Hello!!!! Peeps I'm finally back with Tiquan sorry it's been so long but it's fine I wanna be more active with this I missed my fans lol. RL has been real stressful lately and I almost gave up on writing but I was convinced not to, thanks guys....anyway with out further ado I give you Chapter 2!!!!
If you're new to this story please read Chapter 1 there are only 18 parts first I warn you I sucked when I started( and i mean sucked! god damn it was terrible) but it gets better.
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Here's a theme song ill be using for Chapter 2 this got me real into it as I wrote Ch. 2 and it goes with it pretty well in my opinion.
" I'm saying you're the nine tailed Jinchuriki!" Tiquan's Grandfather said.
" No No No!!! That's impossible the tailed beast are just a silly legend!" Tiquan started to insist.
Tiquan's dad put a hand on his shoulder.
" Tiquan.... look I know this is hard to take in but it's the truth."
" But how? I don't understand they....they were just legend, a silly bed time story you told us."
" Tiquan come here and sit down and ill be able to explain it all" His grandfather said.
Tiquan did what his grandfather said and sat down next to him.
" One night the nine tails and the one tail popped up here in Florida. The intention was to capture the one tail, but we where mislead and headed towards the nine tails."
How were you mislead?" Tiquan interrupted.
" Well either the news anchor read it wrong or the news telegram was just wrong either way it said:
" Kyûbi in the North! Shukaku in the South! We encourage all families to stay inside while the Military deals with these monsters"
We went South but we didn't find Shukaku, except we found a bunch of dead military personal and a very angry demon fox." Darnell explained
" Well if he killed all of those military guys how did you guys get him inside me " Tiquan asked as he points at himself.
" Well first off we must say you weren't the original planed Jinchuriki." Shara replied.
Tiquan's face showed nothing but shock. " If not me then who?"
There as a brief moment of silence before Shara answered. "It was suppose to be Alton."
Tiquan clinched his fist in anger and then punched the wall next to him, which happened to be a brick wall if it hurt Tiquan at all he wasn't showing it. " Then why me?"
" After stunning the fox for a moment and not having the confidence in my men and women to do it again besides wait for Alton we needed to act quickly, you were that solution." Darnell said.
" Wait a minute! Why was I there in the first place? Tiquan yelled.
" Didn't have anybody to take care of you and we had to go so I strapped you on to me and went out to battle stupid I know." Shara replied to him.
Darnell gave quick glares to his daughter and grandson and then continued with his story. " So like I was saying besides waiting for Alton to get to the battlefield I knew we had to act quickly and I told your mother to seal him within you."
Tiquan quickly stood up and turned to his mom " And you listened to him!?"
Shara opened her mouth to say something and then closed it and turned away from her son's gaze.
" No she didn't she rejected me and tried to argue but I wouldn't let her, eventually I had ordered her. She still refused but eventually gave in after I convinced her, surprising you're body was able to take it even as a baby." Darnell said.
" So you're telling me I've been a monster since I was a baby?" Tiquan said deeply, you can tell he was angered.
" No sweetie you're not a monster...." Shara began to say
" Then! What am!?" He yelled at her.
"Calm down please." His mother said calmly
" Calm down!! Calm down!? You want me to calm down after finding out I've been a monster all my life!" Tiquan yelled back.
" Tiquan! Listen to you're moma!" His dad shouted.
" You guys want me to calm down!? How!? I didn't ask for this! You made me into the freak I am today and you want me to calm down! Its your fault that girl is dead! Its your fault that ill be viewed as a freak for the rest of my life. Give me one good reason to why I should!" Tiquan yelled back at his family, his eyes began to turn red.
" Because the nine tails feeds on your anger that's how he comes out." His grandfather said
Tiquan just turned around and walked towards the front door. His parents began to go after him but ultimately were stopped by Darnell. Before Tiquan walked out the door he grabbed his black hoodie and put it knowing exactly what was waiting for him. Tiquan walked out of the door and there were hundreds of members the media and press. Tiquan walked threw head down, not saying a word nor showing a single emotion, dividing them like the Red Sea. The reporters were talking loudly and taking pictures of the Jinchuriki. Even with all the noises around him Tiquan continued to walk and stayed silent deep within his own thought.
Am, I the only one? Why me?Lorimar.... I killed her, I'm a murderer No IT killed her! I'm innocent. But still, I feel guilty.
Tiquan walked down a long narrow dark road eventually losing the media trapped deep within his own head. Tiquan hasn't been seen by anyone since walking down that road.
There was a funeral for Lorimar. Everyone and their mother attended the funeral of the young girl everyone but Tiquan, even though his family sat in the the row directly across from Lorimars family and friends, he was no where to be found. The mood of the funeral was rather gloomier than the norm. Those who spoke of her at the podium always broke down into tears, Casey's break down was the worst. All but one broke down, Mr. Diaz Lorimars dad. When he came to the podium he had a stern look upon his face when he spoke he deeply and angrily.
" Last week, my daughter Lorimar Diaz was murdered by a demon!"
There was whispering and murmuring from the attendants.
" Lorimar was a good girl! She didn't deserve the way to die the way she did! I would have fathered her die in battle and die nobly than the way she did."
Mr. Diaz ranted about his daughter death for the next 15 minutes until he was stopped by the priest and told him to take a seat. He did just that but as he sat that he gave a sharp look at the parents of the demon who killed his daughter. After he sat down a couple of more people came up to the podium and cried their eyes out as they talked about the young girl.
It was time for the burial of the young girl everyone who attended the funeral was at the burial ceremony except the family of Tiquan, Mr. Diaz had them banned. However there was one person on a distant hill watching from afar, tears were running down his brown skin. He watched Lorimars body slowly descend into the ground and as her body went six feet under he turned to leave.
" So you finally decide to show up." Said a mysterious female voice from behind him.
The boy stopped and spoke softly and slowly. " Why should you care of I decided to show up or not? If you want your revenge? Then do it now."
" No I don't want that at all. Tiquan I'm hear to warn you about my father, he wants your head. "
Tiquan then chuckled a bit and then turned around and looked at the girl, revealing to her his Sharingan. " Angie do you think I'm stupid? Tell me something I don't know!"
Angie is Lorimars older sister and if you say them together you'd think they were twins yet they were a year apart. Angie had slick black her, a nose piercing and kind of an hourglass type of figure.
Angie gasped as she saw his Sharingan. " Hybrid..." She quietly whispered.
Tiquan turned away from her. " You mean freak."
Angie walked up to Tiquan. " No you're not a freak, just misunderstood."
" Misunderstood!? Misunderstood!? Everybody in this damn city besides my family thinks I'm a freak!" He yelled.
She put her hand over his mouth quickly. " Quiet down, they'll hear you down there."
He removed her hand then snapped back quickly. " Why should I care? Everybody hates me anyway."
She looked around slowly and spoke softly. " Not everybody."
He looked back at her. " Then tell me who doesn't."
Angie looked directly into his eye. " I don't."
He then ran up to her and hugged her tightly. " How? How can you even say that? Even after I killed your sister? "
She hugged him tightly as well. " Because unlike some people I know it wasn't you it was something deep down you couldn't control..... A power you will eventually control one day. Tiquan I can't stay here for long before my dad starts looking for me but believe me when I say this; I have faith in you. This power you have is truly amazing. I know you can control it and eventually help people with it.
Tiquan looked at her with tears falling. " Thank you Angie."
" You're welcome." She said smiling.
The two looked at each for a quick moment which felt like hours and lightly kissed each other. Angie then slowly broke the kiss and her light brown skin was was red with blood.
" I I have to go....."
" It's fine I understand leave before your dad finds us." He said smiling.
Yeah" she smiled back and began to walk away but stopped shortly after. " Tiquan I believe in you and the things you can do. " She said and then skipped away with a smile on her face.
Tiquan had a smile on his face he had rebuilt confidence he felt trusted, he felt honored and more importantly he felt loved. Tiquan then jumped into the air and jumped from tree to tree smiling on his home. Little did Tiquan and Angie know that her dad was watching them the whole time and now he was filled with rage but he stayed calm and called over a memeber of his cabinet.
" Set up an emergency press meeting for me at 5:00." He said deeply and coldly.
Author's Note
If you're new to this story please read Chapter 1 there are only 18 parts first I warn you I sucked when I started( and i mean sucked! god damn it was terrible) but it gets better.
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Characters that have appeared
Tiquan- One of two Sharingan/Byakugan Hybrid Children who has a lot to learn about the world and most importantly himself.
T'Ziah- Tiquan's younger brother and the second Sharingan/Byakugan Child not much is known about him expect that he was kidnaped by Orochimaru and wants to kill Alton.
Alton- Tiquan and T'Ziahs foster brother but hasn't been seen since the massacre.
Darnell- Tiquan and T'Ziah's grandfather, Shara's the dad. He is also the head of the Brown family he are descendants of the legendary Uchiha clan.
Sylvia- Darnell's wife and Tiquan and T'Ziah's grandmother, Shara's mom.
Vera- Tiquan and T'Ziah's Grandmother, Larry's mom. She is the head of the Conley family who are descendants of the legendary Hyuga clan.
Larry- Tiquan and T'Ziah's father he is set to be the next head of the Conley family.
Shara- Tiquan and T'Ziah's mother. She is currently taking care of Tiquan and T'Ziah.
Jermane- Larry's cousin, he is a Collins who are descendants of the Nara clan.
Jeremy- Larry's cousin, has implanted Sharingan from Wayne Brown, his brother in law.
Wayne- Tiquan's deceased cousin he's 10 older than Tiquan, he was killed by Alton during the massacre but was resurrected by Kabuto.
Orochimaru and Kabuto- The only two known "sages" they survived through tout the years by using Obitos and Madara Uchiha's DNA after the 4th great ninja war.
Stanton- Tiquan's friend who specializes in the wind style jutsu.
Lorimar- Young girl who was killed by Tiquan accidentally.
Dominic- A Friend of Tiquan's who's was hospitalized by Lorimar.
Casey- Lorimars boyfriend who became very jealous of her friendship with Tiquan.
Larry B. - Profound swordsman, he's his very good friends withnLorimar with Casey and Lorimar.
Mr. Diaz- Lorimars dad who wants Tiquan's head.
T'Ziah- Tiquan's younger brother and the second Sharingan/Byakugan Child not much is known about him expect that he was kidnaped by Orochimaru and wants to kill Alton.
Alton- Tiquan and T'Ziahs foster brother but hasn't been seen since the massacre.
Darnell- Tiquan and T'Ziah's grandfather, Shara's the dad. He is also the head of the Brown family he are descendants of the legendary Uchiha clan.
Sylvia- Darnell's wife and Tiquan and T'Ziah's grandmother, Shara's mom.
Vera- Tiquan and T'Ziah's Grandmother, Larry's mom. She is the head of the Conley family who are descendants of the legendary Hyuga clan.
Larry- Tiquan and T'Ziah's father he is set to be the next head of the Conley family.
Shara- Tiquan and T'Ziah's mother. She is currently taking care of Tiquan and T'Ziah.
Jermane- Larry's cousin, he is a Collins who are descendants of the Nara clan.
Jeremy- Larry's cousin, has implanted Sharingan from Wayne Brown, his brother in law.
Wayne- Tiquan's deceased cousin he's 10 older than Tiquan, he was killed by Alton during the massacre but was resurrected by Kabuto.
Orochimaru and Kabuto- The only two known "sages" they survived through tout the years by using Obitos and Madara Uchiha's DNA after the 4th great ninja war.
Stanton- Tiquan's friend who specializes in the wind style jutsu.
Lorimar- Young girl who was killed by Tiquan accidentally.
Dominic- A Friend of Tiquan's who's was hospitalized by Lorimar.
Casey- Lorimars boyfriend who became very jealous of her friendship with Tiquan.
Larry B. - Profound swordsman, he's his very good friends withnLorimar with Casey and Lorimar.
Mr. Diaz- Lorimars dad who wants Tiquan's head.
Here's a theme song ill be using for Chapter 2 this got me real into it as I wrote Ch. 2 and it goes with it pretty well in my opinion.
[video=youtube;wwH27vacOb8]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wwH27vacOb8[/video]
Chroncles of Tiquan Conley Chapter 2
Part 1 : The Truth
Part 1 : The Truth
" I'm saying you're the nine tailed Jinchuriki!" Tiquan's Grandfather said.
" No No No!!! That's impossible the tailed beast are just a silly legend!" Tiquan started to insist.
Tiquan's dad put a hand on his shoulder.
" Tiquan.... look I know this is hard to take in but it's the truth."
" But how? I don't understand they....they were just legend, a silly bed time story you told us."
" Tiquan come here and sit down and ill be able to explain it all" His grandfather said.
Tiquan did what his grandfather said and sat down next to him.
" One night the nine tails and the one tail popped up here in Florida. The intention was to capture the one tail, but we where mislead and headed towards the nine tails."
How were you mislead?" Tiquan interrupted.
" Well either the news anchor read it wrong or the news telegram was just wrong either way it said:
" Kyûbi in the North! Shukaku in the South! We encourage all families to stay inside while the Military deals with these monsters"
We went South but we didn't find Shukaku, except we found a bunch of dead military personal and a very angry demon fox." Darnell explained
" Well if he killed all of those military guys how did you guys get him inside me " Tiquan asked as he points at himself.
" Well first off we must say you weren't the original planed Jinchuriki." Shara replied.
Tiquan's face showed nothing but shock. " If not me then who?"
There as a brief moment of silence before Shara answered. "It was suppose to be Alton."
Tiquan clinched his fist in anger and then punched the wall next to him, which happened to be a brick wall if it hurt Tiquan at all he wasn't showing it. " Then why me?"
" After stunning the fox for a moment and not having the confidence in my men and women to do it again besides wait for Alton we needed to act quickly, you were that solution." Darnell said.
" Wait a minute! Why was I there in the first place? Tiquan yelled.
" Didn't have anybody to take care of you and we had to go so I strapped you on to me and went out to battle stupid I know." Shara replied to him.
Darnell gave quick glares to his daughter and grandson and then continued with his story. " So like I was saying besides waiting for Alton to get to the battlefield I knew we had to act quickly and I told your mother to seal him within you."
Tiquan quickly stood up and turned to his mom " And you listened to him!?"
Shara opened her mouth to say something and then closed it and turned away from her son's gaze.
" No she didn't she rejected me and tried to argue but I wouldn't let her, eventually I had ordered her. She still refused but eventually gave in after I convinced her, surprising you're body was able to take it even as a baby." Darnell said.
" So you're telling me I've been a monster since I was a baby?" Tiquan said deeply, you can tell he was angered.
" No sweetie you're not a monster...." Shara began to say
" Then! What am!?" He yelled at her.
"Calm down please." His mother said calmly
" Calm down!! Calm down!? You want me to calm down after finding out I've been a monster all my life!" Tiquan yelled back.
" Tiquan! Listen to you're moma!" His dad shouted.
" You guys want me to calm down!? How!? I didn't ask for this! You made me into the freak I am today and you want me to calm down! Its your fault that girl is dead! Its your fault that ill be viewed as a freak for the rest of my life. Give me one good reason to why I should!" Tiquan yelled back at his family, his eyes began to turn red.
" Because the nine tails feeds on your anger that's how he comes out." His grandfather said
Tiquan just turned around and walked towards the front door. His parents began to go after him but ultimately were stopped by Darnell. Before Tiquan walked out the door he grabbed his black hoodie and put it knowing exactly what was waiting for him. Tiquan walked out of the door and there were hundreds of members the media and press. Tiquan walked threw head down, not saying a word nor showing a single emotion, dividing them like the Red Sea. The reporters were talking loudly and taking pictures of the Jinchuriki. Even with all the noises around him Tiquan continued to walk and stayed silent deep within his own thought.
Am, I the only one? Why me?Lorimar.... I killed her, I'm a murderer No IT killed her! I'm innocent. But still, I feel guilty.
Tiquan walked down a long narrow dark road eventually losing the media trapped deep within his own head. Tiquan hasn't been seen by anyone since walking down that road.
3 days later
There was a funeral for Lorimar. Everyone and their mother attended the funeral of the young girl everyone but Tiquan, even though his family sat in the the row directly across from Lorimars family and friends, he was no where to be found. The mood of the funeral was rather gloomier than the norm. Those who spoke of her at the podium always broke down into tears, Casey's break down was the worst. All but one broke down, Mr. Diaz Lorimars dad. When he came to the podium he had a stern look upon his face when he spoke he deeply and angrily.
" Last week, my daughter Lorimar Diaz was murdered by a demon!"
There was whispering and murmuring from the attendants.
" Lorimar was a good girl! She didn't deserve the way to die the way she did! I would have fathered her die in battle and die nobly than the way she did."
Mr. Diaz ranted about his daughter death for the next 15 minutes until he was stopped by the priest and told him to take a seat. He did just that but as he sat that he gave a sharp look at the parents of the demon who killed his daughter. After he sat down a couple of more people came up to the podium and cried their eyes out as they talked about the young girl.
It was time for the burial of the young girl everyone who attended the funeral was at the burial ceremony except the family of Tiquan, Mr. Diaz had them banned. However there was one person on a distant hill watching from afar, tears were running down his brown skin. He watched Lorimars body slowly descend into the ground and as her body went six feet under he turned to leave.
" So you finally decide to show up." Said a mysterious female voice from behind him.
The boy stopped and spoke softly and slowly. " Why should you care of I decided to show up or not? If you want your revenge? Then do it now."
" No I don't want that at all. Tiquan I'm hear to warn you about my father, he wants your head. "
Tiquan then chuckled a bit and then turned around and looked at the girl, revealing to her his Sharingan. " Angie do you think I'm stupid? Tell me something I don't know!"
Angie is Lorimars older sister and if you say them together you'd think they were twins yet they were a year apart. Angie had slick black her, a nose piercing and kind of an hourglass type of figure.
Angie gasped as she saw his Sharingan. " Hybrid..." She quietly whispered.
Tiquan turned away from her. " You mean freak."
Angie walked up to Tiquan. " No you're not a freak, just misunderstood."
" Misunderstood!? Misunderstood!? Everybody in this damn city besides my family thinks I'm a freak!" He yelled.
She put her hand over his mouth quickly. " Quiet down, they'll hear you down there."
He removed her hand then snapped back quickly. " Why should I care? Everybody hates me anyway."
She looked around slowly and spoke softly. " Not everybody."
He looked back at her. " Then tell me who doesn't."
Angie looked directly into his eye. " I don't."
He then ran up to her and hugged her tightly. " How? How can you even say that? Even after I killed your sister? "
She hugged him tightly as well. " Because unlike some people I know it wasn't you it was something deep down you couldn't control..... A power you will eventually control one day. Tiquan I can't stay here for long before my dad starts looking for me but believe me when I say this; I have faith in you. This power you have is truly amazing. I know you can control it and eventually help people with it.
Tiquan looked at her with tears falling. " Thank you Angie."
" You're welcome." She said smiling.
The two looked at each for a quick moment which felt like hours and lightly kissed each other. Angie then slowly broke the kiss and her light brown skin was was red with blood.
" I I have to go....."
" It's fine I understand leave before your dad finds us." He said smiling.
Yeah" she smiled back and began to walk away but stopped shortly after. " Tiquan I believe in you and the things you can do. " She said and then skipped away with a smile on her face.
Tiquan had a smile on his face he had rebuilt confidence he felt trusted, he felt honored and more importantly he felt loved. Tiquan then jumped into the air and jumped from tree to tree smiling on his home. Little did Tiquan and Angie know that her dad was watching them the whole time and now he was filled with rage but he stayed calm and called over a memeber of his cabinet.
" Set up an emergency press meeting for me at 5:00." He said deeply and coldly.
Author's Note
Whooo it's been a long time! Sorry about that guys but I've been real busy for the past months. For those of you who don't know I'm in the Navy and been very busy lately but I got this done and it gives we chance to say this: FINALLY! THE COBRA HAS COME BACK TO NARUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUTO BASE!!!!!!!!! I've missed y'all hope you guys enjoy and I'm trying to be consistent with these but yeah please drop me a comment and give me feedback it always helps.
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