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Hello guys im back and I'm feeling great today and other blowing off some steam I feel even better so imma do something special something I've never done and that's give you two parts today and who's knows maybe three depending on later on XD
If you missed the last part here it is:
(I can now fully see the people and I can see that there two males....i think)
"Tiquan stay back these two are very dangerous."
"Who-cough-who are they?"
"The shorter one with the glasses is Kabuto he is a great medical ninja he wanted to he can shut down all of your chakra points."
"Ok and the other guy....girl....other one?"
"He is probably the most dangerous shinobi in the land his name is Orochimaru."
"Oh you remembered my name I'm honored."
"What do you want Orochimaru?"
Nothing from you Darnell."
"Huh?"(He's after Tiquan then?)
"Hmm what Lord Orochimaru is saying is we have no business with you old man, we want your grandson."
"What do want with me?"
"Lord Orochimaru has an offer for you."
"Ok what is it?"
"Tiquan*don't!"
"Hey look I got this ok?"
"You boy have lots a talent plus you have a special power that many are after, including him."
"Him?"
"Your brother....Alton!"
(Both Tiquan and grandpa Darnell) "ALTON!!!!????"
"Yes Alton Tiquan if you join me I can provide protection from Alton and these other people."
"No no no no shut up! I won't believe you! Let's go!"
"Tiquan you can't fight them alone"
"Yeah well you can't fight them alone either.(damn I must have broken ribs for my side to be hurting this bad.) Let's do this together!"
"Idiot!!! Chakra dissection blade!"(rushes at grandpa cuts right in the chest.)
Ahhhhhhh he got me direct shot dammit Tiquan it was a direct shot. Sorry your on your own till I recover."
"Now to finish it."
"Kabuto he isn't your opponent anymore the kid is focus your attacks on him, it's seems his ribs are broken."(sick smile comes over Kabuto's face.)
(Damn did I not hide it well that dosnt matter now I must fight!) (hand sign) "Multi shadow clone jutsu!, now we have the advantage!" "Attack!!"
The clones attack Kabuto he is getting the better of most of them with is chakra blade but the numbers game eventually gets to Kabuto and he is being held down by the clones.
"I only have one shot at this gotta hit this now shit I hope I remembered this correctly."(hand signs)
" Dont try that your not advance enough yet!"
"Fire style: Dragon Flame jutsu!!!"
Can Tiquan pull it off or will it be a failed attempt? Stay tuned to find out.
That it for now guys. Thanks for reading. I hope you enjoyed this as much as I did
. I may put out a third part to this later tonight. Enjoy your day. And thanks again for reading.
Next....Chapter 1 part 7: 3 vs 1! Tziah vs the family!*
Will Tziah overcome the odds? What's his strategy? Can things get worst? Find out next time.
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(I can now fully see the people and I can see that there two males....i think)
"Tiquan stay back these two are very dangerous."
"Who-cough-who are they?"
"The shorter one with the glasses is Kabuto he is a great medical ninja he wanted to he can shut down all of your chakra points."
"Ok and the other guy....girl....other one?"
"He is probably the most dangerous shinobi in the land his name is Orochimaru."
"Oh you remembered my name I'm honored."
"What do you want Orochimaru?"
Nothing from you Darnell."
"Huh?"(He's after Tiquan then?)
"Hmm what Lord Orochimaru is saying is we have no business with you old man, we want your grandson."
"What do want with me?"
"Lord Orochimaru has an offer for you."
"Ok what is it?"
"Tiquan*don't!"
"Hey look I got this ok?"
"You boy have lots a talent plus you have a special power that many are after, including him."
"Him?"
"Your brother....Alton!"
(Both Tiquan and grandpa Darnell) "ALTON!!!!????"
"Yes Alton Tiquan if you join me I can provide protection from Alton and these other people."
"No no no no shut up! I won't believe you! Let's go!"
"Tiquan you can't fight them alone"
"Yeah well you can't fight them alone either.(damn I must have broken ribs for my side to be hurting this bad.) Let's do this together!"
"Idiot!!! Chakra dissection blade!"(rushes at grandpa cuts right in the chest.)
Ahhhhhhh he got me direct shot dammit Tiquan it was a direct shot. Sorry your on your own till I recover."
"Now to finish it."
"Kabuto he isn't your opponent anymore the kid is focus your attacks on him, it's seems his ribs are broken."(sick smile comes over Kabuto's face.)
(Damn did I not hide it well that dosnt matter now I must fight!) (hand sign) "Multi shadow clone jutsu!, now we have the advantage!" "Attack!!"
The clones attack Kabuto he is getting the better of most of them with is chakra blade but the numbers game eventually gets to Kabuto and he is being held down by the clones.
"I only have one shot at this gotta hit this now shit I hope I remembered this correctly."(hand signs)
" Dont try that your not advance enough yet!"
"Fire style: Dragon Flame jutsu!!!"
Can Tiquan pull it off or will it be a failed attempt? Stay tuned to find out.
That it for now guys. Thanks for reading. I hope you enjoyed this as much as I did
. I may put out a third part to this later tonight. Enjoy your day. And thanks again for reading.Next....Chapter 1 part 7: 3 vs 1! Tziah vs the family!*
Will Tziah overcome the odds? What's his strategy? Can things get worst? Find out next time.
