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Here are the two jutsus.

(Doton: jinsoku gachan) Earth style: Rapid Slam
Type: Offense
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user will focus his doton chakra under the feet of his opponent mainly on the ground. The ground under the opponent will then turn into sticky mud, the user will then perform the hand seal Snake. This will harden the mud to trap the opponents feet making him unable to move. The user will then slam his palms on the ground and under the opponents feet will rise a pillar around ten meters of height, at the pillar is rising it will be spinning around very quickly to make the opponent dizzy. After the pillar has reached its height of ten meters the pillar will then slam itself back into the ground with the opponents feet still stuck. This will break the opponents legs and he should still be dizzy because of the rapid spinning.


(Katon: zenpaku surudoi kougake) Fire Style: Forearm Bladed gauntlet
Type: Offense
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user has to focus and channel katon chakra towards his forearm and then release the katon forward at the same time manipulate the fire sharply and firmly to form into bladed gauntlets on his forearms. The more chakra you channel towards the forearm the more sharper and longer the blades begin to grow. Its maximum size can go up to 200cm but when it reaches its max it immediately disperses due to the chakra strain on the forearm. It is great to use for close range battle.
- Can only use fire jutsus while active
- Only active for 3 turns
- Usable thrice per battle


Just give me two advantages and disadvantages with a performance for each jutsu.
How to perform it is quite self explanatory in the descriptions.
 

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Disadvantages of the first jutsu are that you'd need an adequate amount of time to complete the jutsu in its entirety. Another is that it'll leave you open to attack if you don't have your opponent set up for it as a skilled ninja could escape and counterattack. Advantages are that it traps the opponent with ease and it's a combination jutsu that can serve other purposes.

Disadvantages of the second jutsu is that it limits you only to fire techniques while in use and it’s mainly useful in close range battles, serving little to no purpose outside that range. Advantages are that it’s extremely useful in close range battle giving you a little extra range while using fire. It also has other uses suck as supplementary uses outside battle.
 

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As the clone comes into appearance, I quickly release and spread my earth chakra underneath it. I manipulate the earth, causing it to turn into a swamp like substance, therefore trapping the clone. I then make the snake handseal, causing the ground to harden, completing the objective. To make it more interesting, I proceed to slam both palms onto the earth, further manipulating the chakra induced earth, causing a pillar to be created underneath the clone, lifting him into the air approx. 10 meters. While the pillar is rising, it begins to spin clock-wise more and more rapidly. This causes the clone to become dizzy, while on his way up. Once it reaches the 10 meter height maximum, the pillar quickly descends, slamming back down into the earth, dispersing the clone.

How was that?
 

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>_> I will let it pass
But I need to mention something important for this jutsu that wind style jutsus S-Rank if they come in contact with the blades the fire will feed on the wind and increase in size which will make the blades go over 200cm and disperse itself. Though it should not be a problem since this juts us purpose is for short range battle. Due to how fast you can perform and execute the jutsu.
So now let's continue.
 

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*Turns into sensei*

HAHAHAHAHAHA! O_O

Well youre gonna learn Storm Release, well all my customs, but we're starting from the lower ranks and working our way up. Let's start off.

(Ranton: Raikou "Drops")-Storm Release:Lightning Drops
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra Cost:10 (-15 for every turn active)
Damage Points:20 (+10 every turn active)
Description:The user will gather raiton and suiton chakra, then release it into the clouds. Then they will manipulate the clouds, causing rain drops to fall. These rain drops are filled with small bolts of concentrated lightning. When hit, the lightning will give the opponent small bolts of electricity, that will stun them.
Note:A powerful fire enough (B-Rank or above) can neutralize the rain drops
Note: If there is no clouds, then this can not be performed
Note: If not stopped in 5 turns, the opponent will be paralyzed
Note: Can only be used 2 times a battle
Note: Must be taught by McAfeezy

(Ranton: Sutatikku Tamas)-Storm Release: Static Bullets
Type:Attack
Rank:B
Range:Mid-Long
Chakra Cost:20
Damage Points:40
Description:The user will gather raiton chakra and suiton chakra into their mouth. Then they will combine them, creating water bullets filled with lightning inside their mouth. Then the user will shoot these bullets at the opponent, on contact the will explode, leaving the opponent wet, and continuously shocked, due to the lightning.
Note: Effects last for 2 turns
Note: Usable 3 times a battle
Note: Can not use any Storm Techniques up to B-Rank the following turn.
Note: Must be taught by McAfeezy

(Ranton: Wangetsu Kata Ranton Kyodan) Storm Release: Crescent Shaped Storm Projectile
Rank:B
Range:Short-Long
Type: Attack/Defense
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user will sling their hand forward releasing a crescent shaped projectile of storm at the opponent or object.
Note: Usable 4x

Tell me what you think each jutsu does based off it's description.
 

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Lightning Drops
Well looking at this jutsu its very simple and straight forward. All the user does is channel storm chakra in the clouds and then from the clouds the user will release small droplets filled with lightning. The purpose of the jutsu is to stun the opponent. Now it has some great advantages like being wide scale jutsu and it would be hard to dodge. But there are some disadvantages like the fact you must have clouds in the area.

Static Bullets
This jutsu in a way is kind of like the above one. The user will send out from his mouth concentrated bullets of storm chairs. Its purpose to explode on target and make opponent wet which will slow down the opponent and then they will be shocked. This is very useful and can be performed anywhere.

Crescent Shaped Storm Projectile
Very simple the user will simply move there hand and release a crescent storm projectile. Its purpose is very simple to attack an opponent or it can be used to destroy a attack like weapons or jutsus like earth based or fire. My only question is how many projectiles can I shoot in a turn? Can I only shoot one or if I fling my hand a second time right after can another be released?
 

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Lightning Drops
Well looking at this jutsu its very simple and straight forward. All the user does is channel storm chakra in the clouds and then from the clouds the user will release small droplets filled with lightning. The purpose of the jutsu is to stun the opponent. Now it has some great advantages like being wide scale jutsu and it would be hard to dodge. But there are some disadvantages like the fact you must have clouds in the area.

Static Bullets
This jutsu in a way is kind of like the above one. The user will send out from his mouth concentrated bullets of storm chairs. Its purpose to explode on target and make opponent wet which will slow down the opponent and then they will be shocked. This is very useful and can be performed anywhere.

Crescent Shaped Storm Projectile
Very simple the user will simply move there hand and release a crescent storm projectile. Its purpose is very simple to attack an opponent or it can be used to destroy a attack like weapons or jutsus like earth based or fire. My only question is how many projectiles can I shoot in a turn? Can I only shoot one or if I fling my hand a second time right after can another be released?
Each time you use a crescent it counts as a jutsu usage, so use them wisely. Anymore questions?
 

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A- Rank :)

(Ranton: Funnu Kadou )-Storm Release: Raging Vortex
Type:Attack/Defense
Rank:A
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:25
Damage Points:50
Description: The user will perform a row of 3 handseals, then the user will gather raiton and suiton chakra, then release it into the air around themselves. Then the user will manipulate the chakra, causing the water to start spinning very rapidly, like a tornado. The user will also add the raiton chakra, while the vortex is spinning, causing the water to become electrically charged. The user then sends the vortex at the opponent, on contact the vortex will suck the opponent up into the middle of the vortex, then continuously strike them with lightning. Then eventually the vortex throws the opponent across the battle field.
Note: Usable 3 times a battle
Note: Must be standing still
Note: the Opponent will be paralyzed and soaked in water, making them heavier
Note: Must be taught by McAfeezy

(Ranton: Raikou Mizu Kadou)- Storm Release:Lightning Water Vortex
Type:Attack/Defense
Rank:A
Range:Short-Long
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description: The user perform a row of 8 handseals, then charge Raiton chakra into one hand and Suiton chakra into the other. Then the user puts their hands together, then thrusts them forward, releasing a vortex of water, along with a streak of lightning, which combines with the vortex, becoming a lightning charged vortex of water.
Note: Can only be used 3 times a battle
Note: When the vortex leaves the user, it goes in a straight line, therefore allowing a skilled shinobi to easily dodge it.
Note: Will numb and paralyze target on contact
Note: Has to be taught by McAfeezy

(Ranton: Arashi Butoukai)-Storm Release: Storm Ball
Type:Attack/Defensive
Rank:A
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description:The user will combine raiton and suiton chakra, causing a giant thunderous ball of water, filled with lightning to form. The user will then send the ball at the opponent, on contact the balls will subdue the opponent, then electrocute them, causing them to become paralyzed.
Note:The opponent will become paralyzed and numb, hindering them not capable of attacking.
Note: Usable 2 times a battle
Note: The ball is very large, about 20 meters across
Note: Must be taught by McAfeezy
Note: No Storm Techniques next turn

(Ranton: Minichua Nokogiris) Storm Release: Miniature Saws
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Type: Attack
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user will slam both hands on the ground, sending their Storm chakra underneath the ground, to the opponent. The user will manipulate the chakra, changing it into miniature saw, that will travel under the ground, until they're right beneathe the opponent. They will then erupt from the ground under the opponent, cutting them severely.
Note: The ground around them will crack, creating fissures on the surface between the user and his opponent as the saws move toward him.
Note: Takes 3 seconds to travel under ground
Note: Usable 3x

Same thing you did before, and please ask questions.
 

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(Ranton: Funnu Kadou )-Storm Release: Raging Vortex
Well basically this jutsu is a tornado that gathers around the user made of water then the user will channel there raiton towards the tornado. It can be used to block attacks since the tornado will be around themselves. It will also be a powerful attack to use since the vortex can swallow the opponent shock them and then spit them out. So they will be soaked and shocked hurting there movements.
Questions
How slow will the opponent be if he is caught and spit out from the vortex?
Just how far does the vortex spit the opponent out, It say in the description across the battlefield so I'm guessing long?

(Ranton: Raikou Mizu Kadou)- Storm Release:Lightning Water Vortex
Its similar like the above jutsu. Its basically the user will release from there hands a vortex of lighting charge water towards the opponent which will shock them badly. The bad part of this jutsu is it goes straight forward. Also there are quite a lot of hand seals so it would be a little slow to perform.
Questions
How long will the opponent be paralyzed if hit?

(Ranton: Arashi Butoukai)-Storm Release: Storm Ball
Simple one the user will send a large ball of water filled with lighting towards the opponent to shock and paralyze the opponent. So its straight forward jutsu. It has great size to the jutsu making it hard to dodge. Though I don't like how if I use this jutsu next turn I cant use a storm jutsu.
Questions
How fast does the ball go?
Where is the ball formed and sent from? (The mouth,hands, ?)

(Ranton: Minichua Nokogiris) Storm Release: Miniature Saws
So the user will make a storm saw under the ground and travel at the opponent. Raise from the ground and completely tear the opponent up...Though it sounds good it is quite easy to figure out since you will see the cracks under the ground and its slow to be honest. But I would use this jutsu as a good combo covering the ground.
Questions
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(Ranton: Funnu Kadou )-Storm Release: Raging Vortex
Well basically this jutsu is a tornado that gathers around the user made of water then the user will channel there raiton towards the tornado. It can be used to block attacks since the tornado will be around themselves. It will also be a powerful attack to use since the vortex can swallow the opponent shock them and then spit them out. So they will be soaked and shocked hurting there movements.
Questions
How slow will the opponent be if he is caught and spit out from the vortex?
Just how far does the vortex spit the opponent out, It say in the description across the battlefield so I'm guessing long?


(Ranton: Raikou Mizu Kadou)- Storm Release:Lightning Water Vortex
Its similar like the above jutsu. Its basically the user will release from there hands a vortex of lighting charge water towards the opponent which will shock them badly. The bad part of this jutsu is it goes straight forward. Also there are quite a lot of hand seals so it would be a little slow to perform.
Questions
How long will the opponent be paralyzed if hit?

(Ranton: Arashi Butoukai)-Storm Release: Storm Ball
Simple one the user will send a large ball of water filled with lighting towards the opponent to shock and paralyze the opponent. So its straight forward jutsu. It has great size to the jutsu making it hard to dodge. Though I don't like how if I use this jutsu next turn I cant use a storm jutsu.
Questions
How fast does the ball go?
Where is the ball formed and sent from? (The mouth,hands, ?)


(Ranton: Minichua Nokogiris) Storm Release: Miniature Saws
So the user will make a storm saw under the ground and travel at the opponent. Raise from the ground and completely tear the opponent up...Though it sounds good it is quite easy to figure out since you will see the cracks under the ground and its slow to be honest. But I would use this jutsu as a good combo covering the ground.
Questions
None
Well the opponent would undergo a full body paralyzation since their entire body was soaked and punished, unless they were to somehow to only catch a body part, then they would only be paralyzed in that particular appendage or area.

Well since the jutsu is in face rather large, yes the distance, if sucked up completely, would be a long range throw.


If hit entirely their nervous system would be in despair, so full body if properly used.

The ball would travel at a fast rate actualy, covering more ground because of its size, although it'll seem like it goes slow. Kind of like Vegeta's Big Bang attack from Dragon Ball Z.

That's all? ^.^
 

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(Ranton: Arashi no Jet | Storm Release: Jet of Storms)
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description:The user will spew out an enormous amount of water from their mouth creating a jet of water, As it flows from their mouth the user will perform two handseal adding lightning chakra in conjunction thus creating a powerful jet of electrified water that is capable of pushing the enemy away with ease including summons and or paralyzing the opponent on contact.
Note: If hit the opponent will be come paralyzed for 1 turn.
Note: Must be taught by Drizzy, Must know/have storm release.
Note: Usable 2x per battle and must wait one turn before use of storm release/or this technique

(Ranton: Chujiao de shuimu |Storm Release: Tentacles of a Jelly fish)
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Mid/Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user will perform a set of handseals then stomp their foot on the ground, tentacle shaped ropes will burst up all around the opponent and try to wrap him/her up and shock them until they die.
Note: The ropes paralyze on conctact.
Note: Must be taught by Infamous, Must have storm release.
Note: Usable 2x per battle, must wait 4 turns after each use.


(Ranton: Bo sai dong rao | Storm Release: Poseidons Rejection)
Type: Defense
Rank: S
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: The user will spew out an enormous current of electrified water that sprouts outward making a wall to block/ cancel out incoming jutsu. The stream is very bright.
Note: Usable 2x per battle.
Note: Must be taught by Infamous, Must have storm release.


(Ranton: Ling ren zhenjing de yu |Storm Release: Shocking Rain)
Type: Defense/ Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 40
Dama*ge: N/A
Description: After performing the needed handseals the user will use storm release to create electric rain. By casting the users chakra essence into the sky, It will then create clouds, that will rain down extremely bright droplets of rain, which can be dangerous to a foes nervous system.
Note: Gives storm release techniques a +10 damage increase.
Note: Usable once per battle
Note: Lasts 3 full turns, unless the clouds are blown away. Takes one turn for the clouds to form.
Note: Must be taught by Infamous, Must have storm release.
Note: The rain slows the opponent down, due to the raindrops electrocuting the nervous system enough to slow down processes but not enough to kill.


(Ranton: Fengbao shouliudan | Storm Release: Storm Grenade)
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Rank: S
Damage:80
Chakra: 40
Description: The user will perform three handseals then place his hands as if doing a rasengan, the user will then generate water and electricity in between his hands, once there is a ball shaped figure created he will then compress it, the ball will look very small in size but dangerous. On impact it will burst outward creating huge waves with lightning surging through out it.
Note: Usable 2x per battle, must wait 3 turns before using again.
Note: Must be taught by Infamous, Must know storm release.

Same thing here, questions too ^.^
 
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