[CJ] CJ Lesson with Andrej

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Alright,I'll take this one if it is ok.

(Doton: Ōkami no Fukkō)- Earth Release: Wolves Reconstruction
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A (depends on the technique)
Description: The user will gather their earth chakra and manipulate it so it activates an ability (instant activation due to it being stand alone, and does not grant ability until another tech is used that works with it), where certain structures of earth techniques; when protruded from the ground, out of the user's body or from the sky, will have mud infused into the body of the structure, as a passive ability when being released (still costs a move to activate). What this means is the structure of earth will have the same appearance physically but instead of being completely solid will have a substantial amount of mud inside its physical structure masking its appearance from the opponent's view (will not fool certain dojutsus and sensory). The structure will be able to remain stable since the mud will be compressed and its body structure will still be solid allowing it to remain its base of movement and operation. This technique takes on the basic earth jutsu Earth Release: Mud Wolves and expands on it. What will occur, when the users earth techniques are destroyed, the mud will forcefully erect out and reform to take the shape of the previous technique. The mud can reform specific parts of the earth structure, or its whole body, but can only be used once, both for the body and body-parts. The mud will reform the technique as soon as the initial reason of the previous techniques destruction is finished. Meaning, the moment a projectile technique that had destroyed the users original technique bypasses, the mud will begin to jump out and reform, if the technique used to destroy the technique was streaming based, the mud will once again move around/over the streaming tech and reform. The creation of the technique back is passive, just the the original technique of the mud wolves. The technique will then now be slightly weaker (one rank less) then before, and lose certain amount of its stability/hardness, it still has brute force damage of mud, and can engulf the opponent entirely. This technique applies to logical ones that can co-exist with it, obviously any earth-based technique can be used from it, and with different sizes (as small as spikes, or as big as Golems), the mud will also remain to have the same basic ability and movement that the previous technique had.

Note: Can only be taught by Noni
Note: Can only be used two times
Note: Requires two turn cool down before re-use
Note: Must have earth mastery
Note: Reformation is done only once per technique
Note: Activation lasts three turns, can be turned off any time
Note: Can only be applied to earth techniques with solidity, and that erect from the ground
Note: Can only be used on A-Rank and below earth techniques
 

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Sure, if you have any questions shoot.

Here are the ones I'd like.

(Katon:Hitoshirenu Hisaki):Fire release:Hidden Flames
Type:Supplementary
Rank:C
Range:Short
Chakra cost:20
Damage: (15 whenever it's steped on)
Description:The user spits out tiny bearly visible sparks to the ground. They will continue to burn as tiny flame sparks almost invisible. If anybody steps on a spark it would engulf the persons feet/legs/lower body in a sudden burst of flames.

(Katon:Ume no Kaki)- Fire release:Rope of fire
Type:Attack
Rank:B
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra:20
Damage:40
Description:The user will exhale a condensed fireball the size of about the humans stomack into the air above him.Then he will attach a rope of chakra from his fingers to the fireball and once he does that he will be able to swing the fireball around as a mace.The fireball upon impact with an solid object will explode in a sudden burst of flames,big enough to engulf someones whole body in fire.
~Note:Can be used twice per battle.
~Note:The user must wait 2 turns before using it again

(Katon:Fudou Faia Bakudan)- Fire release:Floating Fire Mines
Type:Attack
Rank:B
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra:20
Damage:40
Description:The user will perform the Tiger hand seal and exhale a medium sized fireball a little more than half the size of the Great fireball technique into the air a little above him and his opponent but closer to the opponent.The fireball when it is close to the opponent will split into around 12 fire orbs the size of a coconut wich would float around the opponent in mid air.If the fireball comes in contact with an solid object it will explode and also detonate the other mines around.The fire orbs are like the Exploding Flame Shots so they can't engulf someone in flames but cause damage to him by exploding.
~Note:Can be used twice per battle.
~Note:The user must wait 2 turns before using it again
~Note:If the orbs don't explode thay can remain on the battlefield for one moreturn.
~Note:No S rank fire techniques the same turn this is used.

(Senbon Kusa)-Grass Senbon
Type:Atack
Rank: D
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra:10
Damage:20
Description:The user sends his chakra into the grass near him and hardens it.After that the user would be able to fire the hardened grass from the ground like senbons at the oponent.
~Note:Can be only used on terrains with short grass.
 

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(Fuuton:Senpuku Senbon)-Wind Release:Whirlwind Needles
Type:Attack
Rank:A
Range:Mid
Chakra:30
Damage:60
Description:The user will perform a single hand seal and exhale his wind chakra into his into his hand.The exhaled chakra will continue to flow around the users hand.Then the user will slash through the air horizontaly with the hand in wich he had exhaled his wind chakra to and launch dozens of sharp wind senbons from the pattern he had slashed the air.
~Note:No A rank or above wind technqiues in the same turn.
~Note:Can be used twice per battle.


Is this fine? If so, I have no questions, all simple techs :p
 
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