CJ with Demon Fang

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oh good so, you know to produce your lightning from your body you simply increase the high frequency of your chakra. Well here is the tech. Please be descriptive on how you perform it.

(Raiton: Gouzen Tsuchi) - Lightning Release: Roaring Earth
Type: offensive
Rank: D
Range: Short
Chakra: 10
Damage: 20
Description: The user concentrates their lightning chakra all throughout their body. Once the target is within close range, the user slams their hands on the ground, releasing electricity along the ground and is shot upward below the targets feet in the form of a vertical column made of electricity.

Restriction:
- Physical contact with the ground must be made as soon as the target is within range.
- Can only be taught by fang
 

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Ok here goes

I begin to clear my mind and focus on my chakra. By increasing the high frequency in my chakra and by using nature manipulation the chakra turns into pure lighting chakra. I start to channel and focus the lighting chakra through out my body, Then I send the lighting towards my hand and slam them down to the ground explosively. I release the lighting across the ground, It travels quickly through cracking the ground and when it reaches my opponent's feet, The lighting is shot upwards shocking him violently.

Hope I did well
 

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Hmmm....not bad but, you don't have to say you slam them explosively just say you slam them onto the ground. Also when you say it is shot upward make sure, you mention that you manipulate the lightning and have it shot upward from below the targets feet in the form of a column of electricity. Feel free to try once more just so, I know you got it.
 

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I used the explosive part for dramatic effect XD
Ok here goes another try.

I begin to clear my mind and focus on my chakra. By increasing the high frequency in my chakra and by using nature manipulation the chakra turns into pure lighting chakra. I start to channel and focus the lighting chakra through out my body, Then I send the lighting towards my hand and slam them down on the ground. I release the lighting across the ground, It travels quickly through cracking the ground and when it reaches my opponent's feet, I manipulate the lighting to shoot upwards in the form of a column of electricity, below my opponent feet. Shocking him badly.
 

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Oh dramatic effect is good. XD

Seems like you got it. Congrations you have learned:

(Raiton: Gouzen Tsuchi) - Lightning Release: Roaring Earth
Type: offensive
Rank: D
Range: Short
Chakra: 10
Damage: 20
Description: The user concentrates their lightning chakra all throughout their body. Once the target is within close range, the user slams their hands on the ground, releasing electricity along the ground and is shot upward below the targets feet in the form of a vertical column made of electricity.

Restriction:
- Physical contact with the ground must be made as soon as the target is within range.
- Can only be taught by fang

On a side note have fun bro.
 
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