We'll start with Ender's Game. Analyze it for me. Any loopholes?
(Raiton: Endā no gēmu)- Lightning Release: Ender's Game
Rank: B
Type: Defensive/Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user fires a normal bolt of Raiton chakra into the sky inducing slight storm clouds. This initial bolt of lightning then becomes charged using the clouds as an incubator. Then, in the same or next turn the user 'calls' the lightning strike to his position with a simple hand seal. The return strike has a full 5 meter radius in a 360 range of the epicenter, the user. It may appear to engulf the user but in fact it is various tendrils of Raiton raining down in a cage like manner leaving the user and center unscathed for approximately 8 seconds straight. The 'bars' are so close together it looks like a single bolt had hit. If caught in the walls the opponent would experience intense lightning damage and pain leaving the muscles in spastic intervals throughout the turn afflicted.
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Notes:
- Can only be taught by Zaph
- Cannot perform any other Raiton techniques during the turn initialized
- Can only be used 3x per match
This is like that attack from pokemon "future sight" or some shit like that, I can't remember. Anyways, you attack the opponent in that same turn or in the next one, which should surprise the target.
Well thats close but jeez .__. You don't attack the opponent, it's a defense/supplimentary move, so if the opponent attacks you he would be at a disadvantage..
(Kenjutsu/Fuuton: Katto no Arashi) -Sword Style/Wind Release: Storm of Cuts
Rank: B
Type: Defensive/Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user positions himself , then after forming a one handed hand sign he forms a slight whirlwind around him using his Fuuton chakra he throws his sword counter clockwise, allowing it to ride the currents it spins rapidly while revolving around the user 6-8 times. During these revolutions the sword is granted immense Fuuton aided cutting power, capable of slicing Doton techniques B ranked and below clean in two, after which the user will simply snatch it from the air. The sword itself moves so fast it is capable of repelling thrown weapons and up to medium sized objects. It can't be tracked by normal eye and the user may appear to 'repel' objects within 5 feet of the his position. During the jutsu the user has no access to the sword but can freely move around allowing the vortex to follow keeping the user in the eye at all times. The user is free to mold chakra can also perform this while airborne as he falls.
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Note:
-Can only be taught by Zaphkiel
-Can only be done 4x per match