CJ trading [Pain and Andrej]

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(Koton:Kyojin Akuma)-Steel Release:Giant Akuma
Type:Supplementary
Rank:Forbidden
Range:Short on creation (Long Range reach)
Chakra:50 (-30 per turn to sustain)
Damage:N/A (melee attacks do 90 damage) (-10 to the user)
Description:The user will perform a sequence of 3 hand seals:Bird->Ram->Boar while gathering a vast amount of chakra which he then channels towards his hands.Once done,the user will slam both his hands to the ground and release all of the previously gathered chakra into it.Due to the large amount of the chakra focused,this would take a couple of seconds to do.Due to the large amount of chakra focused in a rather small area and then it being rapidly released,the users hands will suffer some damage while using this technique.As he is finished with releasing his chakra,the user will form a huge humanoid creature made out of black steel to rise from the ground behind him.The creature is half the size of Gamabunta(meaning around a 50 meters tall).Although the creatures movements might appear slow,his huge size allows him to cover ground quickly.It can move and serve the user as a basic warrior.It also has a special ability to create a dozens of huge black steel cables from it's back and launch them towards the opponent in a widespread attack (S-Rank damage, Long-range, counts as a move, usable twice).Each cable is around half a meter thick. It has incredibly tough armor and can fully withstand S-Rank techniques from Earth, Water or Wind undamaged. Once created,the creature stays on the field until it's destroyed.
~Note:Can be used only once per battle.
~Note:Can't use any technique above C rank technique,the same turn this is used.
~Note:No Steel release techniques same and next turn
~Note:Using this leaves the user in a drained state and he can't use above A rank techniques next turn
~Note:Due to the user being drained,he will be slower by one rank on the speed chart(if he is a Sannin he will have S-Class speed and so on).
~Note:Launching the threads counts as a move in the users turn.


 

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(Katon: Kuzuryūjin) - Fire Style: Nine-headed Dragon Array
Type: Offensive
Rank: A-Rank
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30 Chakra
Damage: 60 Damage
Description: After stabbing the user's sword into the ground and by inserting his katon chakra into the ground, he/she will make 8 lines of flames around the sword each line is 1 meter long and between each 2 adjacent lines 45 degrees angle. 8 dragons will emerge out of the 8 lines (1 dragon per each line) but they'll stay attached to lines until they reach the end of it, whereas they will then materialize into fire dragons. The user has the ability control the 8 dragons and direct them towards their target/s. The user can make the 8 dragons combine into 1 bigger dragon.
note: each dragon is C-Ranked and the big dragon is A-Ranked
note: the user can make the big dragon three times per battle
note: only FeeLPaiN can teach this jutsu

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