CJ lesson with Bluephenix
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BluePhenix
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*Appears in a puff of smoke*
Erm, what were you thanking me for? Oh yeah, you asked me to teach you Doom Flight, right?
Erm, what were you thanking me for? Oh yeah, you asked me to teach you Doom Flight, right?
BluePhenix
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Well then, let's get started. Start by reading this scroll.
*Summons a scroll and hands it to you*
As you can see, this is an advanced technique where you will project a great amount of your chakra in a very fast and strenuous way. To be able to do so, you must have some predisposition like not having used any other doton jutsu immediately prior to using Doom Flight, nor will you be able to use any other doton jutsu immediately after it due to a temporary state of drain and fatigue. This is why you cannot use any other doton jutsu in the same turn as Doom Flight.
Let's continue with a demonstration.
*Summons a training dummy in close range and performs Doom Flight on it. The dummy is teared from the ground and carried high in the sky before flipping and free falling head first and crashing heavily due to the weight of pillars imprisoning it.*
Now please explain and demonstrate what you've learned of this jutsu so far.
*Summons a second training dummy in short range distance from you*
The jutsu
Now the reason I like this is it works a lot with combinations in trapping the opponent which forces them to have to focus their attention on the task at hand which will be the pillars binding them and trying to evade the rock section. This can allow me to anticipate what they will do to evade the jutsu so when they are not focused on me I can easily send multiple attacks preventing them further in trying to escape. This jutsu has great brute force, binding the opponent with two S-rank pillars is no short of powerful, an S-Rank lightning jutsu would be the only thing to use to not overpower it but at the least negate the jutsu from being used. So you will always be on the offensive.
I have one question...how long do I have to maintain focus on the jutsu? Like for example I would understand I need to remain focus to have the pillars rise and bind the opponent...also to send the ground in the air. After I send it in the air can I go to another jutsu for a combo? Sorry if I worded it badly >_> I've been typing all day.
I gather my doton chakra around my body and channel the doton chakra around the area of the dummy covering a 5 meter radius. I manipulate the ground on each flank of the dummy to rise two large pillars that act to bind the dummy. Then still remaining focus using large amount of force I have the ground rise up into the air along with the dummy exactly 20 meters high into the ground. I then release my focus and have the ground crash back down completely destroying the dummy.
Now the reason I like this is it works a lot with combinations in trapping the opponent which forces them to have to focus their attention on the task at hand which will be the pillars binding them and trying to evade the rock section. This can allow me to anticipate what they will do to evade the jutsu so when they are not focused on me I can easily send multiple attacks preventing them further in trying to escape. This jutsu has great brute force, binding the opponent with two S-rank pillars is no short of powerful, an S-Rank lightning jutsu would be the only thing to use to not overpower it but at the least negate the jutsu from being used. So you will always be on the offensive.
I have one question...how long do I have to maintain focus on the jutsu? Like for example I would understand I need to remain focus to have the pillars rise and bind the opponent...also to send the ground in the air. After I send it in the air can I go to another jutsu for a combo? Sorry if I worded it badly >_> I've been typing all day.
I gather my doton chakra around my body and channel the doton chakra around the area of the dummy covering a 5 meter radius. I manipulate the ground on each flank of the dummy to rise two large pillars that act to bind the dummy. Then still remaining focus using large amount of force I have the ground rise up into the air along with the dummy exactly 20 meters high into the ground. I then release my focus and have the ground crash back down completely destroying the dummy.
BluePhenix
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Like most jutsus, once it's launched you won't be linked to it anymore. So you won't be able to alter it's trajectory or anything else that isn't in its initial command. So yes, you can chain another jutsu right after the pillars are launched from the ground, and as long as restrictions are respected.
Now for your demonstration, take a moment to let your doton chakra stabilize and then try it again. Repeat until you have better timing. You must force out more chakra such that it reaches your opponent's position immediately, like a decibel peak on a sound meter. Molding it into two sturdy pillars that intertwines comes along. Also, make the binding tighter. Other than that, keep up the good work. ^^
Okay thanks, I'll try harder.
As my teacher instructed, I must do this jutsu faster ...then very well
I gather my doton chakra and once again as before I channel it towards a 5 meter radius covering the dummies position. I allow it to stabilize for a second just to get ready, and in a explosive burst I have two pillars rise from each flank binding the dummy while at the same time the ground rips up off the surface and I hurl it into the air. I crashes back down destroying the dummy.
Better
?
As my teacher instructed, I must do this jutsu faster ...then very well
I gather my doton chakra and once again as before I channel it towards a 5 meter radius covering the dummies position. I allow it to stabilize for a second just to get ready, and in a explosive burst I have two pillars rise from each flank binding the dummy while at the same time the ground rips up off the surface and I hurl it into the air. I crashes back down destroying the dummy.
Better
?
BluePhenix
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*Demonstrate again*Okay thanks, I'll try harder.
As my teacher instructed, I must do this jutsu faster ...then very well
I gather my doton chakra and once again as before I channel it towards a 5 meter radius covering the dummies position. I allow it to stabilize for a second just to get ready, and in a explosive burst I have two pillars rise from each flank binding the dummy while at the same time the ground rips up off the surface and I hurl it into the air. I crashes back down destroying the dummy.
Better
When you stomp the ground, you use that contact point to brutally expel your gathered doton chakra out of your body and through the earth. It rushes towards the opponent in two streams that erupts around him in the form of pillars. As they do so, they also close in on him in the shape of an helix and once he is captured, he is carried away. Don't lose time on molding your chakra into a 5 meter radius of earth or by allowing stabilization, it all happens by the time you stomp the ground. That jutsu aims at an immediate capture, so work in that way.
Now do it again.
I gather my doton chakra, stomping the ground and release the gather chakra with pace towards the dummy in two streams that erupts around him in the form of pillars. The pillars then come into the dummy and binds them, the moment they bind the dummy and in an instant rises with force I have the ground tear off rise and throw it up into the air, then the section of ground crashes back down to earth.
BluePhenix
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It's shaping up. Keep practicing some more.
*Performs Doom Flight one last time as demonstration. Stomps the ground to push my doton chakra at high speed, making it immediately sprout around the dummy in the form of two sturdy pillars. As the pillars keep growing out of the ground, they do so in an elliptical movement such that they look like an helix which tightens on the dummy to bind him. Since the dummy is bound by the pillars, it gets dragged by them for the rest of their course. Finally, when the pillars have reached their size limit (i.e. 2-2.5 meters in the case of a normal human opponent, otherwise it varies to successfully capture opponents of any other sizes) they detach from the ground and continue towards the sky. Note that the sprouting, growing, intertwining and take-off of the pillars all happens in one singular, fast and swift movement. There is no pause whatsoever to switch from one phase to another. You stomp and they carry away your opponent, simple as that.*
With my doton chakra stable, Lancer stomps his foot on the ground pushing the chakra out at high speeds which makes 2 pillars rise from each flank of the dummy as the pillars keep growing out of the ground, they do so in an elliptical movement such that they look like an helix which tightens on the dummy to binding him. They bind the dummy in the instant and when they go full length of 2 meters it rises all up in one quick motion and pull off from the ground the moment captured and free falls back down.
I'm really trying sorry man :/
I'm really trying sorry man :/
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BluePhenix
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Don't sweat it, you're doing better. Now practice some more till the sun sets.
*Goes for a nap under the shape of a tree*
I can't believe this dude went to sleep <_<
I'm tempted to try this on him >_>
*sets up dummy in the right spot*
Alright lets do this!
Lancer gathers his doton chakra and stomps his foot on the ground releasing it forward in a hurry towards the dummy which in turns rises two pillars that in the moment they erect they already begin to take shape around the dummy looking similar to a helix. As the pillars have fully erected and bind the opponent the ground rips off the surface and hurls in the sky which free form crashes back down to the earth.
Does this 10 more times :|
WAKE UP !
I'm tempted to try this on him >_>
*sets up dummy in the right spot*
Alright lets do this!
Lancer gathers his doton chakra and stomps his foot on the ground releasing it forward in a hurry towards the dummy which in turns rises two pillars that in the moment they erect they already begin to take shape around the dummy looking similar to a helix. As the pillars have fully erected and bind the opponent the ground rips off the surface and hurls in the sky which free form crashes back down to the earth.
Does this 10 more times :|
WAKE UP !
BluePhenix
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*Drooling and sleep-talking*
Oh yeah... you really know what turns me on... that's it baby... more cheese on the ham...
*Snaps out of sleep*
Huh, what? Wat!?
*Calms down, and turns to Ekitei who was camouflaged on the tree and watching you all the time*
Hey Ekitei, how did he do?
Silly human went at it real hard. He's good now, give him a rest.
*Turns to you*
Alright, that concludes the training. You have successfully learned the Doom Flight. Keep using it in combat until you perfectly master it.
I know someone else who was 'at it' 'real hard'.
Huh? Oh shut up and go away, Ekitei! Jeez, don't listen to him. He likes to make up stuffs. Well then, now that we're done here, I'm going too. Cya!
*Disappears in a puff of smoke*