Chronicals of Tiquan Conley Chapter 1 part 7 3 vs 1! Tziah vs the family!

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Hello guys I'm back and I'm here with the next part of my FF I hope you guys enjoy it. Again I am trying a different style of writing as I understand the last style was confusing.

In case you missed the last part here it is:

*Tziah thinking* Damn it's me and my Byakugan against dads Byakugan, Jermaine's Shadows and Jeremy's Sharingan.

"Ok before we actually start I have a question." said Tziah

"What is it?" Larry asked

"How did how did Jeremy actually get his Sharingan he isn't from mom side of the family he's from yours and your side has the Byakugan."

*All looked at Jeremy*

Well, first of all do you remember your cousin Wayne Brown?

"Yes." Tziah answered.

"Ok well as you know he was my brother in law, me and him were pretty close, and his Sharingan was well it was different, well he always said it was I'm not sure yet....but anyway it has in his will for the left eye to be implanted in me he stated that if he didn't unlock the secrets he knows I will." answered Jeremy.

"Ok I'll buy it in that case lets get started!" Tziah demanded.

"Larry yo boy always so impatient." Jermaine

"I know Maine but that's all right he gon' learn today."

*Tziah thinking*ok there is only one way I'll *be able compete with them at the same time. *hand sign* "Shadow Clone Jutsu."*

Tziah and his clones engage in battle with Larry, Jermaine and Jeremy.
However Tziah and his clones are losing the battle. Jermaine is defeating the easily with shadows. Jeremy is using his taijutsu to beat the clones. Larry is using his gentle fist on the clones and Tziah himself. Tziah and Larry battle is pretty much one sided has Larry is getting the best of Tziah.

"Tziah you will learn something's today." said Larry*

"Yeah I'm sure I will."

"Oh I know you will starting with this!" *kicks Tziah in the ribs*

"What??!!" "Ahhh!!"

"Speed is the key to any fight. Hmm even though you know the 8 trigrams 64 palms is it enough? *crouches*

"What are you talking about?" Tziah asked

" never told you the stages of the 8 trigrams did he? Oh well let's see of you can survive the next stage. 8 trigrams 128 palms!!!!"*
*Larry goes in and attacks*

Will Tziah be able to win? Is it all over for Tziah? Stay tuned to fined out.

Next time Chapter 1 part 8 Tiquan vs Kabuto

Thanks for reading. I hope you all enjoyed thanks again and have a nice day.
 
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Nicely done, you certainly improved. Keep it up, and keep that grammar in mind. Grammar/spell checkers do wonders, but they don't catch everything and don't work on dialogue at all. xd
 

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Nicely done, you certainly improved. Keep it up, and keep that grammar in mind. Grammar/spell checkers do wonders, but they don't catch everything and don't work on dialogue at all. xd
Thanks man xd

Wow this style is way more understandable it makes it look a bit long but it's good man keep up the good work.
Thx buddy
 
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