cj training with yanks

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Yo.
So pretty much knock you opponent into the air and while you're standing on a water source (e.g. lake, river), weave the three necessary hand seals. Afterwards, channel your chakra into the water below you and use shape manipulation to create 2 water drills that rise on both sides of your opponent. Finally, guide those two drills to collide with the target's torso and back.

(Suiton: Nijū inpakuto) - Water Release: Dual Impact
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra: 15
Damage: 30
Description: After knocking their opponent into the air, the user performs a series of three hand seals Bird→Dog→Snake and proceeds to channel their chakra into the water below them. Finally the user, using shape manipulation, will create two water drills that rise on both sides of their opponent & guides it to collide with their torso and back.
Note: Must be taught by Yānks.
Note: Can only be used 2 times per battle
Note: Requires a water source

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[B]Perform it:[/B]

[B]Advantages/Disadvantages:[/B]

[B]Counter:[/B]
 

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Yo.
So pretty much knock you opponent into the air and while you're standing on a water source (e.g. lake, river), weave the three necessary hand seals. Afterwards, channel your chakra into the water below you and use shape manipulation to create 2 water drills that rise on both sides of your opponent. Finally, guide those two drills to collide with the target's torso and back.

(Suiton: Nijū inpakuto) - Water Release: Dual Impact
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra: 15
Damage: 30
Description: After knocking their opponent into the air, the user performs a series of three hand seals Bird→Dog→Snake and proceeds to channel their chakra into the water below them. Finally the user, using shape manipulation, will create two water drills that rise on both sides of their opponent & guides it to collide with their torso and back.
Note: Must be taught by Yānks.
Note: Can only be used 2 times per battle
Note: Requires a water source

PHP:
[B]Perform it:[/B] i run towards yanks then give him an uppercut lifting up into the air i then weave three handseals sending my water chakra into the lake then shape manipulating it into two drills which i guide to hits yanks torso and back

[B]Advantages/Disadvantages:[/B] it can be used with taijutsu attacks that launches target into mid air

[B]Counter:it can be countered with techniques of the same rank or higher rank[/B]
 

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You're lacking in disadvantages. What about the range of the attack or the initial strikes which start off the technique? For your counter, don't forget that the best way to cancel this technique is to prevent your opponent from knocking you in the air in the first place. Overall, I guess you're response is decent enough; congrats, you may now use it :)
 
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