This is my first attempt at writing a story on Narutobase, I will try my best to lay it out nicely and maybe you people can read it all without hassle 
O'k, here it goes!
O'k, here it goes!Chapter 1
Sword Training & Hero
*The Daylight approaches*
- We see a small house, in the place called Faldrin's Farm -
This my people, is when the Story will Begin..
The Beginning
6:05 AM
Father: O'k my Children, its time for Training today, Come on Wake up already!, I don't have all day you know!
Children: But Father, we don't want to do training today, please don't make us.
Father: I'm sorry children, but for you to be strong men and women, we need you to train. Our family needs to be protected, and me and your mother are much to old for that..you see. I don't like doing this, but I will try to go easier on you, O'k..?
Children: Fine then, *Groaning*
*The children get out of bed sloppily*
Child 1: What kind of training are we doing today anyway, dad?
Child 2: Yeah I want to know that too!
Father: We'll be doing Formation Training today
Child 3: God dammit I hate Formation training,
Child 1: Oh no she said the ''G'' word,
Father: What did you just say? Come here, he commands
Child 3: I'm sorry papa I didn-..
Father: *Interuppts* I don't want you ever saying that word again you got it? The Gods gave us strength, don't dare say that again he shouts.
Child 3: Yes..papa, sorry
Father: O'k, the four of you, I want you in a squad formation, the Diamond one, come on, faster, if you go that slow in War you will be killed!
*The children rush into formation*
*Child 4 slips into the wrong area*
*The Children look down at the ground, shaking at him*
Father: What is this? Listen, Hero, you are in the wrong area, move to your right!
Hero: O'k father, is this O'k?
Father: No, time to go alittle more!
Hero: How about this? He repeats..
Father: Thats better boy, just don't screw up like that again, as I said in War, you don't have the time to think or get something wrong.
Child 3: But Dad! He didn't me-
*The Dad looks over with an angry eye*
Child 3: Nevermind dad, hehe..*Nervous Laughter*
Child 2: Hey sis, what are you laughing at? he whispers
Child 1: She probably likes Hero, oh I know, shes loooooves him,
*The Two boys laugh hysterically*
Child 3: No I don't!
*They continue to laugh*
*The girls eyes start to water*
Father: Thats enough of you two,
*He slaps them on their heads*
Child 1 &: Ouch, what was that for? - Yeah what the he-. Nevermind
*As they rup their heads*
Father: Did I ask you to speak?
Child 1: No you didn't..
Child 2: No.. sorry
Father: Right thats it for today, we could of got some sword training done but you boys cause too much trouble, you all better be up sharp in the morning.. Got it? he shouts
Children: Yes Sir!
*Father leaves the Area and goes towards the Barn*
Child 1: Why does he have to be so hard on us?
Child 2: Yeah I'm getting sick of him
Child 3: I'm getting sick of you two!
*She bursts into tears*
Child 1: Oh shut up Saara! Crying is all you ever do..
Saara: Just leave me Alone! She screams
*Hero walks over to her*, he then shouts
Hero: Now you see what you made her do?
*Hero moves her head onto his chest*
Hero: Don't listen to these guys, Saara
Hero: They jus ' trying to annoy you'
Saara: O'k, *Sniff* I'll try.
*Saara and Hero walk up to the Farmhouse*
Child 1: What do you think their problem was anyway? We didn't do much!
Child 2: Well it kinda was your fault Vlad
Vlad: No it wasn't! Why is it always my fault! he shouts
*Child 2 walks away to the Barn away from Vlad*
7:16 AM
Vlad: Damn all my brothers and sister, I hate them all! They just don't understand me at all, they never will..
End of Chapter One
Last edited:
