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sits quietly, humming a simple tune while skipping stones across the flat grassy earth, waiting for his trainer to appear
 

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Crystal is an AE thats made up from Earth and Wind. The AE makes crystals or gemstones from the users body or from the ground below. It can be created from almost any matter based element and even from the moisture in the air itself. Weak to sound and lightning and varients of these as they are able to conduct and vibrate the element shattering it. Crystal is neutral to most other elements though. Thats about all i know.
 

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Crystal can't crystallize energy based elements, either. Anyway, let's begin. Most techniques are basic as hell, just analyze them for me, if you want to perform, you can do that too. Questions are always welcome.

(Kessho: Rokkaku Shuriken) - Crystal: Hexagonal Shuriken
Type: Offensive
Rank: D
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 10
Damage: 20
Description: Guren creates up to eight crystal snowflakes, each sharp and the size of a normal shuriken, that she flings at the opponent. The projectiles move at the same speeds as a normal shuriken

A technique where you will basically just form 8 crystal based snowflakes, which are the size of normal shuriken. These can be flung towards the opponent, and be used like normal shuriken are.

(Kessho: Kouseki Senbon) - Crystal: Crystal Needles
Type: Offensive
Rank: D
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 10
Damage: 20
Description: Guren creates a number of small, thin, sharp crystal needles resembling senbon, that she fires at the opponent. The needles cannot penetrate harder substances like dense earth or metal.

A technique where you will basically just form crystal based senbon.
 

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Crystal can't crystallize energy based elements, either. Anyway, let's begin. Most techniques are basic as hell, just analyze them for me, if you want to perform, you can do that too. Questions are always welcome.

(Kessho: Rokkaku Shuriken) - Crystal: Hexagonal Shuriken
Type: Offensive
Rank: D
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 10
Damage: 20
Description: Guren creates up to eight crystal snowflakes, each sharp and the size of a normal shuriken, that she flings at the opponent. The projectiles move at the same speeds as a normal shuriken

A technique where you will basically just form 8 crystal based snowflakes, which are the size of normal shuriken. These can be flung towards the opponent, and be used like normal shuriken are.

(Kessho: Kouseki Senbon) - Crystal: Crystal Needles
Type: Offensive
Rank: D
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 10
Damage: 20
Description: Guren creates a number of small, thin, sharp crystal needles resembling senbon, that she fires at the opponent. The needles cannot penetrate harder substances like dense earth or metal.

A technique where you will basically just form crystal based senbon.
Just one question. Do i need to form these in my hand and throw them physically, or can i create them say, from the air molecules behind the opponent and launch them? Aside from that no questions, super simple stuff really, make shuriken and senbon
 

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Formed in close range of you, and fired towards the opponent.

(Tomegane no Jutsu) - Telescope Technique
Type: Supplementary
Rank: D
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 10
Damage: N/A
Description: Guren creates a crystal ball, which provides her an aerial view of the battlefield, letting her see the opponent's moves. However, if the opponent is completely enshrouded in something, like Mist or Smoke, the ball will not work. It is extremely fragile and has to be continually held in her hand to use its effects.

A technique where a crystal ball is created, which acts similar to Gaara's third eye and allows you to see the field with it. However, it has to be held to sustain it.

(Shoton: Suisho To) - Crystal Release: Jade Crystal Blade
Type: Offensive
Rank: D
Range: Short
Chakra: 10
Damage: 20
Description: Guren can quickly form a blade made of crystal on her arm, the length and size of a standard issue ninja tanto. The blades are only as strong as a normal sword. Blades can be formed on both arms if needed.

A technique where you will form a blade made of Crystal, that manifests on your arm, and has the length of a regular tanto. Pretty standard, but useful for close encounters.
 

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Formed in close range of you, and fired towards the opponent.

(Tomegane no Jutsu) - Telescope Technique
Type: Supplementary
Rank: D
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 10
Damage: N/A
Description: Guren creates a crystal ball, which provides her an aerial view of the battlefield, letting her see the opponent's moves. However, if the opponent is completely enshrouded in something, like Mist or Smoke, the ball will not work. It is extremely fragile and has to be continually held in her hand to use its effects.

A technique where a crystal ball is created, which acts similar to Gaara's third eye and allows you to see the field with it. However, it has to be held to sustain it.

(Shoton: Suisho To) - Crystal Release: Jade Crystal Blade
Type: Offensive
Rank: D
Range: Short
Chakra: 10
Damage: 20
Description: Guren can quickly form a blade made of crystal on her arm, the length and size of a standard issue ninja tanto. The blades are only as strong as a normal sword. Blades can be formed on both arms if needed.

A technique where you will form a blade made of Crystal, that manifests on your arm, and has the length of a regular tanto. Pretty standard, but useful for close encounters.
First one is kinda useless. Says up to long range but im guessing it would only work per landmark NW wise? Probably never use this <_<

Kinda cool technique, can turn a simple punch into stabbing sword, if someone doesnt have chakra sensory/doujutsu, can be a relaly good surprise Taijutsu addition, be nicer at higher ranks
 

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Not sure on that, mostly in fight usages it talks about.

(Shoton: Kessho Yasu) - Crystal Release : Crystal Lance
Type: Offensive
Rank: C
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 15
Damage: 30
Description: This jutsu allows Guren to form crystal that completely covers her hand from her shoulder and then extending outwards, forming a huge, ten meter long sharp rod of crystal that can stab opponents. When this jutsu is in effect, Guren cannot move her fingers or wrist.

A technique where you will cover your hand, all the way to your shoulder in crystal, and basically form a massive lance that can be used to pierce the opponent. Pretty simple, but sucks that the hand is unusable when this is in effect.

(Shoton: Shuriken Ranbu) - Crystal Release: Shuriken Wild Dance
Type: Offensive
Rank: C
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 15
Damage: 30
Description: A variant of the All Directions Shuriken technique, Guren condenses crystal particles around herself forming many small shuriken, which then fly forwards in every direction. These shuriken have the speed and strength of normal shuriken.

A variant of All Directions Shuriken, but instead of shuriken, its crystallized shuriken! That's pretty much all to it, an omnidirectional crystal shuriken technique.
 

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Not sure on that, mostly in fight usages it talks about.

(Shoton: Kessho Yasu) - Crystal Release : Crystal Lance
Type: Offensive
Rank: C
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 15
Damage: 30
Description: This jutsu allows Guren to form crystal that completely covers her hand from her shoulder and then extending outwards, forming a huge, ten meter long sharp rod of crystal that can stab opponents. When this jutsu is in effect, Guren cannot move her fingers or wrist.

A technique where you will cover your hand, all the way to your shoulder in crystal, and basically form a massive lance that can be used to pierce the opponent. Pretty simple, but sucks that the hand is unusable when this is in effect.

(Shoton: Shuriken Ranbu) - Crystal Release: Shuriken Wild Dance
Type: Offensive
Rank: C
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 15
Damage: 30
Description: A variant of the All Directions Shuriken technique, Guren condenses crystal particles around herself forming many small shuriken, which then fly forwards in every direction. These shuriken have the speed and strength of normal shuriken.

A variant of All Directions Shuriken, but instead of shuriken, its crystallized shuriken! That's pretty much all to it, an omnidirectional crystal shuriken technique.
Wew, super simple techniques. Big downside on the crystal lance, probably not a technique ill look at often, unless pairing it with sharingan for some spoopy combo that might come up

Second technique says any direction, does this mean i can change their direction during flight, or are they shot and thats me releasing my hold on them?
 

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They are released, yeah.

(Shoton: Omiwatari no Jutsu) - Crystal Release: The Gods' Crossing Technique
Type: Offensive
Rank: C
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 15
Damage: 30
Description: Guren makes four handseals, and numerous pale blue crystal spikes, each the size of a man, erupt from the ground. They can be made to erupt around a target, trapping him, or directly at him to stab him.

A technique where you will form four hand seals and cause numerous pale blue spikes of Crystal to erupt from the ground, to either impale or trap the opponent.

(Shoton: Suisho Kyo) - Crystal Release: Jade Crystal Mirror
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: Short
Chakra: 15
Damage: N/A
Description: This technique is solely used by Guren. She forms a large mirror in the shape of a snowflake, which she can then use to perform the Jade Crystal Clone Technique. The mirror shatters after the clones are produced.

A technique where you will use your chakra to form a mirror made of crystal, that is in the shape of a snowflake. This can be used for the future Crystal Clone technique.

(Shoton: Suishō Bunshin no Jutsu) Crystal Release: Crystal Clone Technique
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A
Description: After performing Crystal Release: Jade Crystal Mirror, Guren can make multiple clones of herself emerge from the mirror. These clones are made of crystal and crumble back into crystal after they are defeated. Clones made by this technique are also able to deceive Byakugan users because of the reflective nature of the clone. However, by focusing their sight, this can be circumvented.
Note: Can only be performed after Crystal Release: Jade Crystal Mirror
Note: Follows the clone battle usage restriction

With the mirror formed, these clones will emerge from it and are fully made of crystal but are able to deceive the Byakugan because of their surface, unless they know this, and can accommodate for it.
 

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They are released, yeah.

(Shoton: Omiwatari no Jutsu) - Crystal Release: The Gods' Crossing Technique
Type: Offensive
Rank: C
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 15
Damage: 30
Description: Guren makes four handseals, and numerous pale blue crystal spikes, each the size of a man, erupt from the ground. They can be made to erupt around a target, trapping him, or directly at him to stab him.

A technique where you will form four hand seals and cause numerous pale blue spikes of Crystal to erupt from the ground, to either impale or trap the opponent.

(Shoton: Suisho Kyo) - Crystal Release: Jade Crystal Mirror
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: Short
Chakra: 15
Damage: N/A
Description: This technique is solely used by Guren. She forms a large mirror in the shape of a snowflake, which she can then use to perform the Jade Crystal Clone Technique. The mirror shatters after the clones are produced.

A technique where you will use your chakra to form a mirror made of crystal, that is in the shape of a snowflake. This can be used for the future Crystal Clone technique.

(Shoton: Suishō Bunshin no Jutsu) Crystal Release: Crystal Clone Technique
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A
Description: After performing Crystal Release: Jade Crystal Mirror, Guren can make multiple clones of herself emerge from the mirror. These clones are made of crystal and crumble back into crystal after they are defeated. Clones made by this technique are also able to deceive Byakugan users because of the reflective nature of the clone. However, by focusing their sight, this can be circumvented.
Note: Can only be performed after Crystal Release: Jade Crystal Mirror
Note: Follows the clone battle usage restriction

With the mirror formed, these clones will emerge from it and are fully made of crystal but are able to deceive the Byakugan because of their surface, unless they know this, and can accommodate for it.
First technique is literally Earth spikes Crystal edition. Im assuming to "Impale" someone, the whole "5m" away rule applies, or can i make spikes directly below my opponent? Handseals are a bit of a turn off when the earth version does the same thing without handseals.

Combo technique, pretty cool to set up, kinda useless in battle cause you'd rarely have a chance to use normal shadow clone, let alone a mirror then clones. Can these clones do any crystal jutsu?
 

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This can be made from under the opponent, ground rumbles, etc. And I'll find out, though it doesn't mention it, I'll go with no for now.

(Shoton: Dai Kessho Senbon) - Crystal Release: Large Crystal Needles
Type: Offensive
Rank: C
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 15
Damage: 30
Description: Guren creates long, sharp, and pointed bright pink and white crystals that shoot at the target at extremely high speeds with pinpoint accuracy.

A technique where you will basically create a very sharp, pointed crystal which is blasted towards the opponent with great accuracy. A pretty basic projectile based technique.

(Shōton: Shōton no Jutsu) Crystal Release Technique
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 15
Damage: 30
Description: The Crystal Release is a rare and specialised field of elemental ninjutsu that can create crystal as well as manipulate already-existing crystals and crystalline structures. With this basic technique left to creativity, Guren can create small-scaled attacks and objects with her unique Kekkei Genkai

A technique where you will just manipulate existing Crystal structures, in order to form small stuff like spikes, and what not.

(Shōton: Suishō Rokkakuchū) Crystal Release: Jade Crystal Hexagonal Pillars
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 15
Damage: N/A (+10 to Ninjutsu techniques)
Description: By creating five large crystalline pillars around the user, this technique can be used to enhance the potency of other techniques. It was used to greatly amplify Yūkimaru's ability to the point that he could summon the Three-Tails, although with assistance from Kabuto's medication. Although the technique contains the word "hexagonal", the pillars appear in a pentagonal formation.

Note: Active for three turns and only works on techniques created within its boundaries

A technique where you will cause five pillars to rise up around yourself, in order to increase the potency of your techniques. Doesn't say how, but its cool.
 

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This can be made from under the opponent, ground rumbles, etc. And I'll find out, though it doesn't mention it, I'll go with no for now.

(Shoton: Dai Kessho Senbon) - Crystal Release: Large Crystal Needles
Type: Offensive
Rank: C
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 15
Damage: 30
Description: Guren creates long, sharp, and pointed bright pink and white crystals that shoot at the target at extremely high speeds with pinpoint accuracy.

A technique where you will basically create a very sharp, pointed crystal which is blasted towards the opponent with great accuracy. A pretty basic projectile based technique.

(Shōton: Shōton no Jutsu) Crystal Release Technique
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 15
Damage: 30
Description: The Crystal Release is a rare and specialised field of elemental ninjutsu that can create crystal as well as manipulate already-existing crystals and crystalline structures. With this basic technique left to creativity, Guren can create small-scaled attacks and objects with her unique Kekkei Genkai

A technique where you will just manipulate existing Crystal structures, in order to form small stuff like spikes, and what not.

(Shōton: Suishō Rokkakuchū) Crystal Release: Jade Crystal Hexagonal Pillars
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 15
Damage: N/A (+10 to Ninjutsu techniques)
Description: By creating five large crystalline pillars around the user, this technique can be used to enhance the potency of other techniques. It was used to greatly amplify Yūkimaru's ability to the point that he could summon the Three-Tails, although with assistance from Kabuto's medication. Although the technique contains the word "hexagonal", the pillars appear in a pentagonal formation.

Note: Active for three turns and only works on techniques created within its boundaries

A technique where you will cause five pillars to rise up around yourself, in order to increase the potency of your techniques. Doesn't say how, but its cool.
Nothing much to say about the first, its just, a crystal spike, nothing fancy.

Second is kinda cool, good set up for supplementary into asn offensive, i like it.

Last technique, is just weird haha. Im assuming if any of the 5 pillars are broken, the boost leaves as well? or do all 5 need to be busted?
 

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Imma say the same, with one broken, its gone.

(Kessho no Yoroi) - Crystal Armour
Type: Defensive
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A
Description: This jutsu allows Guren to become encased in a thin sheet of crystal to protect her from blunt force trauma. This armor can also aid Guren in performing stronger physical attacks, i.e. her punches can break normal human bone easily. The crystal is transparent and can only be noticed by light reflecting off it. It affords no protection against Nin-jutsu and slows Guren down to one rank below her ability.

A technique where you will encase yourself in a thin sheet of crystal to protect yourself from blunt force. This can help in performing stronger close range attacks, but it slows you down.

(Shōton: Kurenai no Kajitsu) - Crystal Release: Crimson Fruit
Type: Supplementary/Defensive
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra: 15
Damage: N/A
Description: Guren creates a dome of crystal to surround a target. It is highly durable from both external and internal attacks, and can be used to either protect or trap a target.

A technique where you create a dome of crystal around an opponent, or yourself for either trapping or protecting purposes. Pretty simple to do.

(Shoton: Hasho Koryo) - Crystal Release: Tearing Crystal Falling Dragon
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: Guren creates a crystal dragon after making three handseals. The dragon is large enough to allow Guren to stand on it and it attacks by rushing at the opponent to slam into them. Upto two dragons can be made with this technique.

A technique where you will with three hand seals, create a massive dragon made of Crystal which can rush towards the opponent, and slam into them. Two dragons can be made with this.
 

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Imma say the same, with one broken, its gone.

(Kessho no Yoroi) - Crystal Armour
Type: Defensive
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A
Description: This jutsu allows Guren to become encased in a thin sheet of crystal to protect her from blunt force trauma. This armor can also aid Guren in performing stronger physical attacks, i.e. her punches can break normal human bone easily. The crystal is transparent and can only be noticed by light reflecting off it. It affords no protection against Nin-jutsu and slows Guren down to one rank below her ability.

A technique where you will encase yourself in a thin sheet of crystal to protect yourself from blunt force. This can help in performing stronger close range attacks, but it slows you down.

(Shōton: Kurenai no Kajitsu) - Crystal Release: Crimson Fruit
Type: Supplementary/Defensive
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra: 15
Damage: N/A
Description: Guren creates a dome of crystal to surround a target. It is highly durable from both external and internal attacks, and can be used to either protect or trap a target.

A technique where you create a dome of crystal around an opponent, or yourself for either trapping or protecting purposes. Pretty simple to do.

(Shoton: Hasho Koryo) - Crystal Release: Tearing Crystal Falling Dragon
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: Guren creates a crystal dragon after making three handseals. The dragon is large enough to allow Guren to stand on it and it attacks by rushing at the opponent to slam into them. Upto two dragons can be made with this technique.

A technique where you will with three hand seals, create a massive dragon made of Crystal which can rush towards the opponent, and slam into them. Two dragons can be made with this.
Cool technique, no handseals which is good. Only one question, is it fast enough to activate during CQC or does it need to be before opponent gets into striking range?

Doubtful id use it to cover my opponent, too easy to break, but as a solid defense, its a cool technique. Once again its similar to Earth dome, but handy non the less.

Finally a cool offensive technique haha. Not much to say, its pretty standard, but one question. Can i form the dragons up to mid range, or do i need to make them short range and they can go up to mid range?
 

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I'd say you can use it in both scenarios. Short range created, to mid.

(Shōton: Suishō Hoīru) - Crystal Release: Crystal Wheel
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra: 15
Damage: N/A
Description: Guren creates a ring-shaped wheel made of crystal around her, allowing her to keep above water and reach a high speed.

Note: Only usable on liquid surfaces

A technique where you will create a ring of crystal around you, which is basically driven as it spins, and can keep you atop water surfaces.

(Shōton: Suishō Toge O Seichō) - Crystal Release: Growing Crystal Thorns
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 15
Damage: 30
Description: By focusing her chakra throughout her body, Guren creates growing thorn-like crystals that she can manipulate to continuously grow towards her target's direction.

Focus your chakra through your body, and create thorn like crystals, which can be used to go towards the opponent.

(Shōton: Doragon Tsume) - Crystal Release: Dragon Talons
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short-mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user begins by forming a single handsign and causing her finger nails to grow crystal talons which extend up to 1" past finger length. These talons can extend at fast speeds leaving very small room for error when evading freeform slashing and can retract back just as fast. The user also has the ability to at will shoot the nails like senbon from their hands to mid range. By doing this, the fingers will revert back to normal and not be crystal anymore.

Note: Can only be used three times during battle.
Note: The user cannot extend and retract more than twice for each way in the same turn.
Note: Can maintain talons for two turns.
Note: Courtesy of Juha

A single hand seal, and basically create Talons of Crystal. These can be shot like senbon, or simply be used to deliver slashes and what not.
 
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