[CJ Lesson] Kryptiic & Erzo

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This thread will be used for all Custom Jutsu that we decide to trade/give each other, now and in the future.

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Who is learning what? Tell me so I don't teach them to more than 6 people. x_x
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1- (Katon: Nibai Batsu) Fire Release: Double attack
Type: Attack
Range: Short - Mid
Rank: A
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user concentrates his Katon chakra and slams his hands into the ground releasing the fire chakra where it then comes out from his opponents side (3 meters away from each of the opponents side) the fire then forms into two hawks -each roughly the size of the hawk sasuke summoned against danzo- to come out and shoot off towards the opponents location from both his sides (his left and right side) trapping the opponent in the center of the attack. Upon collision with each other and the opponent in the middle of them, the birds explode and create a giant fire viciously burning the opponent between them. These birds can shoot out of the ground to a maximum height of 3 meters before clashing with each other and exploding.
Note: Can be used 3 times.
Note: No S-rank Fire in same turn and previous turn
Note: After using it once, must wait another turn before using it again.

Alright now, concentrate your fire chakra in your palms and slam your hands against the ground, as you slam your hands down, send your fire chakra into the ground and release it from two points. Those points will be to the right and left of your opponent, once that's done use shape manipulation to turn that fire into the shape of a hawk which is roughly the same size as the one summoned by sasuke against Danzo. Make it so that the birds are made 3 meters to the left and right of the opponent and launch off into the direction of each other, colliding in the middle and resulting in a massive explosion, burning whoever is in the middle viciously.

2- (Raiton: Tori Dageki) Lightning Release: Bird Strike
Type: Attack/Supplementary
Range: Short - Mid
Rank: A
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user concentrates his lightning chakra in the the sky in the area behind his opponent and uses shape manipulation to create a hawk -which is the same size as the one summoned by sasuke against danzo- the hawk then flies downwards at an angle towards the opponent with its extremely sharp beak pointed at the opponents neck area/upper back aiming to piercing him from behind. After peircing the opponent the bird disperses in all areas short range from it acting like chidori nagashi and paralyzing any opponent(s) within its vicinity. If needed the user can disperse the bird before it pierces the opponent so that the opponent(s) are only paralyzed.
Note: Can only be used 3 times.
Note: No S-rank lightning same turn and previous turn
Note: After using it once, must wait another turn before using it again.


Alright, for the next jutsu, I want you to gather your lightning chakra and release it into the sky behind your opponent, I then want you to call that lightning down whilst using shape manipulation to convert the lightning into the shape of a hawk, the hawk would strike your opponents upper back/lower neck area, or you can disperse it and use it like chidori nagashi so that it paralyzes your opponent before it strikes them, leaving them open for you to attack.
 

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1- (Katon: Nibai Batsu) Fire Release: Double attack
Type: Attack
Range: Short - Mid
Rank: A
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user concentrates his Katon chakra and slams his hands into the ground releasing the fire chakra where it then comes out from his opponents side (3 meters away from each of the opponents side) the fire then forms into two hawks -each roughly the size of the hawk sasuke summoned against danzo- to come out and shoot off towards the opponents location from both his sides (his left and right side) trapping the opponent in the center of the attack. Upon collision with each other and the opponent in the middle of them, the birds explode and create a giant fire viciously burning the opponent between them. These birds can shoot out of the ground to a maximum height of 3 meters before clashing with each other and exploding.
Note: Can be used 3 times.
Note: No S-rank Fire in same turn and previous turn
Note: After using it once, must wait another turn before using it again.

Alright now, concentrate your fire chakra in your palms and slam your hands against the ground, as you slam your hands down, send your fire chakra into the ground and release it from two points. Those points will be to the right and left of your opponent, once that's done use shape manipulation to turn that fire into the shape of a hawk which is roughly the same size as the one summoned by sasuke against Danzo. Make it so that the birds are made 3 meters to the left and right of the opponent and launch off into the direction of each other, colliding in the middle and resulting in a massive explosion, burning whoever is in the middle viciously.

2- (Raiton: Tori Dageki) Lightning Release: Bird Strike
Type: Attack/Supplementary
Range: Short - Mid
Rank: A
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user concentrates his lightning chakra in the the sky in the area behind his opponent and uses shape manipulation to create a hawk -which is the same size as the one summoned by sasuke against danzo- the hawk then flies downwards at an angle towards the opponent with its extremely sharp beak pointed at the opponents neck area/upper back aiming to piercing him from behind. After peircing the opponent the bird disperses in all areas short range from it acting like chidori nagashi and paralyzing any opponent(s) within its vicinity. If needed the user can disperse the bird before it pierces the opponent so that the opponent(s) are only paralyzed.
Note: Can only be used 3 times.
Note: No S-rank lightning same turn and previous turn
Note: After using it once, must wait another turn before using it again.


Alright, for the next jutsu, I want you to gather your lightning chakra and release it into the sky behind your opponent, I then want you to call that lightning down whilst using shape manipulation to convert the lightning into the shape of a hawk, the hawk would strike your opponents upper back/lower neck area, or you can disperse it and use it like chidori nagashi so that it paralyzes your opponent before it strikes them, leaving them open for you to attack.
(Katon: Nibai Batsu) Fire Release: Double attack
Type: Attack
Range: Short - Mid
Rank: A
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user concentrates his Katon chakra and slams his hands into the ground releasing the fire chakra where it then comes out from his opponents side (3 meters away from each of the opponents side) the fire then forms into two hawks -each roughly the size of the hawk sasuke summoned against danzo- to come out and shoot off towards the opponents location from both his sides (his left and right side) trapping the opponent in the center of the attack. Upon collision with each other and the opponent in the middle of them, the birds explode and create a giant fire viciously burning the opponent between them. These birds can shoot out of the ground to a maximum height of 3 meters before clashing with each other and exploding.
Note: Can be used 3 times.
Note: No S-rank Fire in same turn and previous turn
Note: After using it once, must wait another turn before using it again.

I begin moulding fire chakra in both hands, making sure they have all the properties of fire. Once moulded I slam my hands on the ground and release the chakra all through the earth, making it travel to your clone. I separate the chakra in two and have them sectioned off to the left and right of your clone. Once done I make the chakra emerge from the ground on either side of your clone as fire. Using shape manipulation I shape the fire into two hawks, similar to that of Sasuke's hawk in size. They then charge at the clone and upon collision with each other explode into a frenzy of fire.

Question: Does it have to be made to the left and right, or can it be made front and back?

When it travels into the air upwards and explodes, how far does the explosion go? For example if they explode after the 3 meters will the explosion carry onto short range from the collision?


(Raiton: Tori Dageki) Lightning Release: Bird Strike
Type: Attack/Supplementary
Range: Short - Mid
Rank: A
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user concentrates his lightning chakra in the the sky in the area behind his opponent and uses shape manipulation to create a hawk -which is the same size as the one summoned by sasuke against danzo- the hawk then flies downwards at an angle towards the opponent with its extremely sharp beak pointed at the opponents neck area/upper back aiming to piercing him from behind. After peircing the opponent the bird disperses in all areas short range from it acting like chidori nagashi and paralyzing any opponent(s) within its vicinity. If needed the user can disperse the bird before it pierces the opponent so that the opponent(s) are only paralyzed.
Note: Can only be used 3 times.
Note: No S-rank lightning same turn and previous turn
Note: After using it once, must wait another turn before using it again.

I start by gathering lightning chakra in my body and start sending it up into the sky, behind your clone. I then create lightning using the chakra and shape it into a giant hawk, the same size as the one Sasuke summoned. I control it to fly at the clone at fast speeds, as as it nears it directs its beak to the back of the clone. Upon impact it disperses into uncontrolled lightning that paralyses the clone if it isn't dead.
 

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(Katon: Nibai Batsu) Fire Release: Double attack
Type: Attack
Range: Short - Mid
Rank: A
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user concentrates his Katon chakra and slams his hands into the ground releasing the fire chakra where it then comes out from his opponents side (3 meters away from each of the opponents side) the fire then forms into two hawks -each roughly the size of the hawk sasuke summoned against danzo- to come out and shoot off towards the opponents location from both his sides (his left and right side) trapping the opponent in the center of the attack. Upon collision with each other and the opponent in the middle of them, the birds explode and create a giant fire viciously burning the opponent between them. These birds can shoot out of the ground to a maximum height of 3 meters before clashing with each other and exploding.
Note: Can be used 3 times.
Note: No S-rank Fire in same turn and previous turn
Note: After using it once, must wait another turn before using it again.

I begin moulding fire chakra in both hands, making sure they have all the properties of fire. Once moulded I slam my hands on the ground and release the chakra all through the earth, making it travel to your clone. I separate the chakra in two and have them sectioned off to the left and right of your clone. Once done I make the chakra emerge from the ground on either side of your clone as fire. Using shape manipulation I shape the fire into two hawks, similar to that of Sasuke's hawk in size. They then charge at the clone and upon collision with each other explode into a frenzy of fire.

Question: Does it have to be made to the left and right, or can it be made front and back?

When it travels into the air upwards and explodes, how far does the explosion go? For example if they explode after the 3 meters will the explosion carry onto short range from the collision?


(Raiton: Tori Dageki) Lightning Release: Bird Strike
Type: Attack/Supplementary
Range: Short - Mid
Rank: A
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user concentrates his lightning chakra in the the sky in the area behind his opponent and uses shape manipulation to create a hawk -which is the same size as the one summoned by sasuke against danzo- the hawk then flies downwards at an angle towards the opponent with its extremely sharp beak pointed at the opponents neck area/upper back aiming to piercing him from behind. After peircing the opponent the bird disperses in all areas short range from it acting like chidori nagashi and paralyzing any opponent(s) within its vicinity. If needed the user can disperse the bird before it pierces the opponent so that the opponent(s) are only paralyzed.
Note: Can only be used 3 times.
Note: No S-rank lightning same turn and previous turn
Note: After using it once, must wait another turn before using it again.

I start by gathering lightning chakra in my body and start sending it up into the sky, behind your clone. I then create lightning using the chakra and shape it into a giant hawk, the same size as the one Sasuke summoned. I control it to fly at the clone at fast speeds, as as it nears it directs its beak to the back of the clone. Upon impact it disperses into uncontrolled lightning that paralyses the clone if it isn't dead.
*Ignores the spam* x.x

Yes, only left and right since that's the way I made it. >.>
As for the explosion, I haven't stated it goes out to short range so the answer will be no. -.-
 

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Begin channeling wind chakra into either one of your hands and release it. As it's released use shape manipulation to form it into a spinning disk of wind, two meters in diameter. Next, slam the hand onto the ground so that the disk enters the ground and begins slicing through it towards my clone. Make it shoot out of the ground in front or behind my clone.

Fūton: Kakusareta Burēdo| Wind Release: Hidden Blade
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user creates a disk of spinning wind in one of their hands, the disk being two meters in diameter. Once it is formed the user slams that hand onto the ground and the disk spins so fast that it can easily slice through the earth, creating slight tremors as it slices. The user directs it to the opponent and when it's close makes the disk shoot out from the ground either in front or behind the opponent. The disk can only travel to mid range while travelling through the ground. When the disk is underground a soft humming sound can be heard and when it re-emerges a loud whizing sound can be heard. When the disk is shot out from the ground it is equivalent to a B rank jutsu.

Restrictions
- Only usable three times per match
- No wind jutsu above A rank in the same turn
- Can only be taught by Kryptiic
 

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Begin channeling wind chakra into either one of your hands and release it. As it's released use shape manipulation to form it into a spinning disk of wind, two meters in diameter. Next, slam the hand onto the ground so that the disk enters the ground and begins slicing through it towards my clone. Make it shoot out of the ground in front or behind my clone.

Fūton: Kakusareta Burēdo| Wind Release: Hidden Blade
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user creates a disk of spinning wind in one of their hands, the disk being two meters in diameter. Once it is formed the user slams that hand onto the ground and the disk spins so fast that it can easily slice through the earth, creating slight tremors as it slices. The user directs it to the opponent and when it's close makes the disk shoot out from the ground either in front or behind the opponent. The disk can only travel to mid range while travelling through the ground. When the disk is underground a soft humming sound can be heard and when it re-emerges a loud whizing sound can be heard. When the disk is shot out from the ground it is equivalent to a B rank jutsu.

Restrictions
- Only usable three times per match
- No wind jutsu above A rank in the same turn
- Can only be taught by Kryptiic
*I begin to channel my wind chakra into my right hand and once I;ve gathered a substantial amount of chakra, I release it, as I'm releasing it, I use shape manipulation to form it into a spinning disk of wind which is roughly 2m in diameter. I then go on to slam my hand down onto the ground making the disk enter the ground and begin slicing through the Earth towards your clone, before shooting out of the ground behind your clone and striking him in the back*
 

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Excellent! Next Cj is;

Genjutsu: Zōfuku | Illusionary Arts: Amplification
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: The user performs the Monkey hand seal and places his opponent in a genjutsu. The genjutsu makes the person under it feel as if their respiratory system has been pushed to incredible limits. It makes the persons muscles feel heavy and hard to move all the while making them feel they are out of breathe all the time, just like the day after an intense workout. They also become incredibly fatigued and all movement is slowed considerably. When they try to move they will think that they are stiff around the body and their limbs. The effects gradually build up over the coarse of three turns. On the first turn the effects aren't really noticeably however the opponent does feel slightly more fatigued, the opponent will think it's only battle fatigue. The second turn they feel more fatigued, feeling stiff all around the body making them think it's harder than it really is, however it's an illusion of feeling within their body and they are able to move like they would normally would. On the third turn these effects are amplified to such a degree where they have shortness of breath and struggle to perform rapid movements, with it, making the opponent harder to concentrate. For example performing hand seals alone takes considerable time to perform as their concentration is completly over taken by the fact that they can not breathe.

Restrictions
- Only usable twice per match
- No Genjutsu in the same or next turn.
- Full effect takes three complete turns unless broken
- Genjutsu lasts 4 turns
- Can only be taught by Kryptiic

Perform the Monkey hand seal while inducing chakra into my brain. Make me think my respiratory system has been overworked and over a period of three turns the effects of it weaken. It states how badly it is increased each turn (see underlined) eventually, at the third turn, the target will feel like they can't breathe at all. This would cause them to panic and because they believe what is happening to them, pass out.
 

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*I begin to channel my wind chakra into my left hand and once I feel that I've gathered enough chakra for the task at hand, I release it, as I'm doing so, I use shape manipulation to form it into a spinning disk of wind which is roughly 2m in diameter. I then go on to palm strike the ground making the disk enter the ground and begin slicing through the Earth towards your clone, before shooting out of the ground behind your clone and striking him in the back*

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Excellent! Next Cj is;

Genjutsu: Zōfuku | Illusionary Arts: Amplification
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: The user performs the Monkey hand seal and places his opponent in a genjutsu. The genjutsu makes the person under it feel as if their respiratory system has been pushed to incredible limits. It makes the persons muscles feel heavy and hard to move all the while making them feel they are out of breathe all the time, just like the day after an intense workout. They also become incredibly fatigued and all movement is slowed considerably. When they try to move they will think that they are stiff around the body and their limbs. The effects gradually build up over the coarse of three turns. On the first turn the effects aren't really noticeably however the opponent does feel slightly more fatigued, the opponent will think it's only battle fatigue. The second turn they feel more fatigued, feeling stiff all around the body making them think it's harder than it really is, however it's an illusion of feeling within their body and they are able to move like they would normally would. On the third turn these effects are amplified to such a degree where they have shortness of breath and struggle to perform rapid movements, with it, making the opponent harder to concentrate. For example performing hand seals alone takes considerable time to perform as their concentration is completly over taken by the fact that they can not breathe.

Restrictions
- Only usable twice per match
- No Genjutsu in the same or next turn.
- Full effect takes three complete turns unless broken
- Genjutsu lasts 4 turns
- Can only be taught by Kryptiic

Perform the Monkey hand seal while inducing chakra into my brain. Make me think my respiratory system has been overworked and over a period of three turns the effects of it weaken. It states how badly it is increased each turn (see underlined) eventually, at the third turn, the target will feel like they can't breathe at all. This would cause them to panic and because they believe what is happening to them, pass out.
I perform the monkey hand seal whilst releasing my chakra and inserting it into your brain. once it's in, I put you under an illusion with makes your respiratory system feel overworked. This happens over a period of time, at first you don't notice it, but in the second turn you feel tired and fatigued, in the third turn you feel like you can't move at all, leaving you vulnerable to my attacks*
 

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I perform the monkey hand seal whilst releasing my chakra and inserting it into your brain. once it's in, I put you under an illusion with makes your respiratory system feel overworked. This happens over a period of time, at first you don't notice it, but in the second turn you feel tired and fatigued, in the third turn you feel like you can't move at all, leaving you vulnerable to my attacks*

Oh wait, I don't have gen, technique failed. :(
 

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I perform the monkey hand seal whilst releasing my chakra and inserting it into your brain. once it's in, I put you under an illusion with makes your respiratory system feel overworked. This happens over a period of time, at first you don't notice it, but in the second turn you feel tired and fatigued, in the third turn you feel like you can't move at all, leaving you vulnerable to my attacks*
Lmao at the bold. xD

Good job. Jutsu complete!

-Boots Scaze out of the thread- U_U
 

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We're back. =DD

(Genjutsu: Shinkan )- Illusion Technique: Silence
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: The user performs one hand seal and releases his chakra, inserting it into the brain of his opponent, the chakra would remain dormant until an Earth jutsu which comes from the ground is used, which will activate the genjutsu that is within the opponent like a switch. Once that happens, instead of hearing the normal sounds of the Earth braking, alerting the opponent that there may be an attack from the ground, complete silence falls upon the opponent, leaving them vulnerable to the incoming attack.
Note: Can only be used thrice.
Note: No Genjutsu next turn.

Perform one hand seal whilst releasing your chakra into my brainz and make it so that it stays dormant until you use an Earth jutsu. Once you do decide to use an Earth jutsu, coming from the ground, the genjutsu will activate and affect my sense of hearing and make everything go extremely silent making me vulnerable to anything coming from the ground!

Give it a go.
 

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(Genjutsu: Shinkan )- Illusion Technique: Silence
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: The user performs one hand seal and releases his chakra, inserting it into the brain of his opponent, the chakra would remain dormant until an Earth jutsu which comes from the ground is used, which will activate the genjutsu that is within the opponent like a switch. Once that happens, instead of hearing the normal sounds of the Earth braking, alerting the opponent that there may be an attack from the ground, complete silence falls upon the opponent, leaving them vulnerable to the incoming attack.
Note: Can only be used thrice.
Note: No Genjutsu next turn.

Perform one hand seal whilst releasing your chakra into my brainz and make it so that it stays dormant until you use an Earth jutsu. Once you do decide to use an Earth jutsu, coming from the ground, the genjutsu will activate and affect my sense of hearing and make everything go extremely silent making me vulnerable to anything coming from the ground!

Give it a go.
*Gives it a go* O_O Was it good enough? =DD

I make a hand seal and inject your ugly head with my chakra putting you under my spell. I then use an earth jutsu but you can't hear it because I have super powers.
 
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