Re: Custom Clan's & Group's Jutsu
( Togesuzumebachi no Ame ) - Rain of Stinging Wasps
Rank: B
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 20 ( +5 per turn )
Damage: 40
The Nekura clansman opens the portals in the sky, causing Keigoku to fall from the portals like rain, in a shower of individual drops. Any non-Nekura caught in this rain will experience sudden sharp mental pain as the drops touch him. Due to the repeated falling of the Keigoku raindrops, they will not be able to focus enough to use techniques that require intense concentration ( Genjutsu, Fuuinjutsu, Medjutsu, etc. ) and cannot string together more than four handseals without pause.
This technique can be used twice per battle; each use lasts for three turns, and there needs to be two turns gap between each use.
By sheltering under a suitable defense, the effects of this technique can be avoided.
The effects also apply to non-Nekura allies, and so this technique is not useful in combo battles or wars.
~Declined~
Please state how large of a portal you can make. For a B-ranked jutsu I would not expect it to be able to cover the whole battlefield.
( Hadō no Kyūjū: Kurohitsugi ) - Way of Destruction Number Ninety: Black Coffin
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description:
The user makes six handseals, causing portals to emerge on all sides around the opponent, a few metres away. Keigoku flows from these portals, before forming itself into a black coffin-shaped box surrounding the opponent, large enough to trap two people. The box covers the opponent in all sides, including above and below; contact with it makes the opponent's head ache badly. As soon as the box forms fully, spears of Keigoku manifest themselves on the walls and shoot inward, impaling an opponent caught within it. This causes severe mental agony, causing the opponent to feel exhausted and collapse temporarily for twelve seconds.
This technique may be used only thrice per battle.
No Nekura techniques above A-rank may be used during the same turn and the next turn.
~Declined~
Need more information. How long does it take for the walls to form completely? Does the portal releasing chakra from below the person appear on the ground? If it does then they would already be touching the Keigoku giving them an isntant headache.
This is just a personal question (PM me the answer), when they collapse are they still aware of their surroundings and just exhausted or do they pass out?
( Fōsurai ) - Force Lightning
Type: Offensive
Rank: C
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 15
Damage: 30
Description:
The user, by using expert chakra control, moulds their Keigoku chakra before opening the portal. Through this method, the user creates a "pressure" of chakra behind the closed portal. Then, the user will open the portal suddenly, letting the foul chakra explode out into the jutsu. The sudden appearance of such pressurized chakra creates a "flash" of chakra bright enough to momentarily blind dojutsu users and sensors (only if their dojutsu/sensor techniques are active). The Keigoku then shoots forward at the target shaped like lightning, causing pain and temporary ( five seconds ) incapacitation.
~Declined~
Where can you open the portal? Do you open it in front of yourself or can you open it anywhere within midrange? How long are you expecting the “flash” to disrupt doujutsu users/sensors? A typical lightning flash is a split second and is a result from the bightness of the lightning itself. Due to the nature of the Keigoku chakra, I can not allow you to create a sustained “flash” that fills the area (enough to blind a doujutsu user for an extended period of time) with chakra that destroys the opponents mind.
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NEW TECHS:
( Noroime Sōka ) - Sangha of the Bewitching Eyes
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A
Description:
Depending on their rank in the clan, the user opens up a given number of portals shaped like eyes. Each portal then pulses, firing off a star-shaped burst of Keigoku, approximately fist-sized, at its target. The star, if it contacts a living being, corrupts the mind's link with the part of the body it landed on, completely immobilizing that part of the body. However these effects are very specific. For example, if it lands on an opponent's shoulder, that means his shoulder joint alone is immobilized, and so on. The star can be very easily blocked though - even a thin layer of pure chakra coating an opponent will block one of these stars, whereas pure chakra defenses such as the Hyuuga's Kaiten will render any number of them completely useless.
Seers of the Nekura Clan can only open one portal; it doubles as we go up the ranks. For ranks that can open multiple portals, they can open them pointing in different directions.
There must be a one turn gap between successive uses of the technique.
~Declined~
No. A lot of work will have to be done in order to get this approved. It is far to strong for a B-ranked jutsu. Make a minimum distance the portal must be from the opponent. If it opens 1 cm behind the opponents head then it’s unblockable without the use of god-modding
( Noroidzi Hari no Nami ) - Cursed Blood Needle Wave
Type: Supplemenary
Rank: C
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 15
Damage: N/A
Description:
A simple but effective technique, the Nekura makes three handseals turning any existing Keigoku on the battlefield that he wishes ( such as that from any techniques the opponent dodges or blocks ) into a wave of sharp needles that then shoot at the opponent. Whatever the rank of the Keigoku technique this is used on, the needles will be of that same rank.
~Declined~
The Keigoku that have been blocked become neutralized, therefore unusable. Keigoku that have been dodged become sentient and will only maintain the rank of the technique controlling it. Change the range to “mid” and please state the effect being hit by the needles will have.
Cut down to twice a battle, three turns each, requiring a gap between successive uses.( Togesuzumebachi no Ame ) - Rain of Stinging Wasps
Rank: B
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 20 ( +5 per turn )
Damage: 40
The Nekura clansman opens the portals in the sky, causing Keigoku to fall from the portals like rain, in a shower of individual drops. Any non-Nekura caught in this rain will experience sudden sharp mental pain as the drops touch him. Due to the repeated falling of the Keigoku raindrops, they will not be able to focus enough to use techniques that require intense concentration ( Genjutsu, Fuuinjutsu, Medjutsu, etc. ) and cannot string together more than four handseals without pause.
This technique can be used thrice per battle; each use lasts for four turns.
By sheltering under a suitable defense, the effects of this technique can be avoided.
The effects also apply to non-Nekura allies, and so this technique is not useful in combo battles or wars.
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-Declined- So you can actually have a continuous string of 12 turns of a technique that severely limits the opponent? ...
( Togesuzumebachi no Ame ) - Rain of Stinging Wasps
Rank: B
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 20 ( +5 per turn )
Damage: 40
The Nekura clansman opens the portals in the sky, causing Keigoku to fall from the portals like rain, in a shower of individual drops. Any non-Nekura caught in this rain will experience sudden sharp mental pain as the drops touch him. Due to the repeated falling of the Keigoku raindrops, they will not be able to focus enough to use techniques that require intense concentration ( Genjutsu, Fuuinjutsu, Medjutsu, etc. ) and cannot string together more than four handseals without pause.
This technique can be used twice per battle; each use lasts for three turns, and there needs to be two turns gap between each use.
By sheltering under a suitable defense, the effects of this technique can be avoided.
The effects also apply to non-Nekura allies, and so this technique is not useful in combo battles or wars.
~Declined~
Please state how large of a portal you can make. For a B-ranked jutsu I would not expect it to be able to cover the whole battlefield.
Time specified.( Hadō no Kyūjū: Kurohitsugi ) - Way of Destruction Number Ninety: Black Coffin
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description:
The user makes six handseals, causing portals to emerge on all sides around the opponent, a few metres away. Keigoku flows from these portals, before forming itself into a black coffin-shaped box surrounding the opponent, large enough to trap two people. The box covers the opponent in all sides, including above and below; contact with it makes the opponent's head ache badly. As soon as the box forms fully, spears of Keigoku manifest themselves on the walls and shoot inward, impaling an opponent caught within it. This causes severe mental agony, causing the opponent to feel exhausted and collapse temporarily for ten or so seconds.
This technique may be used only thrice per battle.
No Nekura techniques above A-rank may be used during the same turn and the next turn.
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-Declined- "ten or so" - well if you don't know how long it lasts then you're not much of a Keigoku master.
( Hadō no Kyūjū: Kurohitsugi ) - Way of Destruction Number Ninety: Black Coffin
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description:
The user makes six handseals, causing portals to emerge on all sides around the opponent, a few metres away. Keigoku flows from these portals, before forming itself into a black coffin-shaped box surrounding the opponent, large enough to trap two people. The box covers the opponent in all sides, including above and below; contact with it makes the opponent's head ache badly. As soon as the box forms fully, spears of Keigoku manifest themselves on the walls and shoot inward, impaling an opponent caught within it. This causes severe mental agony, causing the opponent to feel exhausted and collapse temporarily for twelve seconds.
This technique may be used only thrice per battle.
No Nekura techniques above A-rank may be used during the same turn and the next turn.
~Declined~
Need more information. How long does it take for the walls to form completely? Does the portal releasing chakra from below the person appear on the ground? If it does then they would already be touching the Keigoku giving them an isntant headache.
This is just a personal question (PM me the answer), when they collapse are they still aware of their surroundings and just exhausted or do they pass out?
Time specified.( Fōsurai ) - Force Lightning
Type: Offensive
Rank: C
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 15
Damage: 30
Description:
the user, by using expert chakra control, moulds their Keigoku chakra before opening the portal. Through this method, the user creates a "pressure" of chakra behind the closed portal. Then, the user will open the portal suddenly, letting the foul chakra explode out into the jutsu. The sudden appearance of such pressurized chakra creates a "flash" of chakra bright enough to momentarily blind dojutsu users and sensors (only if their dojutsu/sensor techniques are active). The Keigoku then shoots forward at the target shaped like lightning, causing pain and temporary ( a few-seconds ) incapacitation.
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-Declined- "a few-seconds" isn't a proper time span
( Fōsurai ) - Force Lightning
Type: Offensive
Rank: C
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 15
Damage: 30
Description:
The user, by using expert chakra control, moulds their Keigoku chakra before opening the portal. Through this method, the user creates a "pressure" of chakra behind the closed portal. Then, the user will open the portal suddenly, letting the foul chakra explode out into the jutsu. The sudden appearance of such pressurized chakra creates a "flash" of chakra bright enough to momentarily blind dojutsu users and sensors (only if their dojutsu/sensor techniques are active). The Keigoku then shoots forward at the target shaped like lightning, causing pain and temporary ( five seconds ) incapacitation.
~Declined~
Where can you open the portal? Do you open it in front of yourself or can you open it anywhere within midrange? How long are you expecting the “flash” to disrupt doujutsu users/sensors? A typical lightning flash is a split second and is a result from the bightness of the lightning itself. Due to the nature of the Keigoku chakra, I can not allow you to create a sustained “flash” that fills the area (enough to blind a doujutsu user for an extended period of time) with chakra that destroys the opponents mind.
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NEW TECHS:
( Noroime Sōka ) - Sangha of the Bewitching Eyes
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A
Description:
Depending on their rank in the clan, the user opens up a given number of portals shaped like eyes. Each portal then pulses, firing off a star-shaped burst of Keigoku, approximately fist-sized, at its target. The star, if it contacts a living being, corrupts the mind's link with the part of the body it landed on, completely immobilizing that part of the body. However these effects are very specific. For example, if it lands on an opponent's shoulder, that means his shoulder joint alone is immobilized, and so on. The star can be very easily blocked though - even a thin layer of pure chakra coating an opponent will block one of these stars, whereas pure chakra defenses such as the Hyuuga's Kaiten will render any number of them completely useless.
Seers of the Nekura Clan can only open one portal; it doubles as we go up the ranks. For ranks that can open multiple portals, they can open them pointing in different directions.
There must be a one turn gap between successive uses of the technique.
~Declined~
No. A lot of work will have to be done in order to get this approved. It is far to strong for a B-ranked jutsu. Make a minimum distance the portal must be from the opponent. If it opens 1 cm behind the opponents head then it’s unblockable without the use of god-modding
( Noroidzi Hari no Nami ) - Cursed Blood Needle Wave
Type: Supplemenary
Rank: C
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 15
Damage: N/A
Description:
A simple but effective technique, the Nekura makes three handseals turning any existing Keigoku on the battlefield that he wishes ( such as that from any techniques the opponent dodges or blocks ) into a wave of sharp needles that then shoot at the opponent. Whatever the rank of the Keigoku technique this is used on, the needles will be of that same rank.
~Declined~
The Keigoku that have been blocked become neutralized, therefore unusable. Keigoku that have been dodged become sentient and will only maintain the rank of the technique controlling it. Change the range to “mid” and please state the effect being hit by the needles will have.
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