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bio. Ive everything except CE's and Snakes(using Jags)and wind Ninjutsu. Jounin.



Not messing around, Grimmjow would passively activate his chakra sensory, before channeling his Suiton chakra into the stream before him. As he did, 5m from either side of him(this means if im in the center, the dragons are 10m apart), two massive dragons would rise up.
The first dragon would strike at the man in front, aiming to bite and crush him. The second would wait a little longer before striking, looping around and hammering into the mans back, cracking the spine and rendering him competely paralysed.


(Chakra Henkanshi no Jutsu) - Chakra Sensing Technique(passive)
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 15 (- 5 per turn)
Damage: N/A
Description: This is a very advanced of advancing the ability to feel and sense chakra. The technique allows the user to concentrate and detect someone's chakra. Users can use this to determine the nature of a jutsu used as well as sense masses of chakra. The use of this can be compared to Sharingan's brutish level of sensory, able to sense collection of chakra but not the level of clarity and precision Byakugan has.

Note: Can only be used by bios with Sensory ability.
Note: After having on a bio for 1 month, users gain the ability to activate Sensory passive

(Suiton:Tsuin Suiryudan)-Twin Water Dragon
Rank:A
Type:Attack
RangeShort-Long
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description:Two huge rushing water projectiles in the shape of a twin dragons that dont have to attack at the same time(both dragons are made at the same time but users has option to only make on attack and doesnt cost extra to keep on the field) but are a part of one jutsu.

700-15-30=755 chakra
(sorry for the weak reply, heading to work, next one will be better)
 

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Not messing around, Grimmjow would passively activate his chakra sensory, before channeling his Suiton chakra into the stream before him. As he did, 5m from either side of him(this means if im in the center, the dragons are 10m apart), two massive dragons would rise up.
The first dragon would strike at the man in front, aiming to bite and crush him. The second would wait a little longer before striking, looping around and hammering into the mans back, cracking the spine and rendering him competely paralysed.


(Chakra Henkanshi no Jutsu) - Chakra Sensing Technique(passive)
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 15 (- 5 per turn)
Damage: N/A
Description: This is a very advanced of advancing the ability to feel and sense chakra. The technique allows the user to concentrate and detect someone's chakra. Users can use this to determine the nature of a jutsu used as well as sense masses of chakra. The use of this can be compared to Sharingan's brutish level of sensory, able to sense collection of chakra but not the level of clarity and precision Byakugan has.

Note: Can only be used by bios with Sensory ability.
Note: After having on a bio for 1 month, users gain the ability to activate Sensory passive

(Suiton:Tsuin Suiryudan)-Twin Water Dragon
Rank:A
Type:Attack
RangeShort-Long
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description:Two huge rushing water projectiles in the shape of a twin dragons that dont have to attack at the same time(both dragons are made at the same time but users has option to only make on attack and doesnt cost extra to keep on the field) but are a part of one jutsu.

700-15-30=755 chakra
(sorry for the weak reply, heading to work, next one will be better)

Watching as the water from the stream ahead would begin to rise, forming what resembles to be dragons a lengthy distance away from each other. 17 performs a single hand seal, expelling two bullet sized chunks of rock, one toward the water dragon coming directly toward me and one toward the water dragon remaining in its position, the bullet sized rocks would expand traveling right through the water dragons, destroying them in the process.

(Iwadeppō no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Rock Gun Technique
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: After performing the Monkey Hand seal, the user expels a bullet size chunk of rock from his mouth. After they are fired, the chunks expand into huge boulders capable of causing short range destruction.

I hear you came across an old friend of mine, she tells me you're a worthy opponent. Guess i'll find out for myself.

As 17 would speak, he would channel chakra through the earth condensing the soil around his opponent, before four stone spikes would erupt from different directions surrounding the opponent, attempting to pierce through his torso.

(Doton: Dosekidake no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Earth and Stone Bamboo Shoot Technique
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user of this technique condenses the soil and rock in the area to sprout out in the form of four large spikes which attack the target from four separate directions to make it harder to evade. However, it can be easilty avoided by escaping upwards.

With no hesitation as the spikes would rise from the ground, 17 would quickly swipe out a kunai with his left hand tossing it directly toward the direction of his opponent [aiming slightly over his opponents head attempting to catch him if he decides to escaping upward] while simultaneously creating a single clone to his right.

(Kage Bunshin no Jutsu) - Shadow Clone Technique
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20 (total chakra is divided by the final number of clones plus the user)
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The Kage Bunshin distributes the ninja's chakra evenly among the clones and himself and creates a real copy with form and substance. The clones, a max number of 4, are capable of performing techniques on their own and can even bleed, but will usually disperse after hit by a strong enough force, returning 10% of its individual chakra to the user. Shadow clones can't be distinguished from the original with Sharingan, Byakugan, Rinnegan or normal Chakra Sensing. The clone itself can also utilize any jutsu the original ninja knows. When the clone finally disperses, any new knowledge it has gained is passed back to the original ninja and any additional clones.
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1400-30-20-20= 1330/half = 665
Clone[referred to as Android]= 665
 

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Watching as the water from the stream ahead would begin to rise, forming what resembles to be dragons a lengthy distance away from each other. 17 performs a single hand seal, expelling two bullet sized chunks of rock, one toward the water dragon coming directly toward me and one toward the water dragon remaining in its position, the bullet sized rocks would expand traveling right through the water dragons, destroying them in the process.

(Iwadeppō no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Rock Gun Technique
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: After performing the Monkey Hand seal, the user expels a bullet size chunk of rock from his mouth. After they are fired, the chunks expand into huge boulders capable of causing short range destruction.

I hear you came across an old friend of mine, she tells me you're a worthy opponent. Guess i'll find out for myself.

As 17 would speak, he would channel chakra through the earth condensing the soil around his opponent, before four stone spikes would erupt from different directions surrounding the opponent, attempting to pierce through his torso.

(Doton: Dosekidake no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Earth and Stone Bamboo Shoot Technique
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user of this technique condenses the soil and rock in the area to sprout out in the form of four large spikes which attack the target from four separate directions to make it harder to evade. However, it can be easilty avoided by escaping upwards.

With no hesitation as the spikes would rise from the ground, 17 would quickly swipe out a kunai with his left hand tossing it directly toward the direction of his opponent [aiming slightly over his opponents head attempting to catch him if he decides to escaping upward] while simultaneously creating a single clone to his right.

(Kage Bunshin no Jutsu) - Shadow Clone Technique
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20 (total chakra is divided by the final number of clones plus the user)
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The Kage Bunshin distributes the ninja's chakra evenly among the clones and himself and creates a real copy with form and substance. The clones, a max number of 4, are capable of performing techniques on their own and can even bleed, but will usually disperse after hit by a strong enough force, returning 10% of its individual chakra to the user. Shadow clones can't be distinguished from the original with Sharingan, Byakugan, Rinnegan or normal Chakra Sensing. The clone itself can also utilize any jutsu the original ninja knows. When the clone finally disperses, any new knowledge it has gained is passed back to the original ninja and any additional clones.
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1400-30-20-20= 1330/half = 665
Clone[referred to as Android]= 665

Grimmjow was already channeling his chakra sensory into the man as he sensed the man begin to channel his earthern chakra. As the bullets destroyed his dragons, Grimmjow heard the man speak, and replied in kind.

You can't possibly be talking about that little girl i kicked around for half an hour before she blew herself up with her own jutsu right? That wasn't even a taste of my ability, that was merely childs games.

As Grimmjow spoke, he sensed the man once again channeling earth chakra, however this time he was channeling it below Grimmjow. As the ground began to mould and shift, Grimmjow would form two swift handseals and crouch down slightly. To the opponent, Grimmjows movements would be heavily slowed, looking as if he was moving downwards in slow motion. As Grimmjow reached his position, he would dash forwards, dodging the spikes(you didn't specify where the spikes hit me from, so im going to assume i have a gap to dash forward from). To the man, all he would see if Grimmjow vanish in a gust of wind. Closing the distance rapidly, Grimmjow would appear in front of the man and hit him 8 times, focussing on the ribs and solar plexus, winding him and breaking several ribs, before dashing past the man, stopping 3m away. As he stopped, Grimmjow would reach back into his pocket and grab three explosive kunai, throwing them into the mans spine and detonating them as he walked away from the crippled corpse on the ground.


(Hikasazanami-Ken Genjutsu: Hi-hirate kuresshendo) | Chop Hanging Rippling Fist Illusion Technique: Hidden Palm Crescendo
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: 60
Description: For this technique the practitioner will form two hand seals and then slowly assume the basic stance of the Chop-Hanging Fist style. This activates the illusion portion of the technique. The opponent will see the user slowly lower their body, leaving brief after images. Once the stance has been reached the opponent sees the user disappear in a swirl of wind. In reality the user will have been focusing large amounts of chakra to their legs and will burst forwards once the illusion activates, closing distance at high speeds and unleashes a barrage of eight palms strikes in the blink of an eye, never stopping their forwards movement. The strikes and the damage from them will break the opponent out of the genjutsu (should they still be in it) by the time of which the user will have moves past them by about three meters.
-Can be used three times per battle
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Chakra= 755-5-30=720
 

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Grimmjow was already channeling his chakra sensory into the man as he sensed the man begin to channel his earthern chakra. As the bullets destroyed his dragons, Grimmjow heard the man speak, and replied in kind.

You can't possibly be talking about that little girl i kicked around for half an hour before she blew herself up with her own jutsu right? That wasn't even a taste of my ability, that was merely childs games.

As Grimmjow spoke, he sensed the man once again channeling earth chakra, however this time he was channeling it below Grimmjow. As the ground began to mould and shift, Grimmjow would form two swift handseals and crouch down slightly. To the opponent, Grimmjows movements would be heavily slowed, looking as if he was moving downwards in slow motion. As Grimmjow reached his position, he would dash forwards, dodging the spikes(you didn't specify where the spikes hit me from, so im going to assume i have a gap to dash forward from). To the man, all he would see if Grimmjow vanish in a gust of wind. Closing the distance rapidly, Grimmjow would appear in front of the man and hit him 8 times, focussing on the ribs and solar plexus, winding him and breaking several ribs, before dashing past the man, stopping 3m away. As he stopped, Grimmjow would reach back into his pocket and grab three explosive kunai, throwing them into the mans spine and detonating them as he walked away from the crippled corpse on the ground.


(Hikasazanami-Ken Genjutsu: Hi-hirate kuresshendo) | Chop Hanging Rippling Fist Illusion Technique: Hidden Palm Crescendo
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: 60
Description: For this technique the practitioner will form two hand seals and then slowly assume the basic stance of the Chop-Hanging Fist style. This activates the illusion portion of the technique. The opponent will see the user slowly lower their body, leaving brief after images. Once the stance has been reached the opponent sees the user disappear in a swirl of wind. In reality the user will have been focusing large amounts of chakra to their legs and will burst forwards once the illusion activates, closing distance at high speeds and unleashes a barrage of eight palms strikes in the blink of an eye, never stopping their forwards movement. The strikes and the damage from them will break the opponent out of the genjutsu (should they still be in it) by the time of which the user will have moves past them by about three meters.
-Can be used three times per battle
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Chakra= 755-5-30=720

Continuing | Cw on bio btw
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17 observing the opponent, would notice him perform a few hand seals before slightly crouching and being weird. 17 being able to hear his previous earth spikes erupt from the ground, suddenly hearing a rush of wind as if it were coming towards him, as the spike would fully erupt, going right through its target as if he werent even there. 17 activating his sensory in which he'd be able both notice the disruption within his chakra network and sensing a rush of chakra making its way toward him. Simply smirking as the opponent would land strikes against 17 snapping him from the genjutsu, 17 hearing the opponent behind him causing him to turn around while the opponent threw 3 kunai with tags toward him. 17 activating his right earring, creating a shield of chakra stopping the kunai in its tracks as they would also shield him from their explosions [at the same time], just so could lift his right hand with only his middle finger raised. Running toward the opponent whom were within close range, as he performed a single hand seal causing raiton to radiate around his right hand. Immediately the raiton would extend as 17 would using a swiping motion to slice his opponent in half[from left to right].

Chakra Henkanshi no Jutsu) - Chakra Sensing Technique (Passive)
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 15 (- 5 per turn)
Damage: N/A
Description: This is a very advanced of advancing the ability to feel and sense chakra. The technique allows the user to concentrate and detect someone's chakra. Users can use this to determine the nature of a jutsu used as well as sense masses of chakra. The use of this can be compared to Sharingan's brutish level of sensory, able to sense collection of chakra but not the level of clarity and precision Byakugan has.

Note: Can only be used by bios with Sensory ability.
Note: After having on a bio for 1 month, users gain the ability to activate Sensory passively

(Za Kindachi Kyuui) The Kings Peace
Rank: S
Type: Weapon
Range: Short
Chakra: N/A
Damage: N/A
Description: Thousands of years ago, there was a lone some village in the Land of Eki, where all the villagers to a vow of peace. Never to fight even if their own life is endangered, the only exception was the protection of family and loved ones. Kids were taught this from an early age, meditation was also practiced at minimum 4 times a day to keep everyone at one with themselves. Within this village were great craftsmen throughout out all the land, that made tools with the heart for defending. Other bigger Villages and tribes with well over a thousand people wanted these craftsmen and their creations to in attempt to become rulers of the entire land of Eki. The village hidden in Ketsueki, the biggest in all the land and by far the most powerful, came to the lone village destroying everyones homes and killing the people of the village in search for the craftsmen and what they seen as "weapons". One of the Five craftsmen gave his son a pair of Gold earrings with what appears to have aqua colored diamonds[from chakra being stored within them] after the son put the earring on they became one with him. The intruders eventually found the last craftsman and his family hiding within a tunnel built under their home, each being pulled and executed, the son being the last one pulled from the tunnel, when they tried to kill him a barrier of chakra appeared reflecting theyre jutsu. This son with the only tools ever found, made by the legendary craftsmen , after 20 years went on to become King of all the land of Eki, finally bringing Peace. The earrings became known as "The Kings Peace", and their abilities are known to Block and/or Reflect nearly anything threatening the holder.

Note: The earrings can activate without the holders awareness but will always cost a move and drain proportional chakra to the technique defended from, preventing the user from molding his chakra at the same time for another technique.
Note: Only works with offensive Ninjutsu techniques (elemental or not) travelling towards the user.
Note: Blocking [right earring] is the ability through which the earings bring forth a shield of chakra, shy of 50cm from the user, in the path of an incoming technique, just enough to block it from damaging the wearer and Reflection[left earring] is the ability to bring forth a dampening shield of chakra, in the path of an incoming technique, which diverts the attack's path and sends it back towards its origin, albeit weaker by half (B-Rank becomes C-Rank for example).
Note: Each ability can only be used once every 3 turns and can only defend against up to B-Rank. By sacrificing the ability to reuse one of the applications, the user is able to forcefully will the earings to defend from a technique up to S-Rank. However, in this case, that application becomes unusable for the rest of the match and they need conscious control from the user to perform said defense.
Note: Have to be taught how to use the earrings abilities by Smirk(Stussy)

(Raiton: Chidori) - Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user must first perform the following sequence of hand seals Ox → Rabbit → Monkey → Dragon → Rat → Bird → Ox → Snake → Dog → Tiger → Monkey and they will then focus lightning chakra into their hand to create a lightning jutsu that is concentrated in the user's palm and thrusted toward the opponent at high speed. The lightning in the user's palm sounds like birds chirping, hence the name, and allows the user to perform high grade cutting damage or high penetration piercing thrusts.
Note: Someone who mastered lightning release can perform chidori with just the Ox hand seal.
Note: Uchiha Sasuke and Kakashi Hatake bios can use the technique without handseals

(Raiton: Chidori Eiso) - Lightning Release Chidori Sharp Spear
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user increases the range of their Chidori by using form manipulation to extend it into a blade up to 10 meters in length. This blade is capable of splitting into multiple additional blades upon contact with an enemy, drastically increasing the number of wounds it can inflict. Like other Chidori-related techniques, this jutsu will numb its target upon contact but unlike others, seems to focus more on having a cutting power, like a katana, than a piercing one. Because of its cutting abilities, it often seems to manifest a certain "solidity"; a tangible aspect.
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1350-15-30-30= 1275
 
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Continuing | Cw on bio btw
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17 observing the opponent, would notice him perform a few hand seals before slightly crouching and being weird. 17 being able to hear his previous earth spikes erupt from the ground, suddenly hearing a rush of wind as if it were coming towards him, as the spike would fully erupt, going right through its target as if he werent even there. 17 activating his sensory in which he'd be able both notice the disruption within his chakra network and sensing a rush of chakra making its way toward him. Simply smirking as the opponent would land strikes against 17 snapping him from the genjutsu, 17 hearing the opponent behind him causing him to turn around while the opponent threw 3 kunai with tags toward him. 17 activating his right earring, creating a shield of chakra stopping the kunai in its tracks as they would also shield him from their explosions [at the same time], just so could lift his right hand with only his middle finger raised. Running toward the opponent whom were within close range, as he performed a single hand seal causing raiton to radiate around his right hand. Immediately the raiton would extend as 17 would using a swiping motion to slice his opponent in half[from left to right].

Chakra Henkanshi no Jutsu) - Chakra Sensing Technique (Passive)
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 15 (- 5 per turn)
Damage: N/A
Description: This is a very advanced of advancing the ability to feel and sense chakra. The technique allows the user to concentrate and detect someone's chakra. Users can use this to determine the nature of a jutsu used as well as sense masses of chakra. The use of this can be compared to Sharingan's brutish level of sensory, able to sense collection of chakra but not the level of clarity and precision Byakugan has.

Note: Can only be used by bios with Sensory ability.
Note: After having on a bio for 1 month, users gain the ability to activate Sensory passively

(Za Kindachi Kyuui) The Kings Peace
Rank: S
Type: Weapon
Range: Short
Chakra: N/A
Damage: N/A
Description: Thousands of years ago, there was a lone some village in the Land of Eki, where all the villagers to a vow of peace. Never to fight even if their own life is endangered, the only exception was the protection of family and loved ones. Kids were taught this from an early age, meditation was also practiced at minimum 4 times a day to keep everyone at one with themselves. Within this village were great craftsmen throughout out all the land, that made tools with the heart for defending. Other bigger Villages and tribes with well over a thousand people wanted these craftsmen and their creations to in attempt to become rulers of the entire land of Eki. The village hidden in Ketsueki, the biggest in all the land and by far the most powerful, came to the lone village destroying everyones homes and killing the people of the village in search for the craftsmen and what they seen as "weapons". One of the Five craftsmen gave his son a pair of Gold earrings with what appears to have aqua colored diamonds[from chakra being stored within them] after the son put the earring on they became one with him. The intruders eventually found the last craftsman and his family hiding within a tunnel built under their home, each being pulled and executed, the son being the last one pulled from the tunnel, when they tried to kill him a barrier of chakra appeared reflecting theyre jutsu. This son with the only tools ever found, made by the legendary craftsmen , after 20 years went on to become King of all the land of Eki, finally bringing Peace. The earrings became known as "The Kings Peace", and their abilities are known to Block and/or Reflect nearly anything threatening the holder.

Note: The earrings can activate without the holders awareness but will always cost a move and drain proportional chakra to the technique defended from, preventing the user from molding his chakra at the same time for another technique.
Note: Only works with offensive Ninjutsu techniques (elemental or not) travelling towards the user.
Note: Blocking [right earring] is the ability through which the earings bring forth a shield of chakra, shy of 50cm from the user, in the path of an incoming technique, just enough to block it from damaging the wearer and Reflection[left earring] is the ability to bring forth a dampening shield of chakra, in the path of an incoming technique, which diverts the attack's path and sends it back towards its origin, albeit weaker by half (B-Rank becomes C-Rank for example).
Note: Each ability can only be used once every 3 turns and can only defend against up to B-Rank. By sacrificing the ability to reuse one of the applications, the user is able to forcefully will the earings to defend from a technique up to S-Rank. However, in this case, that application becomes unusable for the rest of the match and they need conscious control from the user to perform said defense.
Note: Have to be taught how to use the earrings abilities by Smirk(Stussy)

(Raiton: Chidori) - Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user must first perform the following sequence of hand seals Ox → Rabbit → Monkey → Dragon → Rat → Bird → Ox → Snake → Dog → Tiger → Monkey and they will then focus lightning chakra into their hand to create a lightning jutsu that is concentrated in the user's palm and thrusted toward the opponent at high speed. The lightning in the user's palm sounds like birds chirping, hence the name, and allows the user to perform high grade cutting damage or high penetration piercing thrusts.
Note: Someone who mastered lightning release can perform chidori with just the Ox hand seal.
Note: Uchiha Sasuke and Kakashi Hatake bios can use the technique without handseals

(Raiton: Chidori Eiso) - Lightning Release Chidori Sharp Spear
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user increases the range of their Chidori by using form manipulation to extend it into a blade up to 10 meters in length. This blade is capable of splitting into multiple additional blades upon contact with an enemy, drastically increasing the number of wounds it can inflict. Like other Chidori-related techniques, this jutsu will numb its target upon contact but unlike others, seems to focus more on having a cutting power, like a katana, than a piercing one. Because of its cutting abilities, it often seems to manifest a certain "solidity"; a tangible aspect.
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1350-15-30-30= 1275

Your move is confusing as hell. On one hand you're adding parts to my genjutsu that arnt there, and on the other, your wording suggests you only use the CW to block the kunai, not the 60 A rank damage from my jutsu? Confusing, but ill reply non the less.
Also, i dont think you need to post chidori and one thousand birds, i might be wrong on that regard, but in the past we used to just post the jutsu Chidori stemmed from, not the chidori itself(exception being Kirin)



Grimmjows strikes landed cleanly, which was honestly a first. However, as he struck, he could sense the chakra around the man and was fully aware that as his kunai where launched, that he had no sustained any damage from the strike. What was concerning however, was that the man had recognized the genjutsu and allowed himself to be hit, that much was obvious. As he contemplated this, Grimmjow sensed the man building up Raiton chakra as he weaved a single handseal. As he did this, a smirk crossed Grimmjows face, knowing that Lightning was coming. As the man created a chidori, Grimmjow also sensed that he was manipulating the chidori itself, and watched as a blade of lightning extended and began to come around, aiming to cut Grimmjow in half. Extending his right hand, Grimmjow activated the dark seal on his palm, masking it from his opponents vision. As the blade came close, it would be absorbed straight into the mark, vanishing into his chakra system to be stored. However, the man was now advancing towards Grimmjow at an accelerated rate. With the lightning absorbed, Grimmjow would channel his suiton chakra into his feet, creating two spiralling blades of water chakra. As the opponent got closer, Grimmjow would step forward and pivot on his left foot, bringing his right leg around his body aiming to kick the man in the rib cage and bisect him with a single kick

(Meiton: Kyūketsukō) - Dark Release: Inhaling Maw
Rank: B
Type: Offensive, Defensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user uses their dark release to forcibly extract the physical and spiritual energy (chakra) of another ninja and absorb it through the upper square of the mark on his left hand, which can then be used to perform Dark Release: Judgment.
Note: Can absorb up to A-Rank Wind, Fire and Lightning techniques, S-Rank raw chakra or C-Rank Water, all within reason. Has no effect on Earth techniques.

(suiton: mizu rasen ken)-water style: water spiral blades
Rank:A
type: defence/ attack
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description: a couple of hand seals, the user creates blades of water which is mixed with wind. It is formed under the user's feet and spins at high speeds around the user like the user is in a water cacoon. it will protectin the user from taijutsu and short distance jutsu (like rasengan, shadow clone explosion, etc). If the oppoenent trys to punch or kick, their limbs will be cut of. This can also protect the user from attacks that are thrown (kunai and shurikens) and also fire jutsu

720-5-20-30=665 chakra
 

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Your move is confusing as hell. On one hand you're adding parts to my genjutsu that arnt there, and on the other, your wording suggests you only use the CW to block the kunai, not the 60 A rank damage from my jutsu? Confusing, but ill reply non the less.
Also, i dont think you need to post chidori and one thousand birds, i might be wrong on that regard, but in the past we used to just post the jutsu Chidori stemmed from, not the chidori itself(exception being Kirin)



Grimmjows strikes landed cleanly, which was honestly a first. However, as he struck, he could sense the chakra around the man and was fully aware that as his kunai where launched, that he had no sustained any damage from the strike. What was concerning however, was that the man had recognized the genjutsu and allowed himself to be hit, that much was obvious. As he contemplated this, Grimmjow sensed the man building up Raiton chakra as he weaved a single handseal. As he did this, a smirk crossed Grimmjows face, knowing that Lightning was coming. As the man created a chidori, Grimmjow also sensed that he was manipulating the chidori itself, and watched as a blade of lightning extended and began to come around, aiming to cut Grimmjow in half. Extending his right hand, Grimmjow activated the dark seal on his palm, masking it from his opponents vision. As the blade came close, it would be absorbed straight into the mark, vanishing into his chakra system to be stored. However, the man was now advancing towards Grimmjow at an accelerated rate. With the lightning absorbed, Grimmjow would channel his suiton chakra into his feet, creating two spiralling blades of water chakra. As the opponent got closer, Grimmjow would step forward and pivot on his left foot, bringing his right leg around his body aiming to kick the man in the rib cage and bisect him with a single kick

(Meiton: Kyūketsukō) - Dark Release: Inhaling Maw
Rank: B
Type: Offensive, Defensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user uses their dark release to forcibly extract the physical and spiritual energy (chakra) of another ninja and absorb it through the upper square of the mark on his left hand, which can then be used to perform Dark Release: Judgment.
Note: Can absorb up to A-Rank Wind, Fire and Lightning techniques, S-Rank raw chakra or C-Rank Water, all within reason. Has no effect on Earth techniques.

(suiton: mizu rasen ken)-water style: water spiral blades
Rank:A
type: defence/ attack
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description: a couple of hand seals, the user creates blades of water which is mixed with wind. It is formed under the user's feet and spins at high speeds around the user like the user is in a water cacoon. it will protectin the user from taijutsu and short distance jutsu (like rasengan, shadow clone explosion, etc). If the oppoenent trys to punch or kick, their limbs will be cut of. This can also protect the user from attacks that are thrown (kunai and shurikens) and also fire jutsu

720-5-20-30=665 chakra

1) You're gen doesnt say anything about what happens when your illusional self is hit..
1.5) You told me through vm's that the gen has no altering effects other than you moving slowly, so when my spikes come up and your illusional self his hit, would they go right through you or would it seem as if it were you that were hit cause im sure the spikes would be raised before its turned to a swirl of wind either or doesnt matter..
2) The wording was intentional, since i edited my move i deemed it fit to be hit by your tai
3)The wording for "sharp spear" says it extends the chidori by manipulation so i added the jutsu in there in anyway, wasnt sure(even though there wasnt any mention of needing to).
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While 17 swung, he could sense chakra being channeled from his opponent, as the lightning blade would make contact with the right hand of the extended arm of the opponent, it would begin to fade. This being all too familiar to 17, as he himself is a Dark user. Still continuing to run, 17 would focus chakra toward his feet launching himself toward the opponent with more momentum, while simultaneously swiping out a kunai with his left hand. Sensing chakra being channeled to the feet of his opponent, while the opponent would rotate his body leading with a spiraling blade of water covering his right leg. 17 would immediately activate his left earring, specifically just before impact. Causing a thin shield of chakra to reflect the opponents own power to be used against him, destroying and severing his own leg, while 17 would simultaneously swipe the kunai within his left hand across the neck of the opponent, watching as he would bleed out all over the very spot he were standing in.

(Za Kindachi Kyuui) The Kings Peace
Rank: S
Type: Weapon
Range: Short
Chakra: N/A
Damage: N/A
Description: Thousands of years ago, there was a lone some village in the Land of Eki, where all the villagers to a vow of peace. Never to fight even if their own life is endangered, the only exception was the protection of family and loved ones. Kids were taught this from an early age, meditation was also practiced at minimum 4 times a day to keep everyone at one with themselves. Within this village were great craftsmen throughout out all the land, that made tools with the heart for defending. Other bigger Villages and tribes with well over a thousand people wanted these craftsmen and their creations to in attempt to become rulers of the entire land of Eki. The village hidden in Ketsueki, the biggest in all the land and by far the most powerful, came to the lone village destroying everyones homes and killing the people of the village in search for the craftsmen and what they seen as "weapons". One of the Five craftsmen gave his son a pair of Gold earrings with what appears to have aqua colored diamonds[from chakra being stored within them] after the son put the earring on they became one with him. The intruders eventually found the last craftsman and his family hiding within a tunnel built under their home, each being pulled and executed, the son being the last one pulled from the tunnel, when they tried to kill him a barrier of chakra appeared reflecting theyre jutsu. This son with the only tools ever found, made by the legendary craftsmen , after 20 years went on to become King of all the land of Eki, finally bringing Peace. The earrings became known as "The Kings Peace", and their abilities are known to Block and/or Reflect nearly anything threatening the holder.

Note: The earrings can activate without the holders awareness but will always cost a move and drain proportional chakra to the technique defended from, preventing the user from molding his chakra at the same time for another technique.
Note: Only works with offensive Ninjutsu techniques (elemental or not) travelling towards the user.
Note: Blocking [right earring] is the ability through which the earings bring forth a shield of chakra, shy of 50cm from the user, in the path of an incoming technique, just enough to block it from damaging the wearer and Reflection[left earring] is the ability to bring forth a dampening shield of chakra, in the path of an incoming technique, which diverts the attack's path and sends it back towards its origin, albeit weaker by half (B-Rank becomes C-Rank for example).
Note: Each ability can only be used once every 3 turns and can only defend against up to B-Rank. By sacrificing the ability to reuse one of the applications, the user is able to forcefully will the earings to defend from a technique up to S-Rank. However, in this case, that application becomes unusable for the rest of the match and they need conscious control from the user to perform said defense.
Note: Have to be taught how to use the earrings abilities by Smirk(Stussy)

Her name is Himiko.
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1275-5-30= 1240
A rank would be sent back toward you as B rank.
 
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1) You're gen doesnt say anything about what happens when your illusional self is hit..
1.5) You told me through vm's that the gen has no altering effects other than you moving slowly, so when my spikes come up and your illusional self his hit, would they go right through you or would it seem as if it were you that were hit cause im sure the spikes would be raised before its turned to a swirl of wind either or doesnt matter..
2) The wording was intentional, since i edited my move i deemed it fit to be hit by your tai
3)The wording for "sharp spear" says it extends the chidori by manipulation so i added the jutsu in there in anyway, wasnt sure(even though there wasnt any mention of needing to).
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While 17 swung, he could sense chakra being channeled from his opponent, as the lightning blade would make contact with the right hand of the extended arm of the opponent, it would begin to fade. This being all too familiar to 17, as he himself is a Dark user. Still continuing to run, 17 would focus chakra toward his feet launching himself toward the opponent with more momentum, while simultaneously swiping out a kunai with his left hand. Sensing chakra being channeled to the feet of his opponent, while the opponent would rotate his body leading with a spiraling blade of water covering his right leg. 17 would immediately activate his left earring, specifically just before impact. Causing a thin shield of chakra to reflect the opponents own power to be used against him, destroying and severing his own leg, while 17 would simultaneously swipe the kunai within his left hand across the neck of the opponent, watching as he would bleed out all over the very spot he were standing in.

(Za Kindachi Kyuui) The Kings Peace
Rank: S
Type: Weapon
Range: Short
Chakra: N/A
Damage: N/A
Description: Thousands of years ago, there was a lone some village in the Land of Eki, where all the villagers to a vow of peace. Never to fight even if their own life is endangered, the only exception was the protection of family and loved ones. Kids were taught this from an early age, meditation was also practiced at minimum 4 times a day to keep everyone at one with themselves. Within this village were great craftsmen throughout out all the land, that made tools with the heart for defending. Other bigger Villages and tribes with well over a thousand people wanted these craftsmen and their creations to in attempt to become rulers of the entire land of Eki. The village hidden in Ketsueki, the biggest in all the land and by far the most powerful, came to the lone village destroying everyones homes and killing the people of the village in search for the craftsmen and what they seen as "weapons". One of the Five craftsmen gave his son a pair of Gold earrings with what appears to have aqua colored diamonds[from chakra being stored within them] after the son put the earring on they became one with him. The intruders eventually found the last craftsman and his family hiding within a tunnel built under their home, each being pulled and executed, the son being the last one pulled from the tunnel, when they tried to kill him a barrier of chakra appeared reflecting theyre jutsu. This son with the only tools ever found, made by the legendary craftsmen , after 20 years went on to become King of all the land of Eki, finally bringing Peace. The earrings became known as "The Kings Peace", and their abilities are known to Block and/or Reflect nearly anything threatening the holder.

Note: The earrings can activate without the holders awareness but will always cost a move and drain proportional chakra to the technique defended from, preventing the user from molding his chakra at the same time for another technique.
Note: Only works with offensive Ninjutsu techniques (elemental or not) travelling towards the user.
Note: Blocking [right earring] is the ability through which the earings bring forth a shield of chakra, shy of 50cm from the user, in the path of an incoming technique, just enough to block it from damaging the wearer and Reflection[left earring] is the ability to bring forth a dampening shield of chakra, in the path of an incoming technique, which diverts the attack's path and sends it back towards its origin, albeit weaker by half (B-Rank becomes C-Rank for example).
Note: Each ability can only be used once every 3 turns and can only defend against up to B-Rank. By sacrificing the ability to reuse one of the applications, the user is able to forcefully will the earings to defend from a technique up to S-Rank. However, in this case, that application becomes unusable for the rest of the match and they need conscious control from the user to perform said defense.
Note: Have to be taught how to use the earrings abilities by Smirk(Stussy)

Her name is Himiko.
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1275-5-30= 1240
A rank would be sent back toward you as B rank.

My moves a bit of a stretch but oh well, had to do something



Grimmjows world seemed to slow down as he was hit with a typhoon of information. His kick was inching closer and closer to the opponent, but the man didn't see phased, he hadn't even began channeling chakra as he drew kunai and was swinging it towards Grimmjows neck. As the kick once more got closer and closer, that was when it happened. Grimmjow sensed chakra being channeling into the other earring. Previously, the other earring had reduced the damage from his CHRP technique to nothing, but this wasn't the same earring, and even more chakra was being poured into this one. Grimmjow in all reality had no idea what was about to happen, but as the glow began to envelope the man, Grimmjow had to act fast. With his free right arm, Grimmjow extended it, as his water jutsu made contact and began to rebound, Grimmjow activated the dark mark, creating a vacuum which sucked in the damage from rebounded technique, taking all the power out of, however, unlike the usual Inhaling maw, this was Grimmjows more advanced version. As he sucked the chakra into his mark, he added his dark chakra to it, amplifying the chakra and releasing it straight back at the opponent at the same strength as his original kick would have delivered in a fiery blast. As he did this with his right hand, Grimmjow brought his left hand up, but he knew he couldn't properly dodge the kunai without taking some kind of damage, so Grimmjow raised his hand into the path of the kunai, twisting his wrist so the palm was facing towards the kunai and allowing it to rip through his hand, stopping short of his neck. As it pierced his hand, Grimmjow would grip onto the mans hand, locking him in place as the dark release technique blasted the man, burning his body badly from the torso up, while also burning Grimmjows leg slightly due to its proximity as he brought his leg back down, the searing pain of his own jutsu and the cut in his hand radiating through his body as the man stodd there half charred and barely alive.

(Meiton: Kyūketsukō usabarashi) Dark Release: Inhaling Diversion
Type: Offensive
Rank: A rank
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: (Technique dependant)60
Description: This is an advanced method of using the technique Inhaling maw. Instead of storing the foreign chakra the user instead redirects it back at the opponent. The way this technique works is by increasing the flow of chakra to Inhaling maw causing it to absorb chakra twice as fast as the regular inhaling maw. While this happens the user links his top and bottom square chakra network creating an arc between the two from which chakra can travel. As the user absorbs chakra it is sent into this new link and has Dark chakra added to it, once the chakra is added the technique is fired back at the opponent. From using this method the original attack is strengthen and more potent. This method is fairly fast, as it release chakra at the same time it absorbs leaving little window for opponents to react.
*Note* Any technique redirected gains plus 1 rank to its original power(I.e A rank becomes S rank)
Restrictions:
Can only be used 3 times per battle
Jutsu Follows Dark release's absorption rules
Can only be Taught by Delta

chakra=665-5-30=630

essentially what im doing is using darks apparently ability to draw chakra into itself and suck your bounce back into my mark and re release it as a pure chakra. Your technique doesnt state whether it released the technique as the same element or not, but i read it as you rebound a weakened version as a raw chakra blast, so im not worrying about the water rn, so hope it makes sense. I dont think i really have the time frame for it, or its a very tight timeframe, but as we discussed you can't use your CW that way, so lemme have this lil stretch XD
 
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My moves a bit of a stretch but oh well, had to do something



Grimmjows world seemed to slow down as he was hit with a typhoon of information. His kick was inching closer and closer to the opponent, but the man didn't see phased, he hadn't even began channeling chakra as he drew kunai and was swinging it towards Grimmjows neck. As the kick once more got closer and closer, that was when it happened. Grimmjow sensed chakra being channeling into the other earring. Previously, the other earring had reduced the damage from his CHRP technique to nothing, but this wasn't the same earring, and even more chakra was being poured into this one. Grimmjow in all reality had no idea what was about to happen, but as the glow began to envelope the man, Grimmjow had to act fast. With his free right arm, Grimmjow extended it, as his water jutsu made contact and began to rebound, Grimmjow activated the dark mark, creating a vacuum which sucked in the damage from rebounded technique, taking all the power out of, however, unlike the usual Inhaling maw, this was Grimmjows more advanced version. As he sucked the chakra into his mark, he added his dark chakra to it, amplifying the chakra and releasing it straight back at the opponent at the same strength as his original kick would have delivered in a fiery blast. As he did this with his right hand, Grimmjow brought his left hand up, but he knew he couldn't properly dodge the kunai without taking some kind of damage, so Grimmjow raised his hand into the path of the kunai, twisting his wrist so the palm was facing towards the kunai and allowing it to rip through his hand, stopping short of his neck. As it pierced his hand, Grimmjow would grip onto the mans hand, locking him in place as the dark release technique blasted the man, burning his body badly from the torso up, while also burning Grimmjows leg slightly due to its proximity as he brought his leg back down, the searing pain of his own jutsu and the cut in his hand radiating through his body as the man stodd there half charred and barely alive.

(Meiton: Kyūketsukō usabarashi) Dark Release: Inhaling Diversion
Type: Offensive
Rank: A rank
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: (Technique dependant)60
Description: This is an advanced method of using the technique Inhaling maw. Instead of storing the foreign chakra the user instead redirects it back at the opponent. The way this technique works is by increasing the flow of chakra to Inhaling maw causing it to absorb chakra twice as fast as the regular inhaling maw. While this happens the user links his top and bottom square chakra network creating an arc between the two from which chakra can travel. As the user absorbs chakra it is sent into this new link and has Dark chakra added to it, once the chakra is added the technique is fired back at the opponent. From using this method the original attack is strengthen and more potent. This method is fairly fast, as it release chakra at the same time it absorbs leaving little window for opponents to react.
*Note* Any technique redirected gains plus 1 rank to its original power(I.e A rank becomes S rank)
Restrictions:
Can only be used 3 times per battle
Jutsu Follows Dark release's absorption rules
Can only be Taught by Delta

chakra=665-5-30=630

essentially what im doing is using darks apparently ability to draw chakra into itself and suck your bounce back into my mark and re release it as a pure chakra. Your technique doesnt state whether it released the technique as the same element or not, but i read it as you rebound a weakened version as a raw chakra blast, so im not worrying about the water rn, so hope it makes sense. I dont think i really have the time frame for it, or its a very tight timeframe, but as I discussed you can't use your CW that way, so lemme have this lil stretch XD

Quickly noticing his opponent rotating his right arm extending it as with no hesitation 17 re-directing its path and using the kunai in his left hand to drive it into the arm of his opponent maintaining grip of the kunai as he were absorbing the already re-directed attack, pushing the kunai through his opponents arm so that his arm and hand would be tucked by his own stomach and pointed toward his opposite leg, this would keep the opponents right arm weak and restricted and away from 17 and in toward the body of the opponent[if he were to choose to use the blast, he'd be potentially killing himself in the process]. While with his right hand grabbing the left wrist of the opponent keeping it restricted and pointed outward from our bodies, at the same time 17 would be sliding his right leg behind his opponents main source of balance, his left leg and by 17 using his weight and momentum, dropping his opponent to the ground, with 17 falling on top of him drilling his left knee into the gut of the opponent, draining the air from his lungs. As this happened 17 would exert chakra creating a single shadow clone to his right, keeping its left foot pressed down on the opponents wrist and both palms point toward him[the opponent]. 17 would move his right hand from the wrist of the opponent[now that the clone is stepping down on it] and placing it on the opponents neck, gripping it with out choking him completely as he were still trying to gasp for air, activating his own dark seal slowly draining the chakra from his opponent.

Say Uncle, haha or keep moving and I'll kill you

(Kage Bunshin no Jutsu) - Shadow Clone Technique
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20 (total chakra is divided by the final number of clones plus the user)
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The Kage Bunshin distributes the ninja's chakra evenly among the clones and himself and creates a real copy with form and substance. The clones, a max number of 4, are capable of performing techniques on their own and can even bleed, but will usually disperse after hit by a strong enough force, returning 10% of its individual chakra to the user. Shadow clones can't be distinguished from the original with Sharingan, Byakugan, Rinnegan or normal Chakra Sensing. The clone itself can also utilize any jutsu the original ninja knows. When the clone finally disperses, any new knowledge it has gained is passed back to the original ninja and any additional clones.

(Meiton: Dassui Fureru) Dark Release: Draining Touch
Type: Offensive
Rank: B-Rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 20 (-40 chakra points to the enemy)
Damage: N/A
Description: By activating the absorption mark in one of his hands and touching an enemy, the user is able to absorb up to 40 chakra points on contact. This chakra can then be used to fuel release-type Dark Release techniques.

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1240-5-20= 1215/half = 607
Clone: 607
My Dark cp: 0+40= 40
 
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