COTC Chapter 1 part 9 Tziah's Comeback?

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Hey my peeps I'm back with the next part of my FF. Since I only got 1 vote :( on which FF you would like to see next I won't be going by that when I start my new FF it will be whatever I want to do out of the three, I presented last time. You can comment on what you want but out of the three i presented only. Also I am thinking about changing the title of my FF as it is to long, well at least i think it is. That is way the title of the tread is COTC its just abbreviated any suggestions? *Anyway I thank you for reading and I hope you enjoy.

If you missed the last part here it is:*

Chronicles of Tiquan Conley Chapter 1 part 9-Tziah's comeback?

Larry goes in and attacks Tziah with the 8 trigrams 128 palms. Tziah is trying *to avoid it but notices he is trapped within Jermaine's shadows.

Tziah thinking *hmp they fail for it*

"Thanks man I got him now ha!" Larry strikes but Tziah turn into a puff of smoke. Larry has hit a clone. " When did he do that?"

"I don't know cuz." Jermaine said.

Tziah is no where to be found.

"Maine you go to the left Jerm you got to the right, see if you can find him. I'll use my Bykugan to see if I can find him. Go now!" Larry ordered.

Larry scans the area with is Bykugan put see nothing. "Nothing." Larry says. Jeremy and Jermaine go on their search.

*scene switches to Jeremy searching*thinking* damn how can Larry expect me to find Tziah if he couldn't even find him with his Bykugan. Wait a minute this kid can't know it no there's no way that's a jounin level technique, Tziah's not even a genin yet. As the thought ends Jeremy fells the ground shake.

"Just a *little EQ interesting we don't usually get those this time a year,yet alone at all." Jeremy said aloud.

"Surprise!!!!!" Tziah yelled as he punched Jeremy right under the chin.

"Underground did Tiquan teach that to you as well?" Jeremy asked.

"Sorry Jeremy I have to finish you know." Tziah said as he kicked Jeremy in the temple. Jeremy is knocked out....

"Well that was easy well anyway one down and two *more to go next is Maine." Tziah said aloud as he proceeded to go underground again.

*scene switches to Jermaine*

Jeremaine thinking * Larry kid is good but I'm sure Casey can handle him haha of course Casey can handle him there not even on the same level. However him and Quana*

"What*the hell was that?" Jermaine said as something blew by his head. "Oh it's just a bird haha I was so deep in thought I let a bird scare me. Tziah I know your here somewhere show your self!" Jermaine yelled out to the meadow.

Tziah, underground see that as a challenge and with his arrogant attitude wants to take it, but right now he's being smart and not accepting it.

Jermaine thinking * It's *hard to think that Larry couldn't detect Tziah with is Bykugan. Hmmm that leaves to things Tziah either know the Chakra Suppression technique, which I'm confident he doesn't he probably doesn't even know about it. So the only other place he can be is underground, hmp sounds like his style. Lets see of I can drag him out.**

Jermaine uses hand signs. -deep breath- *This will get him to come out.* Jermaine takes a long deep breath.

Tziah underground thinking *What the hell! Where did he go!?* Tziah jumps out from below and reveals his location. "What a minute? What is this? I can't move! Damn Jermaine!"

Shadow possession success."

How did you do it?

"That isn't important now. What's important is that I've got you right where I want you."

Hahahahaha!!!

Shut up kid why are you laughing? This isn't funny!

"Your right Jermaine about one thing I've got you right where I want you!"

Huh!? At that moment 4 of Tziahs clones attacked*Jermaine from below. Since Jermaine was attacked he lost focus and Tziah was released from the Shadow Possession.

After the attack Jermaine is back on his feet and Tziah's clones are standing next to him.

Hmp it seems that your clones will disrupt any attempt to use my Shadows so I guess I'll have to rely on my taijutsu.

Fine then it's a battle of taijutsu. Tziahs clones back off as their not to be involved with the battle.

Jermaine rushes Tziah.

He's fast!

Jermaine catches Tziah with a left hook. Tziah falls to ground, but kips back up.

My turn now!

Tziah rushes Jermaine and attempts his own left hook Jermaine easily dodges. Jermaine responds with a kick to Tziah's ribs. Jermaine dost stop there he continues his attack by jumping high in the air and coming down fairly quick and punches Tziah in his gut. At that moment spit and blood come out of Tziah's mouth. There is also a decent size crater from impact, which Tziah lays in. Tziah's clone disappear.

"It's over." Jermaine said.

Scene switches to Larry.
He sees a smoke cloud in the direction of where Tziah and Jermaine are battling. Larry heads towards that direction.

"Jeremy can catch up." Larry says as he looks back into the direction Jeremy's in.

Scene switches back to Jermaine and Tziah.

Tziah slowly crawls out of the crater. "Iiiii....iiiiii........iiitssssss not over till I say it is."

"Kid it's over don't get yourself killed out here."

"No I refuse to lose to you I refuse to lose to anyone UNTILL I KILL ALTON!!!!!!" Tziah yells.

Jermaine thinking *So the rumors I've been hearing are true, he does know.*
"You wanna be able to kill Alton huh? Tell me how are you gonna be able to do that If you can't even beat me? Huh? Tell me? Give up on that dream Alton is way to powerful he'll kill you! He won't show mercy."

"DON'T TALK ABOUT ALTON LIKE THAT!!!!!" Out of nowhere Tziah got a surge of energy and strength and he put it all in one punch he punched Jermaine in the gut. Jermaine was knocked out by the body blow.

Tziah's breathing hard and coughs of blood. Tziah has defeated Jermaine.

"So Tziah that the path your gonna take?" His father asked.

"Yeah I'm gonna make Alton pay for his sins."

"What about yours you kill him, what is that gonna solve? Huh? It's just gonna bring up more turmoil in the family, and you know that we don't need that right now."

I'll follow the path I've chosen. I'll do what I want. Alton deserves to die for what he's done. Tiquan isn't gonna do anything but bring Alton back for proper judgement. Yeah like that's gonna work. What are you doing about it huh?"

"I'm doing what most of the families doing nothing the less violence the better."

"Bullcrap!!! Now let's finish this."

Tziah your in no shap to battle....your half dead.

Half dead my ass I can still fight."

One technique your dead.

Try me!!!"

"Lightning blade!!!!!" Jeremy thought to be knocked out yelled as he struck Tziah in his back.

"What I took you out." Tziah said as he was struck.

"It's called playing possum." Jeremy said as Tziah fell to the ground

Tziah thinking * I I I lost this this is unacceptable I can't kill Alton damn I should've listened he did say. He did say one tech. and I'm dead. So this is what it feels like to die damn I wanted Alton to experience this before I did.....Tziah world faded into darkness.

What lies in wait for the Conley family next stay tuned and find out.

Next time: Tiquan vs Orochimaru!*
Can Tiquan defeat Orochimaru with very little chakra and broken ribs? We'll find out next time.

Thank you all for reading I know it's longer than usually. So I hope you took the time to read it. I hope you enjoyed this. Thank you again enjoy your day.
 
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Wow first thing I must say soooo many errors a lot more than usually what's up with that?
Anyways Great chapter overall I liked it and you picked up the action a lot I liked it.
Complaint: Tziahs Dead!!!!!!!!! What I thought he was gonna be the Sasuke like Character wanting revenge and everything how dare you kill him off! Plus that's your brother why would you kill your brother so early????!!!!!! Whyyyyyyy and now Tiquan vs Orochimaru what???? There is no way Tiquan can win he's gonna due to isn't he???? Why would you do this????
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