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Hey guys I'm back after forever with the next part to my FF and I have bad news my next FF is gonna be delayed a little because my old computer went poo-poo 
I had four chapters already done so imma have rewrite those and then I'll be able to bring it to you guys. Fortunately my main project COTC I have a couple of notes for that on my IPad. So let's go with the next part. Chapter one is almost done.....it was done but the computer went poo-poo
Last part incase you missed it:
Chronicles of Tiquan Conley part 11 Tiquan vs Orochimaru*
Orochimaru: You fool you challenge me!? You got lucky with that win I've Kabuto.
Tiquan: Shut up I can take you.
Orochimaru: How bout you put your money where your mouth is kid.
At that moment Orochimaru drew the Sword of Kusanagi.
Tiquan: Dude that's not fair I have no weapon.
Darnell: Tiquan Orochimaru is to powerful you can't beat him! Wait for me to recover!
Orochimaru: Hahahahaha just as caring as usually Darnell.*
Tiquan: Grandaddy how do you know him.
Darnell: Orochimaru and I use to be friends, until he turned on me and tried to steal your grandmother from me.
Tiquan: Oh ok personal feud.
Orochimaru: Oh Darnell you should let that go.
Darnell: Enough Orochimaru! Now tell us why are you here.
Orochimaru: I told you I'm here to offer my service to the boy. He needs protection.
Tiquan: Just shut up! I don't know who you are or what your about. But I do know your not here to protect me. Alton is not out to get me!
Orochimaru: Hmp. Suite yourself kid. I tried to help hm hm hm
Orochimaru licks is lips.
Prepare to die Tiquan.
Orochimaru charges at Tiquan with is sword in hand. He goes for Tiquan's head. Tiquan barley dodges.
Tiquan thinking * Shit that was to close!*
Darnell thinking *even with broken ribs he's quick.*
Darnell:*Tiquan even though u have broken ribs. You can still use your 8 trigrams...it might help.
Tiquan: Uh granddaddy I'm kind of busy here.
Tiquan says that sarcastically as he continues to dodge Orchimaru's blade while holding onto his ribs.
Tiquan thinking *Damn it how long can it take to recover from a chakra blade shot?*
Darnell: I know I'm just trying to be best as I can as a help.
Tiquan: Not helping!
Tiquan jumps into the air *hand sign*
Tiquan: Multi shadow clone jutsu!
Tiquan creates hundreds of clones with most of the little chakra he has left.
Tiquan thinking *That should buy off enough time for granddaddy to recover and uh give me time to rest right her for a bit.*
Tiquan rest on a tree.
Orochimaru is handling the clones with ease until he was blindsided by one of the clones and punched right under the jaw. All of Tiquan's Clones dog pile Orochimaru.
Orochimaru: Go!!!!!!!
Tiquan: What did he say? Wait what?! Awwwwwwww!
Orochimaru commanded his sword to strike Tiquan. The Sword pierced Tiquan in the right side of his chest. That blow was enough to make all the clones disappear. Orochimaru gets up and slowly walks over to Tiquan.
Darnell thinking *This is bad. I was trying to save this but I have to do it now.* Darnell crawls over towards the bags he brought out and pulls out a scroll.
Orochimaru: You were a a f**king nuisance!!! I should kill you now, but instead I'll give you a parting gift.
Orochimaru heads out stretches towards Tiquan's neck and bites it.
Tiquan: Ahhhhhh!!
Darnell: Noooo!
Kabuto is finally recovering.
Kabuto: Lord Orochimaru is everything fine?
Kabuto starts walking towards Orochimaru and Tiquan.
Orochimaru: Yes everything is fine.
Kabuto seeing the state Tiquan is in can tell Orochimaru didn't have much of troubles.
Kabuto: Did you kill him?
Orochimaru: No. Why would I do that?
Kabuto: I'm sorry my lord it's just the predicament he's in...he looks dead.
Tiquan is posted on a tree with the Sword of Kusanagi piercing him in the chest.
Tiquan: F**k you.
Tiquan spits on Kabuto and Orochimaru.*
Orochimaru: Your dead you f**king brat!!! I'm gonna kill you!!!!
Orochimaru goes in for the kill.
Darnell: I don't think so!!!*
*hand signs* Summoning Jutsu!!!!
Darnell summons a huge frog in front of Tiquan.
Orochimaru jumps back
*hand signs* Summoning Jutsu!!!!
Orochimaru summons a giant snake.
Kabuto: Lord Orochimaru I'm sorry to interrupt but we don't have the time for this. We have other business to attended to.
Orochimaru and Darnell have a stare-off waiting for one to make the first move.
Orochimaru: Darnell Kabuto's right we don't have the time for this.
Darnell: No! You're not getting away from we this time Orochimaru.
Orochimaru: Darnell it's not me you should be worried about its your grandson.*
Darnell looks down towards Tiquan. He's in bad shape the Sword still pierced on his chest.
Orochimaru: You see we do this your grandson dies. Actually if you don't get him help within the next he'll die, and you know it.
Darnell know Orochimaru's right but he doesn't want Orochimaru to just get away and harm more people.
Orochimaru: Hm hm hm. Untilnext time Darnell. Kusanagi!
Orochimaru called his sword. As the sword comes out of Tiquan's chest he falls to the ground.
Orochimaru's snake disappears within a huge puff of smoke.*
Darnell jumps down from his frog to check on his grandson.
Orochimaru: It seems you made your decision. Oh and by the way the sword was penetrated deeper than you think.....if he's lucky he has 30 minutes and well last time I checked the hospital was 30 minutes away Hahahahaha.
Orochimaru laugh gets dense as he and Kabuto disappear within in the forest.
Darnell's frog disappears within a puff of smoke also.
Darnell: Come on Tiquan stay with me.
Darnell rushed Tiquan into the back seat of the van. Darnell hit the gas as he rushes Tiquan to the hospital.
Tiquan: Grandaddy........
Darnell: Don't speak Tiquan it just makes it worst you'll be fine were almost there.*
Tiquan: I......I.........
Tiquan losses consciousness*
Darnell: Don't talk.
Darnell knows Tiquan is near death. He can't have his first grandson die like this.
Darnell thinking *If he dies what am I gonna tell Shara? What am I gonna tell the family? Half of them are gonna jump on them ight away once I say Orochimaru. Come on Tiquan I need you to survive this.....not just for you but for me too.*
Flashback
5 year old Tiquan: Granddaddy I wanna be strong like you one day.
Darnell: I know and you will just don't die on me while we're training or even while on a mission for that matter. Survival is key. It's the most important thing you need on a mission......if you die who'll protect all your friends and family?
5 year old Tiquan: I won't Granddaddy I promise! When I'm strong enough I'll protect them all even you.
Darnell: That's good Tiquan. I'll look forward to that day.
5 year old Tiquan: Grandaddy?
Darnell: Yes Tiquan?
5 year old Tiquan: Promise you'll protect me from all the bad guys and monsters out there till then.
Darnell: I promise Tiquan.
5 year old Tiquan: Thanks Grandaddy I can always count on you.
Darnell: Anytime Tiquan anytime.
Flashback over
Darnell has tears flowing down his face now. Knowing that he couldn't keep his promise Tiquan.
Darnell: Tiquan I'm sorry.
Tiquan regains consciousness.
He all he sees is lights going by faster and faster. Tiquan can also tell he is on a bed of some type.
Tiquan closes his eyes.
When Tiquan open his eyes again he's in a bed. He sees IV cords so he knows he's in a hospital. Tiquan looks towards the bed next to him, somebody is in it but Tiquan can't tell who it is yet.*
Tiquan closes his eyes yet again.
When Tiquan opens his eyes again he notices something different.
Tiquan thinking * Whoa. What is this? My sight it's different.....its better......I wonder who's in that next room**
Tiquan looks toward the bed next to him, and notices its his brother Tziah.
Tiquan thinking * What happened to Tziah? I hope he's ok.*
At that moment Tziah turns over and Tiquan sees it. He sees Tziahs newly unlocked Sharingan eyes. Tiquan then finally realized what has different with is eyes he too has unlocked his Sharingan.
The brothers reunited for the first time since school got out.
Next time Chronicles of Tiquan Conley Chapter 1 part 11 Reunion
Thank you for reading I hope you guys enjoyed. Again I'm sorry for the delay blame my computer. Enjoy your days again I thank you all for reading.
Authors Note
I had four chapters already done so imma have rewrite those and then I'll be able to bring it to you guys. Fortunately my main project COTC I have a couple of notes for that on my IPad. So let's go with the next part. Chapter one is almost done.....it was done but the computer went poo-poo Last part incase you missed it:
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Chronicles of Tiquan Conley part 11 Tiquan vs Orochimaru*
Orochimaru: You fool you challenge me!? You got lucky with that win I've Kabuto.
Tiquan: Shut up I can take you.
Orochimaru: How bout you put your money where your mouth is kid.
At that moment Orochimaru drew the Sword of Kusanagi.
Tiquan: Dude that's not fair I have no weapon.
Darnell: Tiquan Orochimaru is to powerful you can't beat him! Wait for me to recover!
Orochimaru: Hahahahaha just as caring as usually Darnell.*
Tiquan: Grandaddy how do you know him.
Darnell: Orochimaru and I use to be friends, until he turned on me and tried to steal your grandmother from me.
Tiquan: Oh ok personal feud.
Orochimaru: Oh Darnell you should let that go.
Darnell: Enough Orochimaru! Now tell us why are you here.
Orochimaru: I told you I'm here to offer my service to the boy. He needs protection.
Tiquan: Just shut up! I don't know who you are or what your about. But I do know your not here to protect me. Alton is not out to get me!
Orochimaru: Hmp. Suite yourself kid. I tried to help hm hm hm
Orochimaru licks is lips.
Prepare to die Tiquan.
Orochimaru charges at Tiquan with is sword in hand. He goes for Tiquan's head. Tiquan barley dodges.
Tiquan thinking * Shit that was to close!*
Darnell thinking *even with broken ribs he's quick.*
Darnell:*Tiquan even though u have broken ribs. You can still use your 8 trigrams...it might help.
Tiquan: Uh granddaddy I'm kind of busy here.
Tiquan says that sarcastically as he continues to dodge Orchimaru's blade while holding onto his ribs.
Tiquan thinking *Damn it how long can it take to recover from a chakra blade shot?*
Darnell: I know I'm just trying to be best as I can as a help.
Tiquan: Not helping!
Tiquan jumps into the air *hand sign*
Tiquan: Multi shadow clone jutsu!
Tiquan creates hundreds of clones with most of the little chakra he has left.
Tiquan thinking *That should buy off enough time for granddaddy to recover and uh give me time to rest right her for a bit.*
Tiquan rest on a tree.
Orochimaru is handling the clones with ease until he was blindsided by one of the clones and punched right under the jaw. All of Tiquan's Clones dog pile Orochimaru.
Orochimaru: Go!!!!!!!
Tiquan: What did he say? Wait what?! Awwwwwwww!
Orochimaru commanded his sword to strike Tiquan. The Sword pierced Tiquan in the right side of his chest. That blow was enough to make all the clones disappear. Orochimaru gets up and slowly walks over to Tiquan.
Darnell thinking *This is bad. I was trying to save this but I have to do it now.* Darnell crawls over towards the bags he brought out and pulls out a scroll.
Orochimaru: You were a a f**king nuisance!!! I should kill you now, but instead I'll give you a parting gift.
Orochimaru heads out stretches towards Tiquan's neck and bites it.
Tiquan: Ahhhhhh!!
Darnell: Noooo!
Kabuto is finally recovering.
Kabuto: Lord Orochimaru is everything fine?
Kabuto starts walking towards Orochimaru and Tiquan.
Orochimaru: Yes everything is fine.
Kabuto seeing the state Tiquan is in can tell Orochimaru didn't have much of troubles.
Kabuto: Did you kill him?
Orochimaru: No. Why would I do that?
Kabuto: I'm sorry my lord it's just the predicament he's in...he looks dead.
Tiquan is posted on a tree with the Sword of Kusanagi piercing him in the chest.
Tiquan: F**k you.
Tiquan spits on Kabuto and Orochimaru.*
Orochimaru: Your dead you f**king brat!!! I'm gonna kill you!!!!
Orochimaru goes in for the kill.
Darnell: I don't think so!!!*
*hand signs* Summoning Jutsu!!!!
Darnell summons a huge frog in front of Tiquan.
Orochimaru jumps back
*hand signs* Summoning Jutsu!!!!
Orochimaru summons a giant snake.
Kabuto: Lord Orochimaru I'm sorry to interrupt but we don't have the time for this. We have other business to attended to.
Orochimaru and Darnell have a stare-off waiting for one to make the first move.
Orochimaru: Darnell Kabuto's right we don't have the time for this.
Darnell: No! You're not getting away from we this time Orochimaru.
Orochimaru: Darnell it's not me you should be worried about its your grandson.*
Darnell looks down towards Tiquan. He's in bad shape the Sword still pierced on his chest.
Orochimaru: You see we do this your grandson dies. Actually if you don't get him help within the next he'll die, and you know it.
Darnell know Orochimaru's right but he doesn't want Orochimaru to just get away and harm more people.
Orochimaru: Hm hm hm. Untilnext time Darnell. Kusanagi!
Orochimaru called his sword. As the sword comes out of Tiquan's chest he falls to the ground.
Orochimaru's snake disappears within a huge puff of smoke.*
Darnell jumps down from his frog to check on his grandson.
Orochimaru: It seems you made your decision. Oh and by the way the sword was penetrated deeper than you think.....if he's lucky he has 30 minutes and well last time I checked the hospital was 30 minutes away Hahahahaha.
Orochimaru laugh gets dense as he and Kabuto disappear within in the forest.
Darnell's frog disappears within a puff of smoke also.
Darnell: Come on Tiquan stay with me.
Darnell rushed Tiquan into the back seat of the van. Darnell hit the gas as he rushes Tiquan to the hospital.
Tiquan: Grandaddy........
Darnell: Don't speak Tiquan it just makes it worst you'll be fine were almost there.*
Tiquan: I......I.........
Tiquan losses consciousness*
Darnell: Don't talk.
Darnell knows Tiquan is near death. He can't have his first grandson die like this.
Darnell thinking *If he dies what am I gonna tell Shara? What am I gonna tell the family? Half of them are gonna jump on them ight away once I say Orochimaru. Come on Tiquan I need you to survive this.....not just for you but for me too.*
Flashback
5 year old Tiquan: Granddaddy I wanna be strong like you one day.
Darnell: I know and you will just don't die on me while we're training or even while on a mission for that matter. Survival is key. It's the most important thing you need on a mission......if you die who'll protect all your friends and family?
5 year old Tiquan: I won't Granddaddy I promise! When I'm strong enough I'll protect them all even you.
Darnell: That's good Tiquan. I'll look forward to that day.
5 year old Tiquan: Grandaddy?
Darnell: Yes Tiquan?
5 year old Tiquan: Promise you'll protect me from all the bad guys and monsters out there till then.
Darnell: I promise Tiquan.
5 year old Tiquan: Thanks Grandaddy I can always count on you.
Darnell: Anytime Tiquan anytime.
Flashback over
Darnell has tears flowing down his face now. Knowing that he couldn't keep his promise Tiquan.
Darnell: Tiquan I'm sorry.
Tiquan regains consciousness.
He all he sees is lights going by faster and faster. Tiquan can also tell he is on a bed of some type.
Tiquan closes his eyes.
When Tiquan open his eyes again he's in a bed. He sees IV cords so he knows he's in a hospital. Tiquan looks towards the bed next to him, somebody is in it but Tiquan can't tell who it is yet.*
Tiquan closes his eyes yet again.
When Tiquan opens his eyes again he notices something different.
Tiquan thinking * Whoa. What is this? My sight it's different.....its better......I wonder who's in that next room**
Tiquan looks toward the bed next to him, and notices its his brother Tziah.
Tiquan thinking * What happened to Tziah? I hope he's ok.*
At that moment Tziah turns over and Tiquan sees it. He sees Tziahs newly unlocked Sharingan eyes. Tiquan then finally realized what has different with is eyes he too has unlocked his Sharingan.
The brothers reunited for the first time since school got out.
Next time Chronicles of Tiquan Conley Chapter 1 part 11 Reunion
Thank you for reading I hope you guys enjoyed. Again I'm sorry for the delay blame my computer. Enjoy your days again I thank you all for reading.
Authors Note
I'm still new with this as you can tell but ey tell me what you think critism is accepted
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