[Photoshop] CnC needed on this

TheLastSamurai

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like the title said, I really would like some CnC on this, dunno why I don't like it as it is.
Is it lacking depth or a lightsource? :/

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can u post the render?
to see what u did with it :y
 

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i like it and there is not much room to do much better in my opinion ;)
 

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It's really busy sometimes less is more.
 

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good stuff man
 
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pretty gud :y
i think the lighting and depth is good :y
 

Sabuto Hayashi

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That looks really good! :D

CnC: Perhaps the render should blend into the background a bit more? It seems a bit too crisp and gives the figure a rather flat appearance, especially at the bottom.
 

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I think its ok, but as you stated it is missing a lightsource on the right side and it is very busy to the point where it has no flow. I would have made the render slightly larger(when making tags you don't need to use the entire render just the important parts) and used less effects and taken more of an atmosphere type of approach with it. As vert tags don't leave you with much room to begin with, and on the version with the text I feel you have a nice font just bad placement. Becuase its right next to the most important part of the tag(renders head) so it detracts you from the focal. Try placing it lower down but keep it on the same side about where his calves are other than that, nice work hope this helps:)
 

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Well I think It looks Great the way it is but that's just my personal opinion :)
 

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I think its ok, but as you stated it is missing a lightsource on the right side and it is very busy to the point where it has no flow. I would have made the render slightly larger(when making tags you don't need to use the entire render just the important parts) and used less effects and taken more of an atmosphere type of approach with it. As vert tags don't leave you with much room to begin with, and on the version with the text I feel you have a nice font just bad placement. Becuase its right next to the most important part of the tag(renders head) so it detracts you from the focal. Try placing it lower down but keep it on the same side about where his calves are other than that, nice work hope this helps:)

ofc it helps, thanks bro!
 
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