[closed] ノーマン vs ディノ

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風間 仁 | 風間 飛鳥 | リュウ VS スモーカー | ナミ
-Rei's R&R.
-Unofficial
-Kai: No.
-Subs: No.
-KG's; No. O_O Count KG Techs too, like the gentle fist ones.
-No custom jutsu allowed to use.
-No Custom elements
-No killing allowed, but not towards bio.
-Short-Range.
-No Arguing. -.-
-Free-form only, no jutsus, nada.

You can decide which bio i will use. Jin, Ryu (Both Males) or Asuka (Female.)

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Post ya bio, and you decide who'll go first, Dino. :P

NOTE: Do not bug me if im not replying. I might be busy with something, etc.
 

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Go with Asuka. I wanted to try my Nami bio. >.O
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"This place gives me the creeps" Nami said as she jumped from roof to roof looking for the battle location. Neon lights shone all around the area with hooded men walking in and out of dark alleys. Why do I have to be here.." she weeps as she finally reached assigned location. "She better not be late" she spoke out softly.
 

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Go with Asuka. I wanted to try my Nami bio. >.O
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"This place gives me the creeps" Nami said as she jumped from roof to roof looking for the battle location. Neon lights shone all around the area with hooded men walking in and out of dark alleys. Why do I have to be here.." she weeps as she finally reached assigned location. "She better not be late" she spoke out softly.


Awaiting for her opponent, Asuka had been leaning on the wall, having her arms crossed, still waiting for her opponent. Suddenly, she begins to notice young, normal-sized and skinny girl with long orange hair.

So you finally showed up, miss ''Cat Burglar''? Been busy navigating for those lousy pirates, eh?

She begins to stop crossing her arms, and gets on a Renoji-dachi-like stance. to explain the stance, Feets are at the shoulder width. The foot in the front is fully frontal (toes facing forward), the rear foot is turned 90 degrees out, and is positioned in such a way that if the front foot is brought back, its heel will touch the heel of the rear foot. Thus the foot print is shaped like the character レ (or letter L). The weight is kept 70% on the rear foot. She has her hands infront of her, not holding them as fists, but normal hands.

Lets see what you've got, Straw Hat punk!

 

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Awaiting for her opponent, Asuka had been leaning on the wall, having her arms crossed, still waiting for her opponent. Suddenly, she begins to notice young, normal-sized and skinny girl with long orange hair.

So you finally showed up, miss ''Cat Burglar''? Been busy navigating for those lousy pirates, eh?

She begins to stop crossing her arms, and gets on a Renoji-dachi-like stance. to explain the stance, Feets are at the shoulder width. The foot in the front is fully frontal (toes facing forward), the rear foot is turned 90 degrees out, and is positioned in such a way that if the front foot is brought back, its heel will touch the heel of the rear foot. Thus the foot print is shaped like the character レ (or letter L). The weight is kept 70% on the rear foot. She has her hands infront of her, not holding them as fists, but normal hands.

Lets see what you've got, Straw Hat punk!

"Guess I was the one late." she said, not happy about it. "A girl, like myself, got her priorities y'know but you wouldn't know that, would you?" she replies as Asuka comes into view. She was raring to go, already in her fighting stance. Nami took a deep breath to calm down and get her mind set in the battle that unfolded before her. "Here I come!" she said and ran towards her opponent. As Nami got closer, she performs a sweep with her right leg to knock her opponent off balance but turning around in a circle in the process. She slowly stood up during the sweep (during the end) to give you a blow to the head with the back of her left hand.

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What I'm doing right now is a sweep. As she does the sweep with her right leg, she turns around (360 degrees) but before completing that turn, she uses the back of her left hand to hit you behind the head.

My move might be incorrect but please tell me what I could've done to avoid it and what you would have done in my place.
 

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"Guess I was the one late." she said, not happy about it. "A girl, like myself, got her priorities y'know but you wouldn't know that, would you?" she replies as Asuka comes into view. She was raring to go, already in her fighting stance. Nami took a deep breath to calm down and get her mind set in the battle that unfolded before her. "Here I come!" she said and ran towards her opponent. As Nami got closer, she performs a sweep with her right leg to knock her opponent off balance but turning around in a circle in the process. She slowly stood up during the sweep (during the end) to give you a blow to the head with the back of her left hand.

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What I'm doing right now is a sweep. As she does the sweep with her right leg, she turns around (360 degrees) but before completing that turn, she uses the back of her left hand to hit you behind the head.

My move might be incorrect but please tell me what I could've done to avoid it and what you would have done in my place.
I dont find anything wrong with the move. :p but since you asked for it, if i were you, i would've aimed at some other spots of the body, or something like that. >_< Perhaps aim at the back or etc. O_O

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As soon as she sees Nami trying to do a sweep, she begins to bend her knees down to build momentum. She begins to suddenly release the momentum and jump in the air, dodging the sweep. As soon as she finishes jumping, she begins to quickly turn around seeing Nami trying to give a blow at the back of her hand. She begins to quickly lift her hands up, grabbing your hand as soon as it gets near her.

Boku!

She begins to suddenly lift her right leg and then slam her right foot towards Nami's back. O_O
 

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I dont find anything wrong with the move. :p but since you asked for it, if i were you, i would've aimed at some other spots of the body, or something like that. >_< Perhaps aim at the back or etc. O_O

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As soon as she sees Nami trying to do a sweep, she begins to bend her knees down to build momentum. She begins to suddenly release the momentum and jump in the air, dodging the sweep. As soon as she finishes jumping, she begins to quickly turn around seeing Nami trying to give a blow at the back of her hand. She begins to quickly lift her hands up, grabbing your hand as soon as it gets near her.

Boku!

She begins to suddenly lift her right leg and then slam her right foot towards Nami's back. O_O
As Nami notices the hand movement of her opponent, she holds back on her attack towards the back of her opponent's head. She then quickly twists her body to get herself balanced and then follows up with a multiple punches aimed at her opponent's chest as she spun around.
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I held back on my attack aimed behind your head. As you spin around, I begin to twist my body position (because after I performed the sweep, I had to turn 360 to do the back-hand attack) to get myself balanced and then follow up with punches from both my hands. Seem good? :p

Oh, btw. In free-form, are we allowed to channel chakra to parts of your body to make the impact stronger?
 
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