(Closed) Herpeno Vs JJUif

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Kirito Aburame Bio, and I have a water bottle and a sword on my back.
 
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Ok then.
Sitting in a tree, Kirito sees Agnes walking towards him. "Up for a spar I see? Well, I can satisfy you!"
Instantly, Kirito, seeing Agnes put up a guard, throws three kunai with smoke bombs attached to them, in such a trajectory so that one would bang into another, spreading them, around Agnes. Then kirito creates 2 clones with explosive tags attached to them. He then has them run through the smoke towards agnes. Afterwards, Kirito jumps behind agnes without her noticing, and moves underground. He then pulls agnes underground by her feet leaving only her head above the ground, and then, after rising to the surface. He pulls out his sword and says
"Good Game My Friend."
Jutsu Used:
(Doton: Moguragakure no Jutsu) – Earth Release: Hiding like a mole technique
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user changes earth into fine sand by channeling chakra into it, allowing the user to dig through it like a mole. While underground one can sense what is happening on the surface and use the information to launch a surprise attack on the enemy. Once can also hide deep in the ground, escaping to a depth where the enemy cant reach. It also appears that after digging, the ground can be returned to its original state, leaving no trace of where the user entered the earth. While inside the earth, the user cannot make handseals and can only use Earth techniques below C-Rank. If he tries to do a higher ranked technique, he'll disrupt the Hiding like a mole technique and be left crushed.

(Doton: Shinju Zanshu no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Double Suicide Decapitation Technique
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user, emerging from the ground below the target area, pulls down the opponent so that only their head is above ground. Unable to move, the opponent can easily be decapitated or tortured.
Note: user must already be underground through the use of (Doton: Moguragakure no Jutsu) – Earth Release: Hiding like a mole technique

(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)
 

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*Agnes Oblige was walking along a trail that Guv showed her earlier today, to meet a friend of his named Kirito. She brought along a board game, chess, hoping to play that. But, alas, this was a sparring arena, so she knew what it meant. She sighed, and as she saw Kirito throwing the kunai, exhale out a large sphere of wind, that catches all three kunai, given how you threw them, and sends it back to Kirito. She breaths for a moment before forming a Tiger handseal, which sends chakra down to her right foot. She then stomps it onto the ground, sending a large wave of fire, about five feet high, charging towards Kirito's position, which crashes into both of the clones, destroying them. She finally forms a Ram handseal, forming a single tornado that forms with the fire to create a far larger fire tornado, thus making it difficult to jump over it (about seven feet in height, but ten feet in length).


Rank: C
Type:Attack
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:15
Damage Points:30
Description: The users gathers his Fuuton chakra into the lungs to blow out a sphere of air at his target that can blow backwards the opponent and small objects around him.




Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: After performing the Tiger hand seal by utilizing their fire chakra, the user will create a stream of fire that can be manipulated into several forms (rings of fire that runs on the ground or a circle of fire flying through the air) before striking the target. It can also be used in combination with Wind Release: Divine Wind to create a tornado of flames, or with Wind Release: Godly Wind from the Mountains to release a massive inferno. The stream of fire can be created by stomping the ground (running across the ground in this case) or by spewing the flames (which will form an airborne ring of flames that will travel towards the enemy).




Rank: C
Type: Attack/Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30 (+10 if used with a fire technique)
Description: The user releases a gust of wind after forming the Ram handseal, that forms several small tornadoes. Combined with Fire Release: Running Fire that forms a circle on ground level, this creates a massive flaming hurricane.

 

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Noting the large tornado of flames approaching him, kirito, makes it look like he has been engulfed by the flames, but secretly goes under the ground, coming up behind Agnes,and stabbing her in the back.
The technique used was posted in this thread in my first attack. Use that as your guide.
 

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{The logic behind this counter will be that going up from under the ground would create substantial noise, please correct me if this logic is wrong though.}




*As the flames dies down, Agnes notices that Kirito has long vanished, and was no longer in front of her. She tilts her head slightly to the right, wondering about this, when she hears an large amount of earth move behind her. She turns around, and notices Kirito making a thrust towards her with his sword. She jumps to the side slightly, still being cut to her left side, small sized cut, and grabs a kunai with her right hand. She dashes slightly forward, and stabs Kirito in the inner elbow of his sword wielding hand; she then thrusts her right elbow at Kirito's stomach before throwing the kunai at Kirito's chest. Guv said that she wasn't allowed to kill Kirito, as they already have periodic spars, although Guv was left in a highly beat up state from his last spar... Agnes being concerned, tilts her head to the right as shes places her hands folded behind her back and asks:*

"Um, are you finished with this spar? There's a nearby hospital if you need medical assistance..."
 

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*As the flames dies down, Agnes notices that Kirito has long vanished, and was no longer in front of her. She tilts her head slightly to the right, wondering about this. Knowing that he wasn't around her peripheral view, she swiftly turns around and notices that Kirito was thrusting a sword towards her, a classical shinobi move. However, she isn't able to completely dodge the sword, but she moves her body to the right, thus the sword only penetrates her right abdomen slightly instead of her spine. As Kirito continues his thrust, Agnes exhales out a fireball the size of Kirito's head towards his head, hopefully imparing his eyesight.*


Rank: D
Type: Offense
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Description: The user spews a small fireball.

 

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"hmph" says kirito, as he jumps above the fireball. Kirito then proceeds from midair, and suddenly, the earth starts shaking below Agnes, setting her off balance, and then he drops to the ground, and cuffs agnes' legs and arms with rock as she is still off balance and confused, then proceeds to pour water all over her and the ground in a straight line, and then says "nighty night." and then shocks the water shocking agnes and knocking her out.
Jutsu used are:
(Raiton: Jibashi) - Lightning Release: Electromagnetic Murder
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short (Short-Long depending on the water technique)
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30 (+10 to a water technique when used in conjunction)
Description: This jutsu allows the user to create a wave of electricity from the user's hands. This jutsu can vary in power from a small surge to shock an opponent to a powerful stream of lightning capable of ripping through solid rock. It is ideal to use in conjunction with a water jutsu.

Doton: Yochi no Douyou) - Earth Release: World Shaking
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user will concentrate and release their chakra into the ground to create a small tremer that can result in making the enemies lose their footing and fall to ground or miss the aim of a given technique.

(Doton No Jutsu) - Earth Release Technique
Rank: D
Type: Attack/Defence
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Descripton: Creates small pillars of earth, small tools, and small shields of earth
 

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Um, sorry for getting to this so late, but I don't think you started with a water bottle at the start of this battle .-.




*As Kirito jumps over the fireball, Agnes exhales out a fuuton sphere the size of Kirito's head towards an area two feet from Kirito's midair projectory, thus making it aimed towards his back. This would prevent any chakra concentration from forming, and thus cancel out any potential jutsu usage if this move isn't countered.*


Rank: C
Type:Attack
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:15
Damage Points:30
Description: The users gathers his Fuuton chakra into the lungs to blow out a sphere of air at his target that can blow backwards the opponent and small objects around him.

 

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Kirin, to continue his jutsu, simply raises a wall of earth, blocking the attack, lands on it, and continues his previous jutsu.
Jutsu used:
Doton No Jutsu
(Description already shown)
(And yes I did have a water bottle)
 
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*Agnes looks up as Kirito creates the wall, thus blocking her wind sphere. Agnes sighs, and begins to tie a bandage around her still bleeding wound, she lost much blood within the last couple of minutes, so she already felt a bit wheezy about this entire situation. As she finishes her bandage, now snug and tight, she looks back at Kirito, but as she does so, she begins to feel a quake. It immediately begins to grow stronger, making her fall down onto her bottom; as she does so, two pillars of rock cuff her arms, causing her to be in a slumped position. She vomits, the entire situation finally getting to her. She looks up, still wheezy, and notices a lightning surge forming from Kirito's hands. Is this the end... no, it can't be.*

*Agnes immediately exhales out another sphere the size of Kirito's head as the surge heads towards her, thus insulating it, and thus neutering it. She then concentrates some Raiton chakra into her right hand, and then releases it, breaking apart her right cuff; she then follows the same procedure for her left hand, thus allowing herself to slump up slightly. She holds her forehead with her left hand, she still had that ghastly headache...*


Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user will manipulate their chakra to create small bolts of lightning to attack their target.




Rank: C
Type:Attack
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:15
Damage Points:30
Description: The users gathers his Fuuton chakra into the lungs to blow out a sphere of air at his target that can blow backwards the opponent and small objects around him.

 

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Nah, I'm currently in a difficult situation, but I haven't passed out yet, you didn't knock me out or kill me either. Thus, the fight will continue as such.
 

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Still awake are we? Says kirito. May I just say that I have a surprise for you? Then As many bugs star swarming over Agnes , he then creates 2 barriers of rock around her hands. "No more jutsu for you eh!" Says kirito. Now, since you've had your chakra sucked dry, you won't be any more fun, so I might as well end this. And then kirito delivers a swift blow to her head knocking her out.
Jutsu used:
Dotson no jutsu
Kikochu ( destruction beetle)
 

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A lot of errors made here on this spar. For starters the clone jutsus are just illusions which can be made via a user's shadow or any other element specified. But in truth those clones are not able to attack including free form because the jutsu description says they are illusions and cannot use any jutsu. So I don't think its possible to put an explosive tag in illusionary clones.

Also when Herpeno countered the fire jutsu he didn't counter the kunais that were sent back to him via the wind jutsu meaning he probably got blown and stabbed by those kunais. Meaning you were unable to go underground so the fire jutsu would maim you there. But ovarall guys great spar although it would be great if Herpeno started to use a format, atleast you are showing some potential in RP. Also you JJ, great series of jutsus combos you did great, the problem is you accept everything Herp is doing. For example when Herp said he moved underground passed you and came from your back that move is not instant. Especially since he has to move below through where you are standing. That move is just not possible on my view to be instant a lot of time passes when someone is moving underground compared to a person who is above.

Oh and I almost forgot... sorry for posting here but I just had too seeing the spar between the new RP generation.
 

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Hori, I understand,but it is possible to attach explosive tags to clones. They would just disperse, activating the tag when they were destroyed, or the tag went off.
Also. About my format, all the jutsu I have used has been posted in our previous fights. Jjuif uses that as his guide.
 

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Hori, I understand,but it is possible to attach explosive tags to clones. They would just disperse, activating the tag when they were destroyed, or the tag went off.
Also. About my format, all the jutsu I have used has been posted in our previous fights. Jjuif uses that as his guide.
I agree with her, the clone technique, E ranked, are just illusions, this is mentioned a lot in the manga, so you can't put an explosive tag in something that doesn't exist, I agree with the format thing as well, you're getting better, JJ, don't just accept everything, sorry for posting here.
 
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