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Lena approaching Cheryl quickly, observing with her Sharingan her movements carefully. Cheryl wouldn't just let Lena drive her elbow into her face, why would she? Especially not the face. She'd try to counter by intersecting with Lena using her elbow and knee. Seeing this strike be attempted to take place, Lena would at the last second with perfect timing spreads her arms out wide avoiding the colliding knee and elbow. Because of her momentum and the fact she was coming down at an angle, Lena would be carried into Cheryl by gravity itself.

Lena would at this angle probably embrace her midsection since Cheryl came up to intercept her elbow her her knee. Tackling her into the water, which would probably break her fall. Lena adjusts herself above Cheryl, straddling the crystal user whilst holding her top tightly in her hands, keeping her underwater whilst channelling Dark chakra into her clothes. The Dark would sap chakra from Cheryl overtime.

Lena glares at the Barbie held under the water, tilting her head, she then eventually pulls her up for air, "Not nice is it? Give up."

Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: 20
Description: The user runs at the enemy and tackles them, slamming them into the earth.

Type: Supplementary / Offensive / Defensive
Rank: B (A - S)
Range: Short (Mid)
Chakra Cost: 20 (-40 points to the enemy per turn + turn it is applied)(-20 for activation)
Damage Points: N/A (40-80 for activation)
Description:
Much like the Dark Release : Draining Touch this will require the user to touch the opponent with their palm and channel their dark chakra through the opponent's clothing, once that has been achieve the absorbing dark chakra will start off as B-Rank in strength absorbing some chakra from the opponent to begin with, and then it will go up a rank each turn sapping more chakra from the opponent. The maximum rank this technique can reach is only S-Rank, however the dark chakra embedded into the clothing will keep seeping chakra until the hand seal is made. The clothing that has been embedded with the chakra will gain a light purplish/black hue. For B-Rank the clothing with just gain the light purple/black hue, at A-Rank the clothing will darken up to a regular purple/black hue, and S-Rank it will turn a dark purple/black hue.

By forming a hand seal the user will active the dark chakra in the opponent's clothing which will then cause the Dark chakra to burst into blue flames, setting the entirety of the clothing the opponent has on fire upon activation. Depending on the strength the opponent will receive deadlier damage, at S-Rank they would die in a second from the intense heat; whereas A-Rank would leave major burns if not dealt with, B-Rank only causes minor burns if not dealt with. Flames will keep burning until the opponent is dead if left undefended.

- Must be taught by Albel
- Can be used four times per Battle
- Requires Contact with Opponent

Chakra:
2180 -10 -20 =2150

Health:
Lena: 240
Yae: 80
 

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Tackled into the water, Cheryl allows a small smile to creep onto her face as she opens her mouth and releases a pulse of sound through the water, that fact lending to the power of the technique as it travels into Lena from very close proximity.

Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 80 + 20
Description: This is a much greater and focused version of the (Ototon: Hibiki Rendan no Jutsu) - Sound Release: Echo Assault Skill technique in which the user gathers his sound chakra into his throat as he inhales afterwards exhaling as he screams, yells or roars. The resulting effect is a massive forward shockwave of low frequency, high amplitude sound that levels anything in its path. Unlike its weaker technique, the massive power it carries makes it slightly slower, equal to an average equally ranked Raiton technique. Unlike the unfocused nature of its weaker version, it’s focused almost like a beam, affecting an area of 50º in front of the user. If used within a water source it receives +20 damage.

With Lena sent flying off of her, Cheryl is free to stand up and see what has become of her. P… p… purple?! The girl is almost sick when she looks down and sees what has become of her clothing, this colour clashed so profusely with her hair she wondered if she’d ever be able to look in the mirror again. Quickly, she creates a small vortex of wind around herself aiming to slice her own clothes to the point they’d fall from her body.

Type: Supplementary/Offensive/Defensive
Rank: D
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 10
Damage: 20
Description: The user will release basic simple blasts or streams of wind from his limbs or mouth to defend or attack an enemy.

With her clothes fallen, she uses crystal chakra to create a bikini of the stuff for her to wear, her opponent hopefully too busy flying to see the momentary lack of clothing. And if she did see? Who cares. At least she wasn’t wearing dark purple. Cheryl shivers at the thought of what she’d had on her body momentarily.

Type: Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 15
Damage: 30
Description: The Crystal Release is a rare and specialised field of elemental ninjutsu that can create crystal as well as manipulate already-existing crystals and crystalline structures. With this basic technique left to creativity, Guren can create small-scaled attacks and objects with her unique Kekkei Genkai

“If you wanna call this and have some lessons in complimentary colours then I’m all for it! I’ll take you shopping, heaven knows you need it.”

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Chakra 555 - 55 = 500
 
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Lena sees her opponent begin to erupt something from her mouth, her Sharingan deducting and showing her before anything else. To counter it Lena creates an armour shroud of dark around, though she'd already be thrown from Cheryl - just not as wildly as it may have been. The armour absorbing the brunt of the sound as Lena lands a few meters behind on her feet instead of possibly much further away. The sound wasn't the nicest, but her chakra absorbing element mitigated its damage.

Just as Lena was about to act she was stunned by what Cheryl did next. Strip. Lena's cheeks went red and her Sharingan faded. Since the beginning of this fight she had seen a lot of this woman... a lot. The crystal bikini covered her, giving Lena's eyes nothing but a memory. But she still looked good and suddenly the Stitched Monster had no desire to fight. Well... not that kind of fight anyway.

"Oh? Fine, I forfeit... You. Me. Changing room. Now."

Yae's eyes twitch. What bloody changing room?

Type: Supplementary/Offensive/Defensive
Rank: B ( A )
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 20 30 (30)
Damage Points : 40 (60)
Description: The user can apply this to themselves or thrust their arm towards a target and apply it to them, this can be applied to summons, clones or singular entities like Stone Golem. The user forms a dark shroud of chakra around the target, and this armor adapts to the target's own frame pattern. The Dark armor is B-Rank in strength and will absorb elements according to the Strength and Weaknesses of Dark Release Absorption.

When and if the armor absorbs a jutsu the dark properties naturally take away the physical and spiritual energies and expels it stronger, expelling it in the form of A-Rank blue flames which cover the target's frame. The armor will burn and cause internal damage if it comes into contact with an enemy. With the use of a single hand seal the user is able to have the flames shoot forward as a horizontal tornado of flames crash into the opponent or a separate target - setting it alight.

Restrictions
- Has a two turn cooldown
- Must have absorbed a jutsu beforehand
- Lasts four turns until absorbed. Adds another two turns to countdown when it absorbs a technique
- Can only be taught by Klad

Cheryl Wins.

Chakra:
2150 -20 =2130

Health:
Lena: 240
Yae: 80
 
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I was asked read this LONG fight as it's being used for a rank up. Tbh, it was a nice read on both sides with a nice story vibe that made it easy to read until the changing room vibe. Anyway, I didn't really notice any major errors, would just reiterate that jutsu have speeds to them now in some cases that could of slightly factored in. Though Never showed more control, MJ did really well to make use of their abilities to put up a decent fight. Where I can't fault you both, I'd place this as a draw. GZ to both of you.
 
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