created my own Manga

[Usuitamaki]

As the title say. Fam I need your feedback on it and tell me what you think. It will mean a lot. This is not for promotion, I just want some feedback On my work. Thanks have a bless day. :hyper::hyper:

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[Fountain]

Very creative, keep working on it

 

[Deadlift]

Thank you for sharing

 

[roark]

your art style will need to improve

 

[SIR HERDERP PRESIDERP SDO]

Nice, good job. :elmo:

 

[roark]

hm... that said, you is creative and your concpet is nice, but try not spoil your ideas too much

 

[Phact]

Good job