[Romance] [Controversial] Naruto: Cold Iron Ruler [Chapter 2]

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Naruto
Cold Iron Ruler
Chapter 2

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In an instant the troops moved out capturing foreign merchants and their families. Relocation camps were rapidly assembled. Their worldly possessions were taken from them as they were guided into these camps. Their heads were shaven. They were forced to wear silly striped pajamas.

Those were the fortunate ones. Others received tickets for the roller coaster of death. It was a peculiar ride. The merchants were loaded into carts that were then hurled at high speeds to a sudden and violent stop. They were ejected from the carts directly into a wall of flames that was hot enough to even incinerate the air in their lungs. Clouds of ash exited from the other side. The horrendous screams would reverberate through the hills.

Did the people of Konoha recoil in abject horror at the atrocities? No. They celebrated it. They were proud of their Hokage. They would shout praises at him for taking back their country. Women would cream in their panties at the very sight of the pure blooded blonde haired blue eyed Führer.

Things would continue this way without any intervention for quite some time. That is, until the fire nation attacked.

Once word of these so called atrocities (citation needed) got to the Daimyo of the land of fire, he ordered an Army march into Konoha immediately to stop it. Unfortunately, he lacked the charisma that was Naruto's greatest asset and instead the armies pledged their allegiance to Naruto. And so without hesitation Naruto and his massive army would suddenly blitz into Poland The Land of Rain.

In a short matter of time Naruto managed to expand his sphere of influence over the entire Land of Fire while conquering the Land of Rain in such a short time, it would appear as though his army was unstoppable. The people loved Naruto, he was their glorious Führer. He brought them victory, wealth, and power.

← Chapter 1 | Coming Soon → ​
 

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Wow Naruto had all that power from talk no Jutsu, genius. Will he ever try to use it on other nations like sound and sand?
Story getting better each chapter <3
 

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Wow Naruto had all that power from talk no Jutsu, genius. Will he ever try to use it on other nations like sound and sand?
Story getting better each chapter <3
For sure, I'll have more character development and dialogue in the next chapter. This chapter was mostly to direct the flow of events and build the story.
 

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Boy I sure hope Naruto won't invade the Land of Water in winter
 

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Boy I sure hope Naruto won't invade the Land of Water in winter

Yeah, that doesn't sound very reich to me.
 

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I cannot wait for chapter 3!
 

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I cannot wait for chapter 3!
You're right. You can't wait for chapter 3. It's impossible to wait for something that will never come.
 

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Is this the one where the foreign merchants win and then displace the local peoples of the sand village?
 

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Those happy little merchants, subverting society with degeneracy all the while rubbing their greedy hands.

Is this the one where the foreign merchants win and then displace the local peoples of the sand village?
 

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hurry up with the new chapter
 

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Man, this seems so familiar.

Ah, I know: Then, everything changed when the fire nation attacked!

:pick:
Sidenote: holy necro-post manbat
 

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Man, this seems so familiar.

Ah, I know: Then, everything changed when the fire nation attacked!

:pick:
Sidenote: holy necro-post manbat
agreed fréndo..
 
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