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Hello my peeps I'm back with another part to my fan fiction. No updates on my computer, it's still in the shop.
If you missed the last part here it is:
Chronicles of Tiquan Conley chapter 1 part 12: Released
Tiquan and Tziah are talking, still in the hospital.
Tiquan: Last night in here. Thank God.
Tziah: I know right man. The food is horrible.
Tiquan: I know I can use some of grandma's homemade meatloaf right now.
Tziah: *laughs* I can to bro. Sound better than these fake potatoes they feed us.
Tziah sticks his spoon in the plate of potatoes in front of him and pushes it away. Tiquan does the same.
Tiquan then gets up from his bed grabs his binoculars, I.D. Book, and his sketch book. He then walks over towards the window.
Tziah: What the hell!?
Tiquan: What? What's wrong?
Tziah: You're walking with no problem.
Tiquan: Yeah.......and?
Tziah: Dude you just had broken ribs, there is no way they can be healed that fast.
Tiquan lifts his shirt up and touches Ribs gently.
Tiquan: Wow! They are healed.
The brothers remember what the nurse said.
Tziah: Worried about your healing factor yet? It took only 4 days for your ribs to heal.
Tiquan : No this is great!
Tziah: Maybe you should be worried that's just not normal.
Tiquan ignored his brother and proceeded to watch birds.
After about an hour Tiquan didn't find what he was looking for so he gave up.
Tziah: Didn't see it?
Tiquan: No. Maybe it's like you said just a summoning.
Tziah: Yeah. Well I'm going to sleep tomorrows a big day.
Tiquan: Yeah, the day we get out of this hell hole. Alright good night.
Tziah: Night.
They boys fall asleep. As the boys sleep a figure about 5'11 with the Sharingan watches them from the corner.
???: Foolish brothers can't even since my chakra. *laughs* They really are weak, hmp I guess I can cause a slight disturbance.
Tiquan wakes up when he senses the chakra. Tiquan is sleepy so he can't see the figure is exactly.
Tiquan: Are you doctor?
???: Don't worry about who I am. Just listen.
Tiquan feeling threatened activated his Sharingan and looked this man in the eyes.
Tiquan: Who are you?
???: Like I said before don't worry about that just listen.
Tiquan, being able to sense the guys chakra, which is more greater than his own is content on listening.
Tiquan: Ok.
???: What Orochimaru says is true.... Alton and other groups of people are after you and Tziah for that matter. If you were wise you would accept his offer and join him.
Tiquan: Shut up!!!! You know nothing about me or my family. Orochimaru is nothing but a snake who would want to use me in anyway possible!
Tiquan is surprised his yelling didn't wake up Tziah up. That's when he notices it, he's not in the hospital anymore he was in some strange dark place.
It resembles the shadow Realm from the Yugioh anime
???: You fool. I know more about your family and yourself then you think.
Tiquan: Where where am I?
???: It doesn't matter.
The man turns around to leave. Tiquan can also see the man has dread locks.
???: Think about Orochimaru offer, he truly is the only protection you have.
Tiquan: What are you talking about? I don't get it wait don't go. Who are you!?
???: The answers to your questions will come in due time.
The man proceeds to walk away.
Tiquan: Wait!!!!!!!
???: Release
The man said this softly so Tiquan didn't hear it. The man was gone and so was the dark murky room. Tiquan was back in his bed. His heart was pounding fast and he was sweaty. This led Tiquan to believe it was nothing more than just a nightmare.
Tiquan thinking
Was it just a dream? Who was that guy? Why did it feels so real? Could it have been a genjutsu? Why does he want me to take Orochmarus offer? Was he one of his henchmen. Who are these groups after me and my brother? Better yet why? That guy.....his *chakra felt so evil and familiar at the same time.
Tiquan fell asleep in his own thoughts.
The next day came and the brothers were released from the hospital. While they walked out the nurse reminded Tiquan to come back ever two weeks for a checkup. Tiquan pretty blew her off and the nurse knew Tiquan wasnt coming back anytime soon. If Tiquan had a special healing power he wanted to find out about it on his own.
A week after their release the brothers were called back for special one-on-one training.
Darnell: Tiquan remember that move I told you I was gonna teach you.....but we didn't have the time.
Tiquan nodded.
Darnell: For the next 3 weeks we'll work on that jutsu.
Tiquan: Ok
Larry: Tziah you'll come with me and Jeremy to learn a new jutsu, this will also take 3 weeks.
Tziah: Ok.
The brothers say their goodbyes. As again their separated to go off and learn their new moves.
3 weeks later
The brothers meet up at their dads house..
Tiquan: So how'd your training go?
Tziah: Pretty good I learned a cool move. How bout yours.
Tiquan: Great I learned an awesome move too.
Tziah: Great.
Tziah was about to say something but was interrupted when the phone rang.
Tziah: I'll get it.
Tziah picks up phone, it's their mother.
Tziah: Yes. Yes mam. It was good. Yes. Tomorrow? It starts next week? Where has this summer gone? Ok yes mam. Ok I'll tell him.*
Love you too bye.
*Tiquan: What'd she say.
Tziah: Start packing we leave for Orlando tomorrow.
Tiquan: Tommorrow?
Tziah: Yeah.
Tiquan: Well it make since school starts next week.
Tziah: Yeah well better get started packing.
Tiquan: Yep, well I'm already half way done.
Tziah: You started packing?
Tiquan: No. I just never finished unpacking when we came back here in January.*
Tiquan and Tziah parents are divorced so they tend to bounce all around the place between Parents, this is why Tiquan never finishes unpacking.
Tziah: Wow dude.
Tiquan laughs. The boys pack their clothes and talks about their training. Looking forward to their new lives in Orlando. Little do they know that both of their lives will be drastically changed there.......for better and worst.
Why was the mystery man pestering Tiquan to join Orochimaru? Who are these groups after the brothers? What dangerous lie in what for the brothers in Orlando. Stay tuned and find out.
Next: Chronicles of Tiquan Conley Chapeter 1 part 13: Orlando
Authors Note
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Chronicles of Tiquan Conley chapter 1 part 12: Released
Tiquan and Tziah are talking, still in the hospital.
Tiquan: Last night in here. Thank God.
Tziah: I know right man. The food is horrible.
Tiquan: I know I can use some of grandma's homemade meatloaf right now.
Tziah: *laughs* I can to bro. Sound better than these fake potatoes they feed us.
Tziah sticks his spoon in the plate of potatoes in front of him and pushes it away. Tiquan does the same.
Tiquan then gets up from his bed grabs his binoculars, I.D. Book, and his sketch book. He then walks over towards the window.
Tziah: What the hell!?
Tiquan: What? What's wrong?
Tziah: You're walking with no problem.
Tiquan: Yeah.......and?
Tziah: Dude you just had broken ribs, there is no way they can be healed that fast.
Tiquan lifts his shirt up and touches Ribs gently.
Tiquan: Wow! They are healed.
The brothers remember what the nurse said.
Tziah: Worried about your healing factor yet? It took only 4 days for your ribs to heal.
Tiquan : No this is great!
Tziah: Maybe you should be worried that's just not normal.
Tiquan ignored his brother and proceeded to watch birds.
After about an hour Tiquan didn't find what he was looking for so he gave up.
Tziah: Didn't see it?
Tiquan: No. Maybe it's like you said just a summoning.
Tziah: Yeah. Well I'm going to sleep tomorrows a big day.
Tiquan: Yeah, the day we get out of this hell hole. Alright good night.
Tziah: Night.
They boys fall asleep. As the boys sleep a figure about 5'11 with the Sharingan watches them from the corner.
???: Foolish brothers can't even since my chakra. *laughs* They really are weak, hmp I guess I can cause a slight disturbance.
Tiquan wakes up when he senses the chakra. Tiquan is sleepy so he can't see the figure is exactly.
Tiquan: Are you doctor?
???: Don't worry about who I am. Just listen.
Tiquan feeling threatened activated his Sharingan and looked this man in the eyes.
Tiquan: Who are you?
???: Like I said before don't worry about that just listen.
Tiquan, being able to sense the guys chakra, which is more greater than his own is content on listening.
Tiquan: Ok.
???: What Orochimaru says is true.... Alton and other groups of people are after you and Tziah for that matter. If you were wise you would accept his offer and join him.
Tiquan: Shut up!!!! You know nothing about me or my family. Orochimaru is nothing but a snake who would want to use me in anyway possible!
Tiquan is surprised his yelling didn't wake up Tziah up. That's when he notices it, he's not in the hospital anymore he was in some strange dark place.
It resembles the shadow Realm from the Yugioh anime
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???: You fool. I know more about your family and yourself then you think.
Tiquan: Where where am I?
???: It doesn't matter.
The man turns around to leave. Tiquan can also see the man has dread locks.
???: Think about Orochimaru offer, he truly is the only protection you have.
Tiquan: What are you talking about? I don't get it wait don't go. Who are you!?
???: The answers to your questions will come in due time.
The man proceeds to walk away.
Tiquan: Wait!!!!!!!
???: Release
The man said this softly so Tiquan didn't hear it. The man was gone and so was the dark murky room. Tiquan was back in his bed. His heart was pounding fast and he was sweaty. This led Tiquan to believe it was nothing more than just a nightmare.
Tiquan thinking
Was it just a dream? Who was that guy? Why did it feels so real? Could it have been a genjutsu? Why does he want me to take Orochmarus offer? Was he one of his henchmen. Who are these groups after me and my brother? Better yet why? That guy.....his *chakra felt so evil and familiar at the same time.
Tiquan fell asleep in his own thoughts.
The next day came and the brothers were released from the hospital. While they walked out the nurse reminded Tiquan to come back ever two weeks for a checkup. Tiquan pretty blew her off and the nurse knew Tiquan wasnt coming back anytime soon. If Tiquan had a special healing power he wanted to find out about it on his own.
A week after their release the brothers were called back for special one-on-one training.
Darnell: Tiquan remember that move I told you I was gonna teach you.....but we didn't have the time.
Tiquan nodded.
Darnell: For the next 3 weeks we'll work on that jutsu.
Tiquan: Ok
Larry: Tziah you'll come with me and Jeremy to learn a new jutsu, this will also take 3 weeks.
Tziah: Ok.
The brothers say their goodbyes. As again their separated to go off and learn their new moves.
3 weeks later
The brothers meet up at their dads house..
Tiquan: So how'd your training go?
Tziah: Pretty good I learned a cool move. How bout yours.
Tiquan: Great I learned an awesome move too.
Tziah: Great.
Tziah was about to say something but was interrupted when the phone rang.
Tziah: I'll get it.
Tziah picks up phone, it's their mother.
Tziah: Yes. Yes mam. It was good. Yes. Tomorrow? It starts next week? Where has this summer gone? Ok yes mam. Ok I'll tell him.*
Love you too bye.
*Tiquan: What'd she say.
Tziah: Start packing we leave for Orlando tomorrow.
Tiquan: Tommorrow?
Tziah: Yeah.
Tiquan: Well it make since school starts next week.
Tziah: Yeah well better get started packing.
Tiquan: Yep, well I'm already half way done.
Tziah: You started packing?
Tiquan: No. I just never finished unpacking when we came back here in January.*
Tiquan and Tziah parents are divorced so they tend to bounce all around the place between Parents, this is why Tiquan never finishes unpacking.
Tziah: Wow dude.
Tiquan laughs. The boys pack their clothes and talks about their training. Looking forward to their new lives in Orlando. Little do they know that both of their lives will be drastically changed there.......for better and worst.
Why was the mystery man pestering Tiquan to join Orochimaru? Who are these groups after the brothers? What dangerous lie in what for the brothers in Orlando. Stay tuned and find out.
Next: Chronicles of Tiquan Conley Chapeter 1 part 13: Orlando
Authors Note
Well I meant for this to come out yesterday but well I got lazy and watched the football games lol. Anyway I worked on my repetion and grammer issues. They may still be there though 
