I hate to be harsh but its the only way your going to improve :S its realllly not the best

his hair is missing the bg is way too obviouse that you just copied the render all over and blured it, the text is too big and stands out too much it needs to be close to the focal smaller and less obvious. Another point try not to put the focal in the center of a canvas it makes it look bad most of the time =[ the colours are also kinda dull
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thats a pretty cool tutorial for you to try and work from and some of the other tutorials on that site. Again dont wanna be too harsh but keep up the good work

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