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(Doton: Arumajiro no yoroi)- Earth Release: Armour of the Armadillo
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: N/A(+10 to chakra cost to techniques)
Damage: N/A(+20 to Earth techniques)
Description: This is the brother technique to Earth Release: Rubble Creation. Unlike its counterpart, this technique is more passive in nature. This user activates an ability which allows them to infuse additional Earth chakra into their own Earth-based techniques(includes Earth-based KG/CEs). As a result, any subsequent Earth technique performed by the user would emerge with an additional layer of rubble around it. The earthen particles coating the technique would be jagged and abrasive in nature. Hence, this grants the original Earth technique an extra dimension, in terms of its offensive potential, as it allows the original Earth technique to deal additional damage. In other words, all Earth techniques used while this is active grant a sort of ‘shredding’ property, which in turn, allows it to deal more damage than it originally would. For example, for techniques such as Destructive Rock Rising Pillars, the pillars that rise would be coated with the aforementioned particles, thus becoming somewhat abrasive(coupled along with its original blunt destructive power). The added mass also aids in its destructive potential. For techniques such as the Hardening technique, the rocks would be coated with more rubble, which would make it more ‘abrasive’ to the touch, and allow it to deal more damage(when used offensively). It would also serve as an additional defensive mechanism, and would grant the technique the ability to defend against techniques with 20 more damage points than usual. The rubble used for this technique must either originate from the terrain itself, or extruded from the user’s body itself. This means that for the most part, this technique only works on projectile-type techniques, and terrain manipulation techniques. This technique may not be used to enhance mud techniques. Activating this ability does not require any time whatsoever and is instant. This is because it does not do anything when used independently, and its effects are only realized when another earth-based technique is used.

Notes:

-Can only be used 4x per battle
-Lasts for 3 turns
-Technique may be deactivated at any time

Based on rubble creation which I have, so this isn't hard to understand. Just dust particles which have a shredding ability and you use these particles to coat the Earth jutsus you use, allowing them to deal more damage than usual.


(Katon: Belenos no buresu)- Fire Release: Breath of Belenos
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A (+20 to Fire/Lightning techniques)
Description: This technique utilizes the ash variant(similar to that of the Fire Release: Ash Pile Burning technique) of the Fire element. With the performance of a single hand seal, the user is able to either expel a plume of superheated ash, or create it, and thereafter having it erupt from the ground in a desired location. On its own, this plume of ash can do little harm to the opponent. At best, it can cause minor burns that would do nothing more than to distract an opponent momentarily. However, this technique’s true value comes to light when it is used in conjunction with other techniques in a supplementary manner. Given the highly flammable and explosive nature of ash, this makes it ideal for it to be used in conjunction with Fire/Lightning based techniques. The flames/sparks would serve to ignite the ash, thereby creating additional flames to augment both Fire/Lightning techniques(+20 in damage). Fire techniques would increase in magnitude with the addition of more flames, whilst lightning techniques would mesh well with Fire due to both elements belonging to the Yang element. This technique can also be combined with other elements, such as Earth and Wind. Since these elements are not capable of igniting the ash, the ash would simply serve to cloak the techniques, whilst providing no boost in damage at all other than allowing the original techniques to cause minor burns. By cloaking the techniques in ash, this makes them extremely prone to ignition. Upon any contact with Fire/Lightning etc. techniques, the ash would immediately explode violently, causing damage to its surroundings. The scale of the explosion is proportional to the rank of the technique that triggered the ignition(eg. B-rank lightning would result in a B-rank explosion of fire). This makes it extremely dangerous for the opponent to counter these Earth/Wind techniques with Lightning/Fire as it may trigger an explosion that could prove to be hazardous to the opponent. This technique can also be used to cloak other elements, so long as it is logical. Water will not work as the liquid would simply douse the flames as they ignite. Due to this technique’s supplementary nature, it can be triggered extremely quickly; it can be performed almost in conjunction with the previous technique, with both techniques being performed in the same timeframe.

Notes:

-Can only be used 4x per battle

Based on the canon Ash jutsu, this just allows it to mix with seperately created Fire/Lightning techs, allowing them to combine and create additional flames/Fire power. Both the Fire and Lightning element are hot and so can ignite the Ash created by this. And as usual, I love the whole in conjunction thing. o-o

No questions, your turn. I'm saddened the Wind version didn't get approved. T^T



(Doton: Rōsha No Hibana ) - Earth Release: Deaf Spark

Type: Attack/Defence/Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 15 (-5 to maintain the jutsu) (-10 when used alongside other Earth techs)
Damage Points: N/A (30 if contact with heated Earth/Rock is made)
Description: An activation of sorts, this jutsu allows the user to use other Earth techniques (only those which consist of rock/hardened Earth) but with a slight difference which allows the jutsus used to have a different layer of Earth emerge simultaneously. This layer of Earth would merely scrapes against it continuously, at fast speeds, causing the original Earth, beneath the layer to be extremely hot due to frictional heating. As this process occurs, the Earth jutsu being used creates sparks which fly off 2/3 meters from the source, the sparks do no damage if they manage to land on the opponent, however, if left on clothing, they have the ability to slowly burn the piece of clothing, unless put out within a turn (can be put out by simply patting it away with your hand). This whole process allows normal Earth jutsus used to deal scorching damages equivalent to that of a C-ranked Fire technique, however, as already mentioned the rank of the Earth jutsu used remains the same and so can be destroyed by an appropriately ranked technique, according to the strengths and weaknesses of the Earth element. Moreover, this jutsu would have no effects on the mud based Earth jutsus as the layer of Earth has no source from which it can emerge from when used.
~ Can only be taught by Erzo
~ Can only be used thrice; Lasts 5 turns
~ Once used, the user must wait a turn before using agan.


(Katon: Neko Asobi) - Fire Release: Cat Play

Type: Offensive
Rank: C
Range: Short
Chakra: 15 (-5 per turn)
Damage: 30
Description: A simple Fire technique in which the user would release his Fire chakra onto the tips of his fingers, allowing them to radiate extremely hot fire in the form of wire-thin whips. The length of these whips can be manipulated in order to fit the situation, but can not exceed 5 meters (short range) from the user. The main use of this jutsu comes in close quarter combat where the user can use this jutsu with extreme speeds due to the fact that its a low rank and no hand seals requiring jutsu. It can be used to deal non-fatal but extremely hindering damage to an opponent, depending on areas of the body hit. The Fire released can be in two different forms. One form is basic and has no physical presence, making it handy to burn flesh but extremely useless when it comes to dealing blunt damage and deflecting things. The second form works in a similar way to the A-ranked 'Dragon Flame Release Song Technique' Fire jutsu, in the sense that the chakra is compressed, giving the fire physical attributes allowing the whips to deflect low ranked jutsus (according to elemental strengths/weaknesses) as well as deal scalding hot blunt damage.
Note: Can only be used 4 times.

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How about I post and praise you >_o

nah jk

(Futon: Pazuzu no puru)- Wind Release: Pull of Pazuzu
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: N/A (+10 to chakra cost of each technique)
Damage: (+20 to wind techniques)
Description: This technique utilizes the suction effect that may be achieved through wind techniques. The user will activate an ability which allows him to infuse additional wind chakra into their own wind techniques. As a result, any subsequent Wind techniques performed by the user while this is active will gain a special property; the wind technique would produce a suction-like effect, which allows it to draw earthen particles(such as small rocks/rubble/soil sediments) from the terrain towards it. This causes the earthen particles to become embedded into the body of the wind technique. The earth particles serve to augment the destructive power of the wind techniques by granting it with an additional abrasive edge, thus allowing it to seemingly shred the opponent to bits. Of course, this technique is entirely dependant on the terrain; if there are no earthen particles on the battlefield, then this technique will be rendered useless. Additionally, this may also work on water sources; wind techniques would be able to use water droplets in place of earthen particles to achieve a similar effect. The suction effect produced by this technique is extremely strong - it makes all movement(eg. performing hand seals, running) extremely difficult and sluggish(though possible) when one is within short-range of the technique. Of course, this effect also applies to the user, who will be subjected to the same effects as long as the technique is within short-range of him. This technique is activated instantly; this is because this technique, when used independently, is unable of causing harm.

Notes:

-Can only be used 4x per battle
-Lasts for 3 turns
-May be deactivated at any time

Description is easily understood. An activation jutsu which gives my own wind techs a suction like ability allowing it to draw closer small rubble/earthen bits and bobs. Earth + Wind, abrasive damage as you said, wind jutsus become stronger than usual.

If no earthen particles but instead a water source, same thing would apply. Pretty neat. No questions.
 

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You first:

(Katon: Hai Ken ) - Fire Release: Fire Fists

Rank: S
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 40 (-15 chakra per turn)
Damage points: 80
Description: The user releases his Fire chakra through his body and either into areas short range around him, or allow the chakra to travel through the ground, allowing it to travel further and emerge at a further distance. The Fire is compressed and through chakra manipulation made to be in the shape of two hands up until the forearm, with both ends forming a fist which is dense and able to deal extreme physical, as well as burning damage. The length of each arm is roughly 3 meters, and the girth of the wrist area 2, giving it quite a wide diameter, allowing them to strike multiple people at once if they are all within the same area. This jutsu is used by the user as if the opponent was standing directly in front of him, with the users own hands performing punching motions which are then instantly and directly mimicked by the fiery fists. The user can use these hands made of Fire to perform other tasks such as open palmed attacks, grabbing of objects/people (whilst keeping in mind the burning characteristic), and anything else which can be done with normal hands. A secondary use of this jutsu allows the user to simply release his chakra and pin point the opponent but then no longer have the ability to control them, but instead leaving the two fists to act as projectiles which once released simply travel towards the opponent leaving the user to perform other techniques. The fists do this by tracking other bodies of heat from the surrounding area which does not belong to the user.
~ Can only be taught by Erzo. Used 3 times per battle, only lasts until defended from, or until deactivated. However, if manipulated to mimic the users own fists, the user can't use jutsus of other elemental nature until the jutsu has stopped. After usage, must wait 2 turns before using again, and no other Fire jutsu above S-rank can be used within the same and the next turn.

(Fūton: Kamaitachi) - Wind Release: Sickle Draws

Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: N/A
Chakra cost: N/A (+10 chakra cost to techniques this is applied to)
Damage points: N/A
Description: A two part jutsu, Sickle Draws aims to augment Wind jutsus in specific ways, allowing the usage of simple jutsus to become more complex, and simply more dangerous in nature. The nature of this jutsu itself only allows it to work alongside the Wind element. The first part requires the user to focus more of his Wind chakra into his future Fuuton jutsu which have no cutting abilities whatsoever (supplementary, defensive type techniques), and using said chakra to sharpen the outside edges of the aforementioned jutsu. This manipulation causes a change within the technique's shape and allows the most defensive Wind jutsu the capability to inflict lethal cutting damage. The damage output would depend on the rank of the supplementary/defensive jutsu used (i.e. an A-Rank will inflict 60 damage). The second usage of this jutsu allows the user to do the same, still only working on Wind jutsus, but instead only focuses on offensive Wind techniques, simply adding a +20 damage to the jutsu used in conjunction as it adds on to whatever it is used with, rather than focusing on things which are purely defensive. When used in either form, however many hand seals the jutsu used alongside this requires, an extra one (the Ram handseal) is added on. This is added on regardless of any abilities which the user may have which allows him to perform wind jutsus without hand seals (specialty, NB sword etc.) This is an activation type jutsu and its effects apply to future wind techniques rather than pre-existing ones. Activating this ability is instant and does not consume any time whatsoever.

~ Can only be taught by Erzo. Can only be used a maximum of two times per battle/event, and once used lasts a maximum of four turns, or until deactivated. Upon it being deactivated/timing out, the user must wait a turn before being able to use again. The user can decide to use one form 2 times, or mix and match as he likes, as long as both the first and second usages are not used at the same time.

Analyse and ask questions please. :)
 

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The first is just a simple Fire offensive technique that revolves around fists that are either inherently linked to your physical movements, or otherwise programmed to hit the opponent, like a homing missile. Quite useful. No questions for this.

Second tech, I helped with it so no questions there and I know what it does. I don't like how it's only usable twice a battle and how you can't use both parts with a single usage. o_o

I do have a question though - why the hell do you clump all your notes and restrictions together?
 

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The first is just a simple Fire offensive technique that revolves around fists that are either inherently linked to your physical movements, or otherwise programmed to hit the opponent, like a homing missile. Quite useful. No questions for this.

Second tech, I helped with it so no questions there and I know what it does. I don't like how it's only usable twice a battle and how you can't use both parts with a single usage. o_o

I do have a question though - why the hell do you clump all your notes and restrictions together?
Four turns is a long time, I tried doing 3 usages but NK wouldn't have it lol.

And I do it because I dislike seeing this these days

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Anyways:

(Futon: Ātisuto no kunō)- Wind Release: Artist’s Affliction

Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long (Explosion of Wind spans Short-Range)
Chakra: 40 (-15 chakra per turn)
Damage: 80
Description: This technique revolves around the principle of using wind as a means of inflation, to create various kinds of animals. Through the rapid expulsion of wind chakra, the user is able to infuse any earthen object with his wind chakra. By infusing one’s wind chakra with these inanimate objects, the user is able to expand these substances greatly, inflating them to multiple times their original size. Essentially, the aforementioned objects would be flooded with compressed air internally, while its exterior would remain the same as its original material. Despite this, the technique does not become dual elemental. The objects, upon inflation, would take on the form of an animal of the user’s choosing. For example, the user could inflate a rock, forming a wind/earth boar which he could thereafter direct towards the opponent to deal damage. The kinds of animals that may be created through this technique are limitless, and is only bound by the user’s imagination. Aside from the plethora of animals the user may be able to create, the user is also capable of controlling the animal’s path through his own will. As such, this technique grants a certain sense of versatility to the user, in that the animals may be directed to do whatever the user chooses to. Upon impact, the animals would not only, due to their corporeality, deal physical damage, but also violently burst, releasing an explosive burst of wind which could further harm the opponent. The animals move at the same speed as the user, and are capable of gravitating through the air due to their composition, which contains a healthy dose of wind. It is worth noting that while the animals retain the general anatomical traits of its real-life counterparts, such as horns for rhinos, etc, the animals do not possess advanced traits such as venom.

Notes:

-Can only be used 3x per battle
-Animals last for 3 turns, before they disperse normally
-More than 1 animal may be created with a single usage, though naturally, the animals would be smaller in size(can move separately)
-No Wind above A-rank for the rest of, and the next turn.
-Can only be used on Earth
-No mythical creatures may be created through this technique.
-While the animals may differ in size compared to their real-life counterparts, they cannot exceed the maximum size of an elephant, and can be no smaller than the original substance used for inflation
-Can only be taught by Baldy

Question: Lets say I infuse a boulder with wind make a rhino out of it or whatever. Is it considered S-rank Earth or S-rank wind? Because its not an Earth/Wind mix (or something along those lines. NK said it when he checked), so help me understand that part.
 

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S-rank Wind. Apparently the logic is that only Wind chakra is used in the formation of this technique, so it is a Wind technique, and not a dual elemental technique because Earth chakra is not used hurr durr.
 

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(Fūton: Kū Sora ) – Wind Style: Spirit Void
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Type: Defensive/Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 40 (-10 each time it's used)
Damage: N/A
Description: A technique simple in nature, but extremely effective, Spirit Void was one of Roy Mustang's own creation. Versed in it's defensive capabilities, the jutsu begins once the user channels and sends a a copious amount of his chakra into the skies above, ranging from short to long range all around. Following this ensues an unpredictable and quick movement of visible Wind in the skies, continuously flowing and swerving, seemingly without purpose before heading downwards and disappearing into nothing. However, purely through the users will (or through hand/leg/general body movement for cosmetics) the user can harness the wind power to create a defence which leaves the user unharmed. When seeing an incoming attack, through will the user controls the wind around the jutsu and forms it around the incoming attack, where the Wind would then slices/cut through it and/or blows it away, depending on the nature of the attack. For example, an Earthen projectile could be sliced and cut until it is no longer a danger, whereas a Water attack would be blown back. Of course when being used to defend, the Wind once again becomes visible to the naked eye, showing a green-ish hue. Although the process at the beginning appears to take time, when used within the same time frame of an incoming attack, the defense would be able to work just as well as any other Wind jutsu. This technique will only activate against techniques that it can neutralize (as an S-Rank Wind) and it will only activate once per turn and it cannot be stacked with other automatic defense jutsus.

~ Can only be taught by Erzo. This jutsu can be used twice, lasting four turns each time. Cannot be used consecutively, but instead with a one turn wait after four turns are up/the jutsu is deactivated. Although the user can manipulate this jutsu through will, thus allowing himself to remain unoccupied and free to perform other techniques, when used to defend against other techniques it will still count as one of the three allocated moves per turn.

(Fūton: Henkō Sa Remasu) - Wind: Will Change
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Rank: B
Type: Defensive/Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 20 (-5 per use)
Damage Points: N/A
Description: A Wind technique created to make use of other-wise wasted chakra, this Wind technique is set to work with any and every defensive Wind jutsu, as long as certain requirements are met. When jutsus which empower other jutsus are used, they tend to add damage to offensive jutsus, whilst having zero, to no affect on supplementary and defensive technique. However, with the activation of this jutsu, when damage using jutsus are used alongside defensive techniques, the chakra added (has to be able to add at least +10 damage points), is converted and used to empower the defensive jutsu, allowing it to counter techniques one rank higher than their usual capabilities, whilst still adhering to the strengths and weaknesses of Wind. .
~ Can only be taught by Erzo. It can be twiceper battle, lasting a maximum of three turns if not deactivated early. Once used, must wait 2 turns before using again. This jutsu is activated instantly, allowing the user to use it alongside defensive jutsus in the same time-frame.

(Fūton/Katon: Aiorosu `Ikari ) - Wind/Fire Release: Aeolus' Wrath
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Type:Attack
Rank: A
Range:Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user releases their Wind chakra from mouth or through hand movements (short ranged release when used in either of these forms), or from the skies above. This releases what appears to be little light-green rain drops (ranging from 3-10 inches in size) which are extremely sharp and naturally fast due to the nature of Wind, and the way they are shaped, being extremely slimline. After these little rain-drops of Wind form, the user would add his Fire chakra into them, causing them to become extremely heated. Their colour would change into one extremely similar to the colour given off by '( Katon: Onidōrō ) - Fire Release: Demon Lantern', giving off a yellowish colour as the light-green and red from the Fire chakra mix together. Upon colliding with any other jutsu, regardless of whether it's Energy, or Matter based, the Rain drops would explode outward, releasing heated Wind which has blowing force with the addition of scalding effects. The jutsu is designed to always explode in the direction of the point of contact with the foreign chakra. Due to their size, each outburst of heated Wind would be quite small but since they always rain down/travel as a group of heated wind 'raindrops' the damage done is nothing but. Moreover, the addition of Fire also allows the jutsu to travel towards bodies of heat which do not belong to the user, making this a double edged sword if used in a fight alongside allies. Moreover, upon the creation of the Wind, a screeching and deafening sound can be heard, making the source of it's creation quite obvious. The screech can not do much damage other than causing a slight discomfort, unless coupled with another jutsu which can amplify it. The user can avoid the discomfort caused by sending chakra to his ears moments before the use of this jutsu.
~ Can only be taught by Erzo. Usable three times per battle. After each usage the user must wait a turn before being able to use again.


Questions? First two work well together, third is random but something i wanted o_o
 
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