[CJ] CJ lesson with Darui

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(Ranton: Tyrael Kuo tengoku)- Storm Release: Tyrael's High Heaven
Type: Supplementary-Offense-Defense
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user will gather a vast amount of storm chakra and release it on the surface of the user's back. Lasers will erect out from the user's back, as they are being pushed outward the user will divide the lasers into three on each side of the users back, so overall six lasers will appear from out of the user's back, each equivalent to that of C-Rank power individually, full contact by all six tentacles would be equivalent to S-Rank. These laser were shaped like blue glowing tentacles, always gently swaying in the air, making the movement of the tentacles difficult to track for which tentacle can attack the opponent(s) due to the unpredictable movement the tentacles possess (does not fool a dojutsu user and certain sensory users). Each tentacle very from size, mostly the tentacles located closer to the opponents head are much more longer (2 meters) while the tentacles located around the lower back are smaller in size (500 cm). The tentacles being made completely energy based storm chakra and condensed heavily of storm chakra but remains extremely fluid and wavy, but does have a certain tangibility. This means the tentacles area easily able to be used to grab onto the opponent or different objects and shock them severely completely dismantling them. The damage produced from the tentacles very from how long the opponent touched the tentacles, a slight touch can cause numbness but complete impact upon the tentacles can harm the opponent and even paralyze their physical movements. What makes the tentacles most unique is how easily they can be controlled by the user through his own will, each tentacle is like an extension of the user, another limb so to say, where he/she is able to control the tentacles with ease and fluidity. This means the user can use them form a barricade around the user or swipe at the opponent to deliver impact damage. However when the user is taking control of the tentacles whether for defensive purposes or offensive purposes, one would need to remain focus, so as they are being used the user would be unable to perform techniques when actively used. Another basic drawback is, the tentacles can not be used to move along the ground or grab earth like objects, the storm chakra will act to destroy the earth making its mobility useless, so the user will always be standing up when using this technique or somehow keep balance but not with the tentacles themselves.

Note: Can only be used once
Note: Stays on the field for three turns
Note: User can only use earth and fire jutsus A-Rank and below when the jutsu is active
Note: After the jutsu deactivates, the user can not use storm jutsus above A-Rank for two turns
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This one I explain dramatically within the description. The tentacles are fluid and its great when used in conjunction with close range fighting. Tentacles are like your limbs you can attack and defend with em, the limit to this jutsu is mainly your creativity and the logic behind storm and length of each tentacle.

(Ranton: Kumono Ware)-Storm Release: Cloud Cracking
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description The user will send storm chakra towards any construct that is made of metal like substances (Kunais, shurikens,etc) this also includes normal swords, special swords like a CW for example will not be effected. This also effects Paper (Explosive Tags for example) like substances, though this does not effect paper ninjutsu. The user will channel storm chakra around the constructs, using the water vapor in the air they will wet the constructs then a electrical charge due to the storm chakra will appear on the constructs. What happens to the construct is since the water part will force the constructs to weaken, the paper is naturally weak to water. Also metal will weaken and rust the metal due to the chakra infused storm weakening it. The lighting portion will then tear through the constructs rendering them useless.
- Can only be used 3 times in a battle
- Can not use Storm release jutsus the same turn as this one
- Must have mastery over Storm Release

This one will be updated and enhanced in the future, I will be sure to tell you this. I'm also going to make a more powerful counterpart. Anyway its purpose is to destroy things like paper tags and kunais. In the update gonna make this C-Rank to and make sure I add some other things it should do. Its great to use against large scale paper tag attacks and those pesky kunais, ya know the ones that are usually tagged? *Cough Cough*

(Ranton: sh no chuushutsu)- Storm Release: Limb extraction
Type: offensive-Supplementary-Defense
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: A very dangerous short range technique. The user by channeling storm chakra towards area of bone on the users body and releases the storm chakra in the direction the bone is aiming. So if the elbow of the left arm for example is facing upward towards the oppopents chest, the storm will be released in that direction towards the opponent chest. The storm chakra is concentrated but not sharp it can shock the area hit. So if an opponent is touched by the chakra an electrical shock is sent to the opponent which can severely harm them, this shock is also precise enough to tear through normal armor and normal metal. The storm chakra stays connected to the user and can reach up to 5 meters in length. Its color is bright blue. Note chakra is not molded in the bone but simply uses the bones as a medium to direct the storm chakra.
- Using this jutsu counts towards the turn slot so releasing the storm chakra more then once will count towards move slot
- Can only be used a total of 5 times in battle
- Must have mastery of storm release

A close range battle type jutsu. I actually think this would be awesome used with high heaven. Anyway its mainly to release a spike from limbs of the body. Knuckles, Knee, Shoulders, etc. As you can see I got inspiration mainly from the kaguya clan so that is its main purpose.

Any questions say so, if not your turn.
 

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Quite basic, its nothing amazing. Can obviously be tracked but won't be evaded under normal physical movements, but that is how it suppose to be. I guess you can say they have the same speed of storm release: laser circus.
If no more questions, its you're turn
 

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Sorry for the late response but for the second one, can it be used to douse elemental attack from a normal sword. Example: if I use cloud style flame smash, would it put the fire out?
 

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Sadly no, hence why I need to update it and make a separate jutsu for it. (You will be taught of course)

But it works only for construct alone. The update will be vast on it so it will be expanded and the rank lowered. Until then this alone is all we got.
 

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(Ranton: Mugen Doragon Arashi)-Storm Release: Infinite Dragon Storm
Type:Attack
Rank:S
Range:Short-Long
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:80
Description: The user sends their raiton and suiton chakras into the sky above. Then the user manipulates the sky, causing clouds to form. A water dragon is formed and is infused with lightning. The user sends this water dragon down upon the opponent. I The dragon can split into several heads, allowing for more succession of attack. Upon contact, the dragon engulfs the opponent, drowning them, while continuously shocking them, before spitting them out.
Note: Usable 1 time a battle
Note: No Storm Techniques for the following turn
Note: Dragon is about as big a Kirin, but not nearly as fast
Note: Must be taught by McAfeezy

This one is just like Kirin, albeit the sequence leading up to it's release is faster. It can split into several heads.

(Ranton: Katana no za Arashi) Storm Release: Sword of the Storm
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points: 40
Description: Darui focuses Ranton Chakra around his blade (in a similar fashion as Asuma did with his Futon Chakra on his Chakra Blades), which forms a small whirlwind around his blade. This whirlwind lets Darui cancel one B-rank Suiton/Raiton. This is because the whirlwind would blow the incoming attacks away. He can also use it to empower his kenjutsu attacks.
Note: Can only be taught by Wesobi
Note: Can only be used 2 times per battle
Note: Stays active for 2 turns if no move is deflected.
Note: the defensive power of this jutsu will only be able to cancel an attack if it is within short range of Darui.

Pretty self explanatory
 

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Alright, I got it ;D thanks for the trade and when I get more approved/updated I'll hit you up to re-start the thread. Until we meet again -_O
 

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Analyze and questions

9. (Ranton: Ryujin Sankuchuari)- Storm release: Ryujin's Tear
Type: Defense
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: The user will gather their storm chakra and by performing one hand seal (Dragon), by directing their storm chakra towards certain elemental constructs or attack that are mainly considered weak to storm the user will manipulate the water vapor, which are around the battlefield, to begin to morph and manipulate a cloud, the cloud appears as if fluffs and pieces of clouds appear around the technique. Quickly the user will then channel their lightning chakra to fuse with the water vapor to create a full blown storm cloud. Appearing black in color with light blue electricity running along the cloud with fierce speed. This jutsu is used mainly for a defensive ability, an example can be used for, as explained above, elements that are weak to the element storm (as well as basic ninjutsu that revolve around chakra alone). When used against earthen material the storm the water from the storm will cause the earth material to crumble and slightly slow down, the lightning portion will then take advantage of this and completely rip through the material of earth rendering it useless. Fire would easily be doused by the storm cloud due to retaining a large sum of water. This cloud has no attacking ability against the opponent themselves, and simply act to render the techniques useless before the cloud disperse out of harms way (In one turn). The storm cloud's maximum size is proportional to the size of the technique it is negating, (Such as Great Golem) the compressed chakra will still be able to negate the chakra rendering the techniques useless and out of harms way. The storm cloud is able to appear anywhere around the terrain; by allowing the storm cloud to feed off of the water vapor in the air to create the storm cloud (since storm release has water part of the elemental KG, we have seen this happen in the canon list), we have seen similar transactions happen where clouds appear out of the air (e.g. Storm Release: Thunder Cloud Inner Wave). This technique is best used against elements weak against storm (KG and CE included). However due to its rank, it can also be used against certain elements that could be naturally weak to storm but depending upon the rank of the actual technique, the storm clouds might still be able to have access and destroy the technique (e.g. S-Rank storm = A-Rank wind, so just enough to negate the technique).

Note: Can only be used three times
Note: Must have storm mastery
Note: Follows elemental strength and weakness
Note: Can only make one storm cloud at a time
Note: Can only be taught by Noni
 
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