Colors

[Byron123]

If I lose my sense of colors
would I be able to believe
in all these vivid dreams of rainbows
that as a kid used to seek?


If my mind was to fall
and rot near to a corpse
would my soul fly away,
would I even feel a loss?


If I were to pick a side,
from pure white to sinful black,
would my mind find a way,
would I finally turn back?


Such the beauty was the life
with world colored and free
such the beauty I thought it was
till I learned the area grey...

 

[~Ethereal~]

My favourite is most definitely the 3rd paragraph.

 

[SayWhat21]

nice poem man

 

[Byron123]

My favourite is most definitely the 3rd paragraph.

Glad you liked it =D

nice poem man

Thanks man and nice avatar, Kaneki is my fav.

 

[Waindo]

Good job bro...this might be your best poem yet imo...

 

[Byron123]

Good job bro...this might be your best poem yet imo...

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Nah don't think so, I didn't even try to make it good, in any case, what do you think of this one?

 

[Waindo]

The thing is, that the ones in which one doesen't overthink and just "pours it out" tend to turn out the most awesome
At least from my writing experience. My best poems here are the ones I wrote within few minutes.

 

[Byron123]

The thing is, that the ones in which one doesen't overthink and just "pours it out" tend to turn out the most awesome
At least from my writing experience. My best poems here are the ones I wrote within few minutes.

Well what I'm saying is that I like the meaning behind of it and even though it has emotion, its form is not perfect. A perfect poem is not perfect just in emotion but also in form

 

[A$AP Wap]

nice work

 

[Byron123]

nice work

Thanks

 

[fiend]

Beautiful bro <3, especially the end.=D Solid work dude Solid. .

 

[Byron123]

Beautiful bro <3, especially the end.=D Solid work dude Solid. .

Thanks man!

 

[Mis]

I really like this!

 

[Hotaruko]

splendid work of art! nice poem, it's got the right amount of imagery and depth to it

 

[Byron123]

I really like this!

splendid work of art! nice poem, it's got the right amount of imagery and depth to it

Thank you guys, I really appreciate it.