[closed Spar] Raditz vs Vegeta

[Wakizashi]

Pitiful...

Vegeta thought to himself, as Raditz begins his "burst" towards him. If Vegeta's barrier wasn't active this speed would be close to his eyes limits, perhaps beyond. Unfortunately for Raditz, between him being slowed down and Vegeta's ocular prowess from the byakugan, Geets is easily able to track and somewhat even predict Raditz's movements even in this state. A raiton enhanced sword attack. Geets had just the thing for this situation. Raditzs first sword swing towards him would meet with a layer of raiton chakra Geets has quickly released from his body forming a special armor that would evicerate the metal blade as it touched it, simultaneously he makes 2 seals and adjusts the brightness of this armor instantly flashing the field in a blinding light. With his byakugan he would be unaffected, however Raditz would be flashed so quickly he'd have no time to prepare for it. As this occurs Vegeta is able to still see Raditz perfectly in the blinding light and quickly pivots on his back foot rotating 360 degree's adding momentum to his attack and drives a left forearm coated in raiton chakra into Raditz's chest, causing a massive electrical explosion destroying his armor while sending him flying back into the burning ropes, springing off them falling to the ground face first in a smoldering, passed out heap..

You dare to attack me without using your full power?! You don't deserve the nap your taking now..

(Raiton: Eregan Rai Jisshi)- Lightning Release: Elegant Electrical Embodiment

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Type: Defense/Offense
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40 (-10 per turn)
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user will gather lightning chakra throughout their body, and release it on the edge of the users skin all at once. This creates a unique armor of extreme condensed electricity for the user with random electrical wires appear out of it the armor that extends up to short range radius of the user. This doesn't add to Taijutsu but gives a more unique pain and method of attack, numbing on first contact and paralyzing on prolonged contact. Metal weapons will be shredded against the armor as well. Specific usages come along with the armor as well. Defensively, when touching things of solidity, no matter the size, the electricity will be able to ravage along the body, conducting through it, and destroy it to pieces, this makes golems in contact with the opponent vulnerable, roots of wood destroyed with ease, and steel cages less of a threat (this costs a move and is A-Rank) and extends up to the size of the construct it is negating no matter the size, this ability activates whenever the material touches the armor, even when the user is unable to notice the attack. Also, the electricity will prevent earth (KG and CE as well) to be created under the user and their short range radius for the electricity will negate it before its creation/usage (passive) due to the electrical wires created with the armor discharging lightning into the ground. The user can also create electrical whips out of their limbs that are heavily condensed able to restrict the opponent, swing around areas or slice through material/flesh that extend up to mid range. The user can shape the threads to create various tools like spears, spikes, walls, spheres, etc to aid for various purposes, using a hand seal will allow the user to release these weapons as a projectiles (count as a move and is A-Rank). The user can create up to eight constructs at most (with the use of one hand seal) with the power of this technique being split accordingly. While active, the user can only use Lightning and non-elemental abilities. The user will be able to deactivate it mentally with no time wasted. Due to the stress of the electricity the user will be unable to use Taijutsu above C-Rank for three turns, only applicable when armor is active for all 4 turns.

Note: Can only be taught by Noni
Note: Last four turns and can only be used twice per battle
Note: Can not use lightning in same turn deactivated
Note: The abilities that come with this armor can only be used four times before it disperses on its own

(Raiton: ranpu suicchi) Lightning release: Light Switch

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Type: Supplement
Rank: B
Range: Short-long
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points: n/a
Description: The user will form a two handseals and use their raiton chakra to adjust the brightness of Raiton based techs. It can make raiton techniques of B rank and up bright enough to blind the opponent and the user of course (if the user doesn't close their eyes while making the handseals). Due to speed of the light being adjusted which is a flash that stays light up for 3 seconds or until the lightning attack hits or is over and instantly fades back to normal the opponent can't just simply close their eyes as they don't know it's going to happen. Once the target is blinded they will stay that way for one turn.
- This does not increase the power of raiton techs, only adjusts the brightness.
- Can only be used twice per match.
- Must use a lightning technique of B rank or higher before using this jutsu. B rank due to the size and amount of electricity that's in B rank techs that C rank techs lack.
- Must skip a turn before using again

( Burakku Doragon no Gōon hiji ) - Black Dragon's Roaring Elbow

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Type: Attack/Defense
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: This strike was honed and refined by incorporating the same principles learned by studying NB Taijutsu. The user strikes toward the opponent in close range and shifts his foot slightly forwards turning his body in that same direction spinning themselves 360 degrees, continuing this motion quickly to add tremendous momentum to the final blow. As they do this, the user taps into the most basic of whichever elemental release which can be used to aid in taijutsu strikes, and coats his arm from the elbow down in either elemental chakra or raw chakra following similar principles as Five Animal Five Element Fist, however instead of using each of the 5 basic elemental releases in the attack one after the other, the user applies only the one nature they wish, using chakra control to focus the chakra to striking area for the purpose of this one brutal blow. Raising their arm and elbow up as they release the chakra, they complete the spin to smash elbow/forearm first into the target, as the circle motion of the attack is completed driving the blow forwards by pushing off their back foot, using this with centrifugal motion to aid in powering the elbow strike, making it much more powerful and potentially lethal than just a simple elbow strike. This delivers not only the blunt force trauma from the blow but also different effects from whichever chakra nature was used. If Fire is used burns will occur blistering the skin, if Water is used along with the blow it will leave water covering the area struck, if Earth is used the blow could cause the area to collapse in upon being struck, if Lightning is used the opponent will experience a shocking electrical explosion, if Wind is used they will experience slicing winds and the blow will send them flying back 10 meters, and if Raw chakra is used it will cause the blow to be blunt and traumatic similar to Earth's just not quite on the same scale. This is a devastating blow if performed properly and landed square, and could easily render someone unconscious or worse from the blunt force combined with the elemental nature imbued with the strike.

~Notes~
- Must have trained in basic NB Taijutsu to use
- Usable 2x per battle
- Must be taught by -Vegeta

As Raditz was coming for the swing of his blade, Vegeta made sure to counter it with a lightning technique of his own, destroying Raditz' Chokuto in the process. In the brief moment of shock from seeing sword shattered to multiple pieces, he quickly regained focus as he chakra sensing alerted him of a spike in chakra in Vegeta also revealing the nature would be lightning. As he began to chain some handseals, Raditz quickly molded wind chakra covering his left hand as he perform a rising knifehand chop to the hands capable of canceling out the elemental s/w and preventing Vegeta to complete his chain of handseals. In conjunction with a wind covered chop, Raditz delivers right straight punch to the chest that releases a giant adaptable wind that would force Vegeta to the flame perimeter that he made himself. With this Raditz would be defending and counterattacking in one synchronized movement.

(Fūton: Kōha Reppūken) - Wind Release: Hardliner Gale Chop

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Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40+15
Description: By Covering their hand with wind-natured chakra, The user attacks the enemy with it. The power of this attack is capable of causing the ground to split and buckle around them which could be used to throw the enemy off balance.

(Fūton: Senpūken) - Wind Style: Hurricane Fist

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Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40+15
Description: The user delievers a punch that releases a giant, adaptable whirlwind.

As Vegeta is sent flying back to the flaming perimeter, Raditz used this instance to open the gate of wonder, the seventh gate of the Eight Inner Gates. Because of this the pressure around Raditz increased from before, a blue aura covered his body blood vessels began to protrude from his head as his blank look remained in his eyes. From there Raditz would then forward dash a few meters forward while molding chakra in his right arm before making a right haymaker towards Vegeta's direction allowing Raditz to release a wave of chakra capable of ripping thru a meteor.

Would you believe me If i told you that this isnt my final form?

( Hachimon ) The Eight Inner Gates-Passive

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Type: Supplementary
Rank: N/A
Range: Short
Chakra: N/A
Damage: N/A
Description: The Eight Gates are eight specific points on a person's Chakra Pathway System. They limit the overall flow of chakra within a person's body. The basis for the idea of the chakra gates comes from the body's limits on the functions within it. This makes the body much weaker, but it keeps the body from expiring too soon. By undergoing intense training, one can learn how to open these gates allowing the user to surpass their own physical limits at the cost of extreme damage to their own body. The user opens the gates in sequence, up to the desired gate to achieve its effects. Opening the gates is a fast process and can be done in mere moments up to the desired gate. EIG Masters can do so easily and in a passive way (not spending a move). When one opens up to a given EIG, that opening lasts 4 turns. Opening additional gates upon the last turn of the active opening adds 2 turns. However, there is an exception. Opening the last and 8th gate can only be done for 2 turns, even if the user opens it immediately.
(Kaimon) - The Gate of Opening: The user activates The Gate of Opening or First Gate, which is located in the brain. This gate removes the restraints of the brain on the muscles so he can begin to access 100% of their strength. Unlocking this gate allows the user to use the Front Lotus. This gate adds +5 damage to Taijutsu and the user becomes 1.5x faster. This gate also adds +10 chakra and damage to Ninjutsu. User suffers -5 damage per turn.
(Kyūmon) - The Gate of Healing: The user activates the Gate of Healing or 2nd Gate (also named Rest Gate) which is located in the brain. Forcibly increases one's physical strength and temporarily re-energizes the body. This gate adds +10 damage to Taijutsu and the user becomes 2x faster. This gate also adds +10 chakra and damage to Ninjutsu. User suffers -10 damage.
(Seimon) - The Gate of Life: The user activates the Gate of Life or 3rd Gate which is located in the Spinal cord. The increased blood flow turns the skin red. Allows the user to use Hidden Lotus. This gate adds +15 damage to Taijutsu and the user becomes 2.5x faster. This gate also adds +10 chakra and damage to Ninjutsu. User suffers -15 damage.
(Shōmon) - The Gate of Pain: The user activates the Gate of Pain or 4th Gate (also named Wound Gate) which is located in the Spinal cord, lower than the Seimon. Increases the user's strength and speed. May cause muscle tissue to begin to tear on use. This gate adds +20 damage to Taijutsu and the user becomes 3x faster. This gate also adds +15 chakra and damage to Ninjutsu. User suffers -15 damage.
(Tomon) - The Gate of Limit: The user activates the Gate of Limit or 5th gate, which is located in the abdomen. Increases the user's speed and power. This gate adds +30 damage to Taijutsu and the user becomes 3.5x faster. This gate also adds +15 chakra and damage to Ninjutsu. User suffers -15 damage.
(Keimon) - Gate of View: The user activates the Gate of View or 6th Gate, located in the stomach. Increases the user's speed and power. Opening of this gate releases such enormous amounts of chakra that it can cause nearby water bodies to form a vortex around the user. Allows the user to perform the Morning Peacock. This gate adds +40 damage to Taijutsu and the user becomes 4x faster. This gate also adds +15 chakra and damage to Ninjutsu. User suffers -25 damage.
(Kyōmon) - The Gate of Wonder: The user activates the Gate of Wonder or 7th Gate which is located below the stomach. Those who open this gate will pour glowing green sweat from every inch of their body, which immediately evaporates from their own heat energy, creating an aura which people would mistake as a green chakra coating. However, the side effects of opening the gate are that the user's muscle fibers are ripped to shreds after exiting this gate, causing intense pain if anything or anyone touches him. Allows the user to perform the Daytime Tiger without great strain on the user's chakra. This gate adds +60 damage to Taijutsu and the user becomes 7x faster. This gate also adds +20 chakra and damage to Ninjutsu. User suffers -40 damage.
(Shimon) - The Gate of Death: The user activates the Gate of Death or 8th Gate, located at the heart, requiring the user to puncture their chest just above the heart in order to open it, enabling the user to achieve what is described as The Eight Gates Released Formation" ( Hachimon Tonkō no Jin ). Opening this gate will cause the user's blood to emanate a flaming aura of red steam, the so-called Steam of Blood ( Chi no Jōki ) from all pores of their body, hair, and eyebrows. Releasing this gate uses up all of the body's energy while making the heart pump at maximum power. Exceeding the power of every other gate, the user is temporarily granted approximately a hundred times their normal power, far beyond that of the five Kage. Once activated, those who are capable can perform the Evening Elephant and the Night Guy. The side effect of opening this gate is that it comes at the expense of the user's life, causing the user to crumble to ash after their chakra runs out, having virtually cooked themselves from the inside-out. This is unlike opening the other gates, which simply injure or damage the body. This gate adds +120 damage to Taijutsu and the user becomes 8x faster and allows the user to warp space with his speed.


Note: The EIG users can only open the gates twice per fight, meaning that if he allows the EIG opening to time out, he can only open the EIGs once more during the match. EIG Masters can open EIGs three per battle if the first two uses are only up to 5th gate
Note: Starting with the fourth gate, EIG users begin to feel the side effects of each gate as they time out. EIG Masters don't suffer damage from opening up to 6th Gate, being left unable to move correctly for 2 turns and unable to mold chakra above S rank in the next turn. EIG Masters will feel the side effects for opening 7th Gate and up.
Note: The user cannot use other self powering techniques (such as custom variations of Lightning Armor, Sage Mode, etc) while he has EIG opened
Note: Opening the 8th Gate kills the user at the end of the 2 turns it remains opened.

( Kakuyoku no Jin ) - Crane Wing Formation

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Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: Opening at least the sixth gate, the user rushes forward channeling chakra to his arm. Striking forward, the user releases a crescent like wave of chakra that has enough force to rip through a meteor. The more users involved increases the power of the jutsu.

 

[Vegeta]

As Raditz was coming for the swing of his blade, Vegeta made sure to counter it with a lightning technique of his own, destroying Raditz' Chokuto in the process. In the brief moment of shock from seeing sword shattered to multiple pieces, he quickly regained focus as he chakra sensing alerted him of a spike in chakra in Vegeta also revealing the nature would be lightning. As he began to chain some handseals, Raditz quickly molded wind chakra covering his left hand as he perform a rising knifehand chop to the hands capable of canceling out the elemental s/w and preventing Vegeta to complete his chain of handseals. In conjunction with a wind covered chop, Raditz delivers right straight punch to the chest that releases a giant adaptable wind that would force Vegeta to the flame perimeter that he made himself. With this Raditz would be defending and counterattacking in one synchronized movement.

(Fūton: Kōha Reppūken) - Wind Release: Hardliner Gale Chop

Spoiler

Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40+15
Description: By Covering their hand with wind-natured chakra, The user attacks the enemy with it. The power of this attack is capable of causing the ground to split and buckle around them which could be used to throw the enemy off balance.

(Fūton: Senpūken) - Wind Style: Hurricane Fist

Spoiler

Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40+15
Description: The user delievers a punch that releases a giant, adaptable whirlwind.

As Vegeta is sent flying back to the flaming perimeter, Raditz used this instance to open the gate of wonder, the seventh gate of the Eight Inner Gates. Because of this the pressure around Raditz increased from before, a blue aura covered his body blood vessels began to protrude from his head as his blank look remained in his eyes. From there Raditz would then forward dash a few meters forward while molding chakra in his right arm before making a right haymaker towards Vegeta's direction allowing Raditz to release a wave of chakra capable of ripping thru a meteor.

Would you believe me If i told you that this isnt my final form?

( Hachimon ) The Eight Inner Gates-Passive

Spoiler

Type: Supplementary
Rank: N/A
Range: Short
Chakra: N/A
Damage: N/A
Description: The Eight Gates are eight specific points on a person's Chakra Pathway System. They limit the overall flow of chakra within a person's body. The basis for the idea of the chakra gates comes from the body's limits on the functions within it. This makes the body much weaker, but it keeps the body from expiring too soon. By undergoing intense training, one can learn how to open these gates allowing the user to surpass their own physical limits at the cost of extreme damage to their own body. The user opens the gates in sequence, up to the desired gate to achieve its effects. Opening the gates is a fast process and can be done in mere moments up to the desired gate. EIG Masters can do so easily and in a passive way (not spending a move). When one opens up to a given EIG, that opening lasts 4 turns. Opening additional gates upon the last turn of the active opening adds 2 turns. However, there is an exception. Opening the last and 8th gate can only be done for 2 turns, even if the user opens it immediately.
(Kaimon) - The Gate of Opening: The user activates The Gate of Opening or First Gate, which is located in the brain. This gate removes the restraints of the brain on the muscles so he can begin to access 100% of their strength. Unlocking this gate allows the user to use the Front Lotus. This gate adds +5 damage to Taijutsu and the user becomes 1.5x faster. This gate also adds +10 chakra and damage to Ninjutsu. User suffers -5 damage per turn.
(Kyūmon) - The Gate of Healing: The user activates the Gate of Healing or 2nd Gate (also named Rest Gate) which is located in the brain. Forcibly increases one's physical strength and temporarily re-energizes the body. This gate adds +10 damage to Taijutsu and the user becomes 2x faster. This gate also adds +10 chakra and damage to Ninjutsu. User suffers -10 damage.
(Seimon) - The Gate of Life: The user activates the Gate of Life or 3rd Gate which is located in the Spinal cord. The increased blood flow turns the skin red. Allows the user to use Hidden Lotus. This gate adds +15 damage to Taijutsu and the user becomes 2.5x faster. This gate also adds +10 chakra and damage to Ninjutsu. User suffers -15 damage.
(Shōmon) - The Gate of Pain: The user activates the Gate of Pain or 4th Gate (also named Wound Gate) which is located in the Spinal cord, lower than the Seimon. Increases the user's strength and speed. May cause muscle tissue to begin to tear on use. This gate adds +20 damage to Taijutsu and the user becomes 3x faster. This gate also adds +15 chakra and damage to Ninjutsu. User suffers -15 damage.
(Tomon) - The Gate of Limit: The user activates the Gate of Limit or 5th gate, which is located in the abdomen. Increases the user's speed and power. This gate adds +30 damage to Taijutsu and the user becomes 3.5x faster. This gate also adds +15 chakra and damage to Ninjutsu. User suffers -15 damage.
(Keimon) - Gate of View: The user activates the Gate of View or 6th Gate, located in the stomach. Increases the user's speed and power. Opening of this gate releases such enormous amounts of chakra that it can cause nearby water bodies to form a vortex around the user. Allows the user to perform the Morning Peacock. This gate adds +40 damage to Taijutsu and the user becomes 4x faster. This gate also adds +15 chakra and damage to Ninjutsu. User suffers -25 damage.
(Kyōmon) - The Gate of Wonder: The user activates the Gate of Wonder or 7th Gate which is located below the stomach. Those who open this gate will pour glowing green sweat from every inch of their body, which immediately evaporates from their own heat energy, creating an aura which people would mistake as a green chakra coating. However, the side effects of opening the gate are that the user's muscle fibers are ripped to shreds after exiting this gate, causing intense pain if anything or anyone touches him. Allows the user to perform the Daytime Tiger without great strain on the user's chakra. This gate adds +60 damage to Taijutsu and the user becomes 7x faster. This gate also adds +20 chakra and damage to Ninjutsu. User suffers -40 damage.
(Shimon) - The Gate of Death: The user activates the Gate of Death or 8th Gate, located at the heart, requiring the user to puncture their chest just above the heart in order to open it, enabling the user to achieve what is described as The Eight Gates Released Formation" ( Hachimon Tonkō no Jin ). Opening this gate will cause the user's blood to emanate a flaming aura of red steam, the so-called Steam of Blood ( Chi no Jōki ) from all pores of their body, hair, and eyebrows. Releasing this gate uses up all of the body's energy while making the heart pump at maximum power. Exceeding the power of every other gate, the user is temporarily granted approximately a hundred times their normal power, far beyond that of the five Kage. Once activated, those who are capable can perform the Evening Elephant and the Night Guy. The side effect of opening this gate is that it comes at the expense of the user's life, causing the user to crumble to ash after their chakra runs out, having virtually cooked themselves from the inside-out. This is unlike opening the other gates, which simply injure or damage the body. This gate adds +120 damage to Taijutsu and the user becomes 8x faster and allows the user to warp space with his speed.


Note: The EIG users can only open the gates twice per fight, meaning that if he allows the EIG opening to time out, he can only open the EIGs once more during the match. EIG Masters can open EIGs three per battle if the first two uses are only up to 5th gate
Note: Starting with the fourth gate, EIG users begin to feel the side effects of each gate as they time out. EIG Masters don't suffer damage from opening up to 6th Gate, being left unable to move correctly for 2 turns and unable to mold chakra above S rank in the next turn. EIG Masters will feel the side effects for opening 7th Gate and up.
Note: The user cannot use other self powering techniques (such as custom variations of Lightning Armor, Sage Mode, etc) while he has EIG opened
Note: Opening the 8th Gate kills the user at the end of the 2 turns it remains opened.

( Kakuyoku no Jin ) - Crane Wing Formation

Spoiler

Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: Opening at least the sixth gate, the user rushes forward channeling chakra to his arm. Striking forward, the user releases a crescent like wave of chakra that has enough force to rip through a meteor. The more users involved increases the power of the jutsu.

Well played sir, probably moving faster than I can react. GG ^^