Cosmic Spider-Man ¦ |コズミックスパイダーマン

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Cosmic Spider-Man |コズミックスパイダーマン


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''With Great Power, Comes Great Responsibility''


Nickname: Puny Parker, Petey, "Midtown High's Only Professional Wallflower," Tiger, "Spidey", Webhead, Web-Slinger, Wall crawler, Amazing Bag-Man, Bombastic Bag-Man, Captain Universe, Champion of Life.
Gender:
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Male
Age: 28
Clan: Hidden Leaf Village


Appearance & Personality:

Spider-Man is a youthful and lean man. He has brown hair, his eyes are hazel and he stands at the height of 5' 10”. He also has small hairs on his hands that help him attach to surfaces. Spider-Man has a terrible identity problem, a marked inferiority complex, and a fear of women. He is anti-social, castration-ridden, racked with Oedipal guilt, and accident-prone functioning neurotic. Agonizing over his choices, always attempting to do right, he is nonetheless viewed with suspicion by the authorities, who seem unsure as to whether he is a helpful vigilante or a clever criminal. But one thing he always remembers when things get tough. Is the last words that his uncle Ben Spoke to him. With Great Power, Comes Great Responsibility.
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Village/ Konohagakure Rank/ Sannin Chakra Info/: 1,200 Chakra

Village of Birth: N/A.
Village of Alliance:
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Konohagakure
Ninja Rank: Sannin

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- Needs training
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Your ninjutsu:

(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)

(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.

(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.

(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.

(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).

(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)


History:

Peter Benjamin Parker was born in Queens to CIA agents Richard and Mary Parker. While Peter was still an infant, his parents were assigned to infiltrate the Algerian based spy ring controlled by the communist agent, the Red Skull (Albert Malik). The moment the Red Skull learned that Richard and Mary were double agents, he had them killed by one of his agents, the Finisher, in an airplane crash overseas and then framed them for treason. Peter went to live with his uncle and aunt, Ben and May Parker, in Forest Hills, New York; they became Peter’s surrogate parents and raised him as if he were their own son. Over the next nine years, Parker grew to be extremely bright in science and became a high honors student at Midtown High School. Parker's shyness and scholastic interest often made him a social outcast and a target for bullies, primarily football star Flash Thompson. While attending a public exhibition demonstrating the safe handling of nuclear laboratory waste materials, sponsored by the General Techtronics Corporation, the 15-year-old Peter Parker was bitten on the hand by a spider that had been irradiated by a particle accelerator used in the demonstration. Unbeknownst to him, after the spider fell from his hand, it bit a girl, Cindy Moon on the ankle before it died from the radiation. Making his way home afterwards, Peter was almost hit by a car; when Peter jumped out of the way, Peter discovered he had somehow gained incredible strength, agility, and the ability to cling to walls, spider-like traits that he immediately associated with the spider bite.

Becoming Cosmic Spider-Man
After defeating the Tri-Sentinel, the Uni-Power chose to remain with Peter Parker, apparently due to his heightened sense of responsibility.

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Battles

Won:-
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Sonnelion

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Did you get permission for a Spiderman bio? Pretty good bio if it's your first.


Off Topic:
:WAT:Your avatar?
 

Namar

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I call all genjutsu upon you.
 

Sonnelion

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I got permission from Nathan via PM

Put link in bio towards the bottom stating it. Also you can have all elements posted in bio even if you haven't learned them.
Welcome to rp and the long waiting period for bios to get checked.

Again what is your avatar wearing, those are not a thong that anyone should wear.
 

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Lmao, nice Spiderman bio but there's aloooooot of things that need to be edited here.

The entire history and the abilities (Godlike strength, Lightspeed, etc)
 

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Put link in bio towards the bottom stating it. Also you can have all elements posted in bio even if you haven't learned them.
Welcome to rp and the long waiting period for bios to get checked.

Again what is your avatar wearing, those are not a thong that anyone should wear.

I did.

Are you sure I can have all elements???

She's wearing a damn amazing thong my man LOL
 

Sonnelion

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Lmao, nice Spiderman bio but there's aloooooot of things that need to be edited here.

The entire history and the abilities (Godlike strength, Lightspeed, etc)

This^^^

I did.

Are you sure I can have all elements???

She's wearing a damn amazing thong my man LOL

You are Sannin rank so yeah but you need to put needs training on all of them until you learn a rank.

To each their own.
 

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Okay next you have to change out all this "agents" stuff to something more NB-esque, like ninja or shinobi. And try to remove the mentions of comic book heroes and events.
 

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You don't need to put all elements. Zaph, Moofy, and Pantha just put one element and they got approved. Not like you going to master all of them in one go. Focus on one element and Ninjutsu, Genjutsu, and Taijutsu. Kenjutsu is up to you but it's relatively easy to master.

I had my eye on creating Peter Parker but I guess that ship sailed now. >.>

I wish you the best and if you really stick with the character, get the spider contract signed and done with, I'll teach you my spider customs.

May your path be an enlightened one. u__u
 

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Welcome to RP bro. Should've joined Ame though lol
 

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Get the spider contract or this isn't legit.
 

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I'm sure you've been informed about why this bio is unacceptable in regard to the history. If not, refer to the rules in this section. You can't carbon copy the history from another universe into this bio. It has to relate to the Narutoverse. Have any questions pm me.
 
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