note: Can only be used 3 times.
Note: Can only be taught by Erzo.
Note: Can only make 2 creatures at a time.

I, which suddenly appear out of a dark corner starts sending chakra into the ground and shape the hidden roots from within the ground into an dog that is as big as Gamakichi, and the moment he appears from out of the ground from the right to me, he suddenly releases a water bullet out of it's mouth sending it towards the tree, while at the same time creating an ant-lion that sucks the whole battlefield into the underworld.

Handy, good.

Question; Is the animal capable of performing handseals? o-o
 

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(Mokuton: Mokusei No Sōzō ) - Wood Style: Wooden Creation
Rank: A
Type: Attack/Defence/Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user focuses his Mokuton chakra into the ground and uses it to grow animals all varying in size from the ground. The biggest an animal can be is the size of Gamakichi, after time skip, allowing the wooden creation to be big enough for the user and at least 2 other people to hide behind it. The wooden creations have the ability to use Mokuton, Earth and Water jutsus up to B-rank without the need to perform hand seals for the Mokuton but they'd need to perform hand seals for the hand seal requiring Earth and Water jutsus. Furthermore the user has the ability to clap his hands together whilst focusing a large amount of chakra within the wooden creatures and explode them, in a similar to fashion to Exploding of Dense Woodland jutsu.
Note: Can only be used 3 times.
Note: Can only be taught by Erzo.
Note: Can only make 2 creatures at a time.

I, which suddenly appear out of a dark corner starts sending chakra into the ground and shape the hidden roots from within the ground into an dog that is as big as Gamakichi, and the moment he appears from out of the ground from the right to me, he suddenly releases a water bullet out of it's mouth sending it towards the tree, while at the same time creating an ant-lion that sucks the whole battlefield into the underworld.

Handy, good.

Question; Is the animal capable of performing handseals? o-o
If it's an animal with hands; yes.

@Bold, one animal can't perform 2 jutsus at once. Only if you create two different dogs can they perform the water and antlion together.
 
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