~Crow~ Prologue

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Hi everyone this is an original Anime that I thought of over my break so I hope you like it :)

~Crow~
Prologue

The air was stiff and crows were landing on tree tops. The night was calm but deeper in the woods something was happening a young boy with: wild spiky black hair, Tan skin, black eyes, a red shirt with a few holes here and there, black pants, and red shoes was running but from what?

The boy turned his head and saw three gray, shaggy, hungry wolves chasing him.

Boy: "Leave me alone!"

Suddenly the wild spiky haired boy tripped on a tree root and landed on his back.

Boy: "Ouch,!"

Three three wolves walked closer and closer, inch by inch they saliva drooped out of their mouths thinking of how good the boy would taste. The wolf in the middle who seemed to be leading the group launched for the boy.

Boy: "I said leave me alone!"

The wild spiky haired kid tightened his fist and suddenly fire began to form. The boy shot the red-orange flames at the air born wolf, the fireball missed the wolf and barely glazed its fur and hit a big tree behind it instead. The flames spread almost immediately spread across the tree scaring the wolves and the boy.

Boy shocked of what he just did: "D-did I-I j-just, Set a tree on fire!"

The red-orange flames began to spread covering grass and other trees. The fire circled him but didn't seem to come any closer. Crows began to fly off of the tree top trying to see what was going on as the ashes floated into the sky.

Boy: "Oh no, this is bad, very bad."

The flames crept closer and closer.

Boy: "Stay calm Blaze if you can make fire, then its possible that you can take it back right?"

Blaze took a deep breath slowly he inhaled and then exhaled. The fire as well seemed to be breathing slowly it went up and down.

Blaze: "I just have to figure out a way to make the fire disappear."

Blaze held his hand out and reached for the flames, it covered his hand and he arms. Suddenly a man with tall and pointed icy blue hair, brown skin, black eyes, a blue shirt that had black letters spelled "Crow", black pants, and black shoes. The man stared at Blaze with amazement, while hiding behind a tree that had been untouched by the flames.

The man: "Amazing this kid is what I've been looking for."

Blaze couldn't handle the fire and it slid off his arm like some kind of smooth jell and began to spread. The flames covered the tree that the man was hiding behind. So the icy haired man leaped high in the air like an acrobat and held out his arms. The air was cold even thou the fire was still spreading and suddenly the man sent out small ice crystals freezing the fire. Blaze gazed with amazement as the fire became solid and frozen.

Blaze: "Wow!"

The man landed perfectly on his feet right in front of Blaze.

Man: Are you okay kid?"

Blaze: "Um, yeah that thing you did."

Man: "You mean freezing the fire oh that was nothing you have a power that not most people have."

Blaze: "I can create fire but what do you want, why did you help me?"

Man: "I'm sorry where are my manners call me Frozone I am able to manipulate ice and or liquid particles, my goal is to create a group of powered teens that can help the world if you join me I may be able to teach you how to control your powers."

Blaze Thinking: "Sure head out with a stranger on a quest that may possibly get everybody killed, hey its better than going back."

Blaze began to think about the man that owned him how he would beat if he didn't do something right. The nights of hard work and nothing but getting yelled at. It infuriated him how he would get punished for no reason. Suddenly a small flame started above Blaze's head.
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Frozone: Are you okay.

The Flame disappeared and Blaze gave Frozone a smile.

Blaze: "Well, I guess I can't go back, so sure why not."

Frozone smiled and walked into the forest.

Blaze: Hey where are you going?

Frozone turned around and cracked another smile.

Frozone: "Come on we don't have all day soon there are going to be people here and we need to get as far away as we can."

Frozone sprinted and Blaze was right behind him, Frozone leaped high in the air.

Blaze: "I don't know if I can do that."

Frozone landed on top of a tree a few feet away from Blaze.

Frozone: Don't worry you'll get there."

Suddenly Frozone stepped backwards and disappeared.

blaze is shock: "Wow where did he go?"

Suddenly something hard hit the back of Blaze's head and he fell to the ground unconscious. Frozone picked up Blaze and carried him to his house.


I hope you like
it :)
 

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I, quite honestly, despise the script-style of writing, but you did use some nice descriptions, though your language was a bit simplistic.
I don't know how old you are, but writing can serve as a perfect way of practising for writing essays and such, so test yourself a bit.
 

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I, quite honestly, despise the script-style of writing, but you did use some nice descriptions, though your language was a bit simplistic.
I don't know how old you are, but writing can serve as a perfect way of practising for writing essays and such, so test yourself a bit.
okay Thank you for the advice :)
 
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