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Hello peeps I'm back with my next part and well it's short but it's all good this chapter was meant to be short. I'm still waiting for my computer to be fixed and when it does I'm thinking about releasing this every other day. Good idea? Give me some feedback.
In case you missed the last part(which btw is my fav of the story so far) here it is:
Chronicles of Tiquan Conley chapter 11 The reunion
Tiquan: Tziah you unlocked the Sharingan! How?
Tziah: Yeah I did, you did too! How'd you'd do it? I had to go against Dad Jeremy and Jermaine.
Tiquan thinks back to the attack and he doesn't want to worry his brother about Orochimaru and Kabuto.
Tiquan: I uh well I kinda got my ass handed to me by Grandaddy.
Tiquan was kinda embarrassed having to admit that to Tziah.
Tziah just laughed at his brother.
Tiquan: Not that funny dude. I forced him into using his summoning.
Tziah: Wow really?
Tiquan: Yep
Tiquan said that with confidence and all the embarrassment he just had went away.
The brothers talked about their training more. They both teased at each other. Tiquan teased at Tziah about being duked by Jeremy the whole time and well Tziah just teased that Tiquan got beat by an older man.
As the brother's teased more the nurse and their family came in.
Tiquan and Tziah: Hey Guys!
Nurse: Hmmmm
The Nurse looks at Tiquan diagnostic report awkwardly.
Shara(Mother):Whats wrong mam?
Nurse: This one Tiquan is healing rapidly.
The family all had awkward looks on their faces.
Nurse: Anything you guys didn't tell us?
The family all trace glances at each other.
Darnell: No. We told you everything we know about them.
Tiquan notices the awkward looks but just ignores them.
The nurse walks over to Tziahs bed and checks his diagnostic as well.
Nurse: Intersting
The family has those awkward looks again. Tiquan notices it again but he pays attention this time. Tziah also notices he pays close attention as well.
Darnell: What's wrong this time mam?
Nurse: Well it seems that this one is also healing fast, not as fast as his brother but faster than most people.
The Awkward look escapes the family. Tiquan just ignores it again. Tziah is still paying attention he notices something is up.
Larry(Dad): He's just a fast healer I guess.
Nurse: Hmm seems legit. Ok well they'll be good to go by the end of the week. However I want you to bring Tiquan in every two weeks I want to check up on this rapid healing thing.
The awkward faces return Tiquan notices but is soon preoccupied with a bird out side of the window.
Tiquan is facisnated with birds. He is also a very active bird watcher.
Nurse: Ok well I'll leave you guys here so you can talk please remember visiting hours end in 15 mins.*
Sylvia(Grandma, Shara's mom): Ok mam thank you.
Vera(Grandma, Larry's mom): Oh God I'm glad you boys are ok you sure do train hard.
Tiquan: We sure do Ma.*
Shara: So Tiquan how does it feel?
Tiquan: How does what feel?
Shara: You just went one-on-one with the Elder of the Browns Family, not many people have lived to tell the story.
The family laughed at that statement. It was very much true also. The family all conversed in conversation they all were laughing and smiling. Those 15 mins lasted forever as the family did nothing but have memorable conversations. Everyone said there good byes, but when Darnell said his good bye to Tiquan he gave him a note. As Darnell excited the room he looked at Tiquan, Tiqun nodded back as of he understood.
Tziah: So did you notice those looks they had when the nurse was talking about our healing.
Tiquan: Yeah but I wouldn't worry about it.
Tziah: Your getting a checkup every two weeks.
Tiquan: Like I said nothing to worry about....oh look outside a....a Condor....here in Florida interesting hmmmm.
Tziah: Wow you and your birds. By the way it could be a ninja bird.
Tiquan: Could be....could be.
Little did the boys know danger lurks on the Condor.
???: Tiquan and Tziah Conley.......I've found you.
Who is the Mystery guy flying over the hospital flying over the brothers? What are the mysterious healing factors of Tiquan? Stay tuned and find out.
Authors Notes
In case you missed the last part(which btw is my fav of the story so far) here it is:
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Chronicles of Tiquan Conley chapter 11 The reunion
Tiquan: Tziah you unlocked the Sharingan! How?
Tziah: Yeah I did, you did too! How'd you'd do it? I had to go against Dad Jeremy and Jermaine.
Tiquan thinks back to the attack and he doesn't want to worry his brother about Orochimaru and Kabuto.
Tiquan: I uh well I kinda got my ass handed to me by Grandaddy.
Tiquan was kinda embarrassed having to admit that to Tziah.
Tziah just laughed at his brother.
Tiquan: Not that funny dude. I forced him into using his summoning.
Tziah: Wow really?
Tiquan: Yep
Tiquan said that with confidence and all the embarrassment he just had went away.
The brothers talked about their training more. They both teased at each other. Tiquan teased at Tziah about being duked by Jeremy the whole time and well Tziah just teased that Tiquan got beat by an older man.
As the brother's teased more the nurse and their family came in.
Tiquan and Tziah: Hey Guys!
Nurse: Hmmmm
The Nurse looks at Tiquan diagnostic report awkwardly.
Shara(Mother):Whats wrong mam?
Nurse: This one Tiquan is healing rapidly.
The family all had awkward looks on their faces.
Nurse: Anything you guys didn't tell us?
The family all trace glances at each other.
Darnell: No. We told you everything we know about them.
Tiquan notices the awkward looks but just ignores them.
The nurse walks over to Tziahs bed and checks his diagnostic as well.
Nurse: Intersting
The family has those awkward looks again. Tiquan notices it again but he pays attention this time. Tziah also notices he pays close attention as well.
Darnell: What's wrong this time mam?
Nurse: Well it seems that this one is also healing fast, not as fast as his brother but faster than most people.
The Awkward look escapes the family. Tiquan just ignores it again. Tziah is still paying attention he notices something is up.
Larry(Dad): He's just a fast healer I guess.
Nurse: Hmm seems legit. Ok well they'll be good to go by the end of the week. However I want you to bring Tiquan in every two weeks I want to check up on this rapid healing thing.
The awkward faces return Tiquan notices but is soon preoccupied with a bird out side of the window.
Tiquan is facisnated with birds. He is also a very active bird watcher.
Nurse: Ok well I'll leave you guys here so you can talk please remember visiting hours end in 15 mins.*
Sylvia(Grandma, Shara's mom): Ok mam thank you.
Vera(Grandma, Larry's mom): Oh God I'm glad you boys are ok you sure do train hard.
Tiquan: We sure do Ma.*
Shara: So Tiquan how does it feel?
Tiquan: How does what feel?
Shara: You just went one-on-one with the Elder of the Browns Family, not many people have lived to tell the story.
The family laughed at that statement. It was very much true also. The family all conversed in conversation they all were laughing and smiling. Those 15 mins lasted forever as the family did nothing but have memorable conversations. Everyone said there good byes, but when Darnell said his good bye to Tiquan he gave him a note. As Darnell excited the room he looked at Tiquan, Tiqun nodded back as of he understood.
Tziah: So did you notice those looks they had when the nurse was talking about our healing.
Tiquan: Yeah but I wouldn't worry about it.
Tziah: Your getting a checkup every two weeks.
Tiquan: Like I said nothing to worry about....oh look outside a....a Condor....here in Florida interesting hmmmm.
Tziah: Wow you and your birds. By the way it could be a ninja bird.
Tiquan: Could be....could be.
Little did the boys know danger lurks on the Condor.
???: Tiquan and Tziah Conley.......I've found you.
Who is the Mystery guy flying over the hospital flying over the brothers? What are the mysterious healing factors of Tiquan? Stay tuned and find out.
Authors Notes
Maybe a bit longer than I thought it was but still short kinda. Critism is welcomed if you find any mistakes please tell me so I can fix. I thank you for reading and I hope enjoyed.
